FF - Ek Atoot Bandhan | Part 1 | Pg. 3 - Page 2

Woww nice intro waiting for story to unfold 😃

Start posting soon... sounds very interesting...

I am going to read this every day , it sounds promising ..

wow.....such a good a name👏.....come on yaar start as soon as possible.....

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Shankar start posting yaar.... Jaldi cant wait for it...:d

nice intro

lekha
oh btw it looks interesting

Ek Atoot Bandhan

Manav rings the mandir bell. Next to him is Archana. Archana asks Ganesh for her family's happiness. Manav does the same. They give their thali for aarti. The pandit gives them the diya and says to do to the aarti together. Archana's hand reaches it first. Manav hold her hand. Archana looks up and sees Manav. He is tall like her with a mechanic's shirt and looks decent. She looks back and smiles.

Manav looks at Archana. He is immediately mesmerized by her beauty and stares at her. He slowly raises his hand and it reaches the diya. The flame from it starts burning his hand. But he doesn't feel it. Archana signals him to start the aarti. Manav comes back to reality and feels the pain of the burn. Archana also sees it but doesn't say anything.

When the two finish the aarti, they take blessings. Two flowers fall from Ganesha's hand and lands in Archana's and Manav's hand. The pandit says this is a good sign. Manav smiles at Archana and leaves. Archana leaves too but tries to catch him. "Wait!" says Archu. Manav looks back and once again is mesmerized.

Archana says to Manav "Your hand is burnt'can I help you with it?" Manav smiles and says it is nothing. Archu says no, it is something! She takes out an ointment from her bag and rubs it on his hand. She slowly blows his hand and Manav is smiling. She says that now Manav has to do something for her. Manav asks what. Archu says he has to tell her his name. Manav chuckles and says "Manav Deshmukh". Archu says "Mera naam hai Archana Karanjkar. But people call me Archu."

Archu asks Manav where he works. He says at a garage. Manav asks Archu where she works. Archu says that she doesn't work because she is only educated to the 8th grade. Archu extends her hand. "Friends?" Manav says "Friends!" Archu smiles. Manav says he is getting late. Archu says the same. Manav leaves but his bracelet is stuck to Archus's sari. Archu turns back and sees this.

For some reason, they are happy this happened. Manav carefully separates it. He takes his time as he doesn't want to leave Archu.

~~~~ TO BE CONTINUED ~~~~

Sorry for such a short epi! I will try to make next one longer.

wow!!!! the beggining is superb Shankar.👏
the 1st part is very interesting.
can't wait for the 2nd part.....