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Shikha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#901

Cool part..
uff.... what is sachin going to do ? I hope nothing drastic ...
Getting betrayed by Shravani is one thing , but if your own brother breaks your trust...

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: toothbrush13
Hmmm... "INTERESTING!"

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Thanks Little TB!!!😆

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: unknown18
Nikiiiii

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let me grab kurkure😃

Hi Nikiiiii!!!! As usual I loved the part!!!

Just one question. Y do u hav someone in the hospital almost every part🤣 Shows what a true Doc u r🤓 I m waiting for the romance😍 Archu is so mean to Mannu😭

I was praying to God that no one should notice. 🤣

But seriously the one drawback in the FF is that there is too much hospital hospital. Actually its all due to sick Sulo, and guys beating up each other all the time.

Chalo... now no hospital for some parts.

Romance will come again. Archu is very angry now, par pyaar chupaye nahi chupta Sid 😉

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: lunza
Cool part..
uff.... what is sachin going to do ? I hope nothing drastic ...
Getting betrayed by Shravani is one thing , but if your own brother breaks your trust...

Sachin ki fan daudi daudi aayi...😆

Sachin will have more role now in the story Lunza...

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#905

Brilliant Nikki👍🏼
I admit i havnt read all the parts but i'll read them allduring holidays that is in 15 days.
U write wonderfully well doc keep it up😉

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

@jaanu: Welcome!

I never knew you read this FF. Am glad you like it. The back parts are more romantic and all, so I guess you will like them more than this one. Enjoy! Will wait for your comments.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#907

@ Nikki Oh i do read ur PR reloaded yaar it's such a hit n i'll definitely read the romantic parts my fav as u said. B4 having my triplets i loved reading mills n boon but now no time.
Will post my comment 4 sure😃

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 14 years ago

#908

I really am impressed by your writing skills.. U have made Manav's dillemma come out so alive with ur words...

But yes am really getting angry with you for making all the things for Manav to go WRONG and every person in the Karanjkars bad-mouthing him. Even his family -- Savita Aaai and Sachin twist him, bully him and blame him for their own selfish motives, that Damoddar Baba of his is no good then just telling BAPPA WILL MAKE EVERYTHING OK... and asks him to stick to Archana and not tell him some trhs which would open Manav's eyes.

I really am not liking the miserabale position of MANAV.

U have already said that Archana will go back to Manav b4 he gives her proof, bt b4 that I would like Tarun or SACHIN to really jolt her and her family out by showing them some FACTS (Tarun and SACHIN as he is the only one who knows everything and also has the power to tell the HARD FACTS to KARANJAKARS and make them SPEECHLESS and mend ther ways) ----

1) Karanjakars could not find a suitor for Archana as she was proved characterless by innumerable ways.

2) If the photos of Manav is held as a PROOF then all the PROOFS which were shown to the world to prove her as characterless are also True and so she too is a MI********.

3) The Karanjakars and archana had trapped Manav and not him as the photos which established their relationship was taken at a spot where Archana had invited Manav and not vice versa.

4) The Karanjakars who were not able to find suitor for their daughter approached Manav's family for marriage even after knowing their financial and family background properly. So the y grimace and make Manav feel small in front of them always with their words when it was completely their choice to make Archana's status clean.

5) A family who is so affluent then Manav, who is just a mere mechanic could not find a job for Archana whereas Manav did which even Archana loves. Manav had not even uttered them, she only came to know this truth thru someone else and not him.

6) Manav, a mere mechanic has given her dreams and even helped her to realise them by admitting her in the night school and not even utter about the money rather than demand it back even in this such dire financial crisis. Then y every member of the Karanjkar family wants to take the credit of it.

7) A family who is so conservative and also does not want their daughter to go back to their in-laws but no one goes to her school to pick her up at late hours and is completely OK with it, with Manav doing his duties but do not acknowledge it.

8) Archana may not ask for the 20000 and 40000 which Manav gave but can atleast state these points to her family to let them know that they own so much of amount and hostility towards Manav for helping them, y keep them bottled up and never let anyone know how good Manav is...

9) What has Archana given back Manav for so much of sincerity rather than just staying quiet and allow him to be humilitated in the hands of her family. Every person from the eldest to youngest in her family has humiliated Manav and I would never like it if manav just forgives ARCHANA and KARANJAKARS in one single go or when ARCHANA just decides to get back in his life by merely stating a SORRY or putting up an emotional breakage. Though he wants Archana back in his LiFE, I would want MANAV to show ARCHANA some REAL FACTS of LIFE and make her see her FAULTS rather than just go and hug her instatntly

Y not give Damodar baba some more better work rather than just put as a mere helpless soul, when he has the key. It really irritates me when someone who does nothing comes out and start giving us advices.

10) Someday manav should also say SACHIN that now he should start earning on his own, help the family financially rather than just grumble and compplain and stop blaming him for everything when he is again on giving MANAV a GUILT TRIP.

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#909

Whoa Abhilasha! Kya entry maari hai yaar!!!

All this will come dear, but in the following parts. Right now everyone is being patient with Archana, but dheere dheere sabka fuse ud raha hai. Sachin is already angry. Tarun is slowly slowly getting angry. Dheere dheere matter will open.

Archu will also get a reality check. Plus lots of introspection herself.

Manav is a fighter in this FF. He is in a bad position right now, but he will never quit. And his position will improve nicely and people will realise his worth. But kya karun yaar, if FF has to be made realistic then story will go have to go a little slow.

Regarding Damodar Baba- he does have a role to play, but not now. As of now, he is doing exactly the same that he does in the serial- "Bappa bappa bappa!!"

The fact that he is not doing anything, that Sachin Savita are giving him guilt trips, that Sachin is not helping him by doing job- are also in fact important aspects in the story. They will open later.

Thanks for commenting by the way. Glad you like this.

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unknown18

@unknown18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#910

Originally posted by: nikitagmc
I was praying to God that no one should notice. 🤣Daactar hamare paas aankhain hain, button nahi!! 🤓

But seriously the one drawback in the FF is that there is too much hospital hospital. Actually its all due to sick Sulo, and guys beating up each other all the time.Its ok. I dont mind it as long as the story is going well (and u show some ArMan romance😉)

Chalo... now no hospital for some parts.Sachiiiiii???😲 Pata chala Niki ko hi hospital le jana pada😆

Romance will come again. Archu is very angry now, par pyaar chupaye nahi chupta Sid 😉 Yes Niki☺️ I want Archu to make up in a really good way. She shud do something very special for Manav. (Your) Manav deserves that😊 I m in love with him Niki☺️ I just wana give the poor guy a hug🤗

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