ArMan Touring with Kids!! Updated pg 8!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ArMan have finally decided to go touring in Mahabaleshwar n kids are super excited especially Sacchu who has been looking forward to this trip with his parents.😛

Manav can't help smiling seeing his cute family so happy. "Ufff, finally I'm gonna spend some time with my family, my little world for whom I've sacrificing myself n neglecting them in the process. I'll make sure that this trip is the happiest trip of our life!" he promises himself.😊

The D day is finally here n as soon as they reach their hotel, Sacchu starts jumping around excitedly:

-We r going for boating in Venna lake, horse riding along the forest, swimming in that huge pool n '..

Manav, his little boy Soham in his arms looks on amusingly while Archana asks with laughter in her voice:

- - U really know how to do these stuffs Sacchu?😲

- - "No, but baba knows, my papa is a super hero, he'll teach me", replies the little boy proudly with a large grin .😃

- - "Wah Manav! aap to bare chupa rustom nikla! U know horse riding n swimming n u didn't ever tell me about it" Archana teased.😆

ArMan look at each other n burst out laughing n Manav says making a funny face:

- - Beta, I know u r very excited but remember we have to go back home in one piece. Ur aaji won't recognize us otherwise, kyun Soham, baba is right na!😆

Little Soham flashed her little teeth looking like a cute Khargosh !😃

After freshening up, they enjoy sight seeing, taking in the breathtaking vast areas of green before them, the shopping in Mahabaleeshwar's famous bazaar, boating in Venna lake...


They go back to their hotel to have a sumptuous dinner n chikki as dessert. Little Soham indulges himself eating strawberries with cream messing up his cheeks n nose.😛

Archana smiles fondly seeing Manav cleaning up the boy's face with a tissue paper.😍

When they finally reach their room, the kids are completely exhausted. Sacchu:

- - I'm so tired🥱

- - Me too beta. Mein kha kha ke thak gaya!😆

- - Oh baba, look at ur tummy! It's looking like that of grandpa ready to explode!!😆

Archana laughs n Manav pokes teasingly:

- - U see beta, baba ke intestines are so happy today that they r dancing inside. They had such a feast after such a long time. They were tired eating ur mom's kanda poha, sheera'🤣

Archana glares n Sacchu laughs n says looking at his mom:

- - Nope! my aai's food is the best; hotel's food is second best.😉

Archu gives an approval nod n takes her son to bed while a happy Manav stares lovingly at them.😃 He then cups little Soham in his arms, gives him a fat kiss n says:

- - Aaj, baba will tuck his little rabbit in bed.

When Archu returns back, Manav is in a rocking chair, his eyes closed, with a sleeping Soham in his lap. She touches his arm n he opens his sleepy eyes:

- - Sacchu soh gaya!

- - Uh huh. U tired? Let me put him in bed.

- - No, I'll do it. I'm enjoying being a daddy to my kids. I've been missing a lot these days, time for me to catch up.

He tucks Soham in bed n both look lovingly at their son. Manav whispers:

- - Don't u think he looks like me?😎

- - Yes he does! Same eyes, same nose, same hair n same naughty face😛

- - But he's got ur teeth, he looks like a cute rabbit just like his mommy when he smiles.😆😆

ArMan hug each other and go to sleep in each others' arms, a promising n happy day waiting for them n their kids.😳

This was a short fiction about ArMan n their much awaited tour in Mahabaleshwar since PR is maha boring these days n me completely exhausted playing the clown n thinking of funny threads .😆 Hope it was to ur taste.😳

I'll b honest with u ppl. I get quite nervous writing these stuffs coz this forum is so full of great writers. Very tough to match their talents.😳

Please feel free to give me ur feedback.😊

OSJ

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice thread Omshreejaanu (BTW, is this how I should address you😊)


Very nice story about ArMan's trip to Mahabaleshwar. I hope the Creatives come to this thread and get some ideas from here😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jaanu Di, Really a Nice one .I have been waiting so long to see such a ARMAN family scene.
Could visualize all of them in this scenario,
Soham cutie with his lovable Dad and Sachu dear with his lovable Mom.
Soham with Manav as manav's little fav and Sachu as archu's fav and sachu supporting his mom and such scenes would be great to watch.
And all 4 of them. 😍.

Mostly you have shown a Great Trailer for their Trip. All sounds and looks good. Hope Cvs take a look at this and plan for ARMAN's trip.


Edited by umayal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was such a cute story!!!! If only we could get to see this in the show 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you Bhalla, very nice of you. Of course u can call me Omshreejaanu😊
Umi🤗 As usual u r sweet. Thanks
@ Deepa:
Thank u dear for appreciation😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very sweet story Jaanu. I especially liked all the rabbit references to cutie Soham!

EDIT ADD: Why no grandparents on the family trip?😳 Include them also na! I don't think useless Damo would have ever taken Savita anywhere.😭
Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice story Om Shree Jaanu 👏 really liked it. Manav with his cute little Soham 😍 really waiting 4 this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aha..😍..you made manav's fans day today..😆..great..⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Very sweet story Jaanu. I especially liked all the rabbit references to cutie Soham!


EDIT ADD: Why no grandparents on the family trip?😳 Include them also na! I don't think useless Damo would have ever taken Savita anywhere.😭



Thanks Nikki.😊
Wrote it in a rush.😳 Good suggestion. Savita n Damu accompanying them would have added the desired comedy😆
Next time pukka!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u Ridda, Thanks Usha.
It really feels good that u ppl have liked it.
😃

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