'First night'- a different take (SS) - Page 3

Originally posted by: SaffyFlower

Hey Nikki babe,sorry havent had a chance to read ur detailed writing in a while ! This one was sooo cute !! U know,u wud't believe it maybe,but I was reminded of the travel by tram by Kareena and Vivek Oberoi in that movie,I dont remember its name,and its their date...they r in the tram the whole nite long,and chat,chat,chat...it was the most romantic date in desi movies I thot -

u made this first nite romantic as ever,on the train,in the rain,pitter patter,a lil walk,a lil pain,well when no sleep on SR Nite,no loss all gain😆

Niks,who in the world after living in the same city for 25 yrs got no friends yaar😲😲😲 Mannu bothering me😕,I wanna take him to a shrink,preferably our v own Nik SHrink😆tap him on his head on my behalf😳

Ok BOmbay Boys on the forum,where u hiding😕And the u gals,back off😈Mannu needs solid Man Bonding now,all the chik chik from the ladies gone to his head🤣

Originally posted by: bonnefille

Nikki.....awesome. It would have been much better if they would have done it your way.....entertaining yet special n dukhayari toh bilkul nahi.....i wish manav would have given valid reason for refusing ajit's help....rassi excuse is great one....wished arman wud hve discussed over it in the serial. CV's do not show the introspection of the characters or the reason behind their decisions clearly. That is the reason why it is difficult to understand them and easier to blast them.😆

n manav could have been shown struggling in the morning anyway.....obviously struggle in more sensible manner. loved it all....although me hates pda....n least expect Arman to do it.....but still loved the moment.Except for the last part where Manav gives a forehead kiss to Archu outside the waiting room, I would not consider the rest of it as PDA, especially the Marine Drive one. Cos at 12, there are people around, but no crowd, in fact its much less than a crowd. Each group/couple finds its own little spot and has a blast, and Marine Drive is big enough to accomodate everyone in a way that they get their own privacy without feeling that they are 'all alone' in the area. Besides, in Mumbai, no one cares others are doing. Mumbai is actually very safe to do all u wrote......the city lives past 12. Exactly. And if you are in a group or with a tall, strong guy like Manav who can fight 4 people at a time, thrash eve-teasers, then you can enjoy Mumbai at night. Marine Drive in particular is good.

Originally posted by: Claire0206

Nikki very interesting & romantic . Awwwwww..... and u call yourself not so romantic person . 😆😆😆😆 I'll be frank here, I'm really not romantic- this verdict has been passed by a lot of people who have seen me getting irritated with highly romantic stuff. My friends and my sister think I'm a hopeless case. I'm a day-dreamer, bas. HEre I just imagined Manav and Archana together and what would be going on in their heads, that's all.

Ekta & Shibu shouting........ 🤣🤣🤣 u didn't spare them .Hehehehe!!!

I hope Ekta reads this. I wish she could. So that she could come to know I hated Friday's episode so much that I actually sat down to write this to feel better.

Originally posted by: umayal

Hai Nikki.Awesome post yaar.Its a Master piece.👏.Loved it to the core
Just what we fans of PR wish to see.It has everything.the love they have for both of them,twist(when a policeman come)and happiness.everything.Would have loved PR so much,if it was the way you described. It would have become a unforgettable night
for both ARMAN and us. Thank you very much for your sweet words.😃

And loved the way you put it and the way you added Kool di,Tanya
di,Guari di ,Saffy,Sherma and you as a part of it.😊 I wish I could add more people, but tried to put those people who were chatting that night.

And then shibu and Ekta.😆😆😆.Wonderful.😃Okay, that was a bit wicked, I know, but just wanted to show every person true to his character. Shibu seems to think its no big deal for a girl to speak on the footpath. Ekta is simply unaware of what is happening.

The points you have given for Fri epi's are very much valid. And I too
thought it was insensible and dont wish to see such sufferings of
ARMAN.They deserve some happiness.Does Life contains only
sufferings.And will love only see bliss in sufferings.Will it not give
happiness as a part of it.Exactly my point. Arey give them some happiness at least on their wedding night.

But then,one thing I liked about fri epi is,the affection manav showed
for archu.I just loved the way he put her to sleep.Now I could see,what
she had gone thro so far,is because of pure circumstances. If his
conditions were good enough,then surely manav would have taken a good
care of my archu.He loves her in his own way.I agree. But Archu is his responsibility now, and he needs to wisen up, (I ideally expected him to have wisened up in 32 years, but maybe he's still slow.)

The way he had made her eat and especially the way he put her to
sleep,all the anger so far on him was vanished at that moment.That's why I call his sweetu. Its impossible to stay angry with him for long.

Originally posted by: Jasmine10

awesome post niki. the creatives want the leads to surmount their obstacles by themselves , that why the refusal of help . In the process they made the episode too filmy. your adaption was more realistic and sweet . good work .