PR reloaded-FF-Pt 66 Pg 148, 27/4/11 - Page 82

awww!!!!! poor guy!!!!

Hi everyone!!! I'm fine now... much much better.

@lunza: You are a 'slightly disappointed'..??? Arey Manav ka 8 lakh ka choona lag gaya...

Regarding Sachin... well, you are right in a way...

@Claire: ArMan reunion in next part???? This means you will kill me after reading the next part.... lol... I should hide somewhere...

@Swat: Thanks... love you too..

@moon_mine: Yup, Archana really is hoping for something positive... lets see what happens...

Oh I was trying to choose my words carefully .. didnt want you to think I didnt like this part .. because I did ...
But yeah , I thought Manav will make a dramatic entry in court at the nth moment ;) ..
Disappointed that manav hasnt gained much from this court case ( except varsha's trust ) ...
One thing which has made me really happy is that archana spoke up for him , listened to her heart and not her mom ..

I'll read it on sunday aramsey 😎

@lunza: Arey actually I meant to say ki I'm surprised you're only 'slightly disappointed'... if I had been in your place, I would have got like, really frustrated.... hahahaha!!!

Hey Nikki, hope you are fully recovered now. I really liked the alternating scenes of the varsha-manav duo and the courtroom, but feel sorry for manav 😭 (I want to clarify, I am crying for YOUR Manav not PR Manav😡). He lost the chance to prove himself innocent AND lost all the money..come on..please be kind to him in the coming parts.

CONGRATULATIONS for half century! May you treat us with a century 😃.

Congratulations on 50 parts!!! 👏 I hope you're feeling better now! You've done an awesome job sticking with your story no matter how weird the actual show gets.

@bhavni: Thanks! I'll try to update once a week at least.

@tv_madness: Yeah, Manav lost a good opportunity and suffered double loss... the interesting thing will be how he covers it up.... sorry.... THEY cover it up.😉

Keep reading.

@toothbrush: Thanks! The alternate colours were used to give the effect of parallel story- one scene of hospital, one scene of court- cos otherwise the scene switching seemed confusing even to me. I'm glad it was effective.

I hope the story was not too rushed. I tried to be as descriptive as I could and go slow on the emotional part.

I have mentioned it to you that i am a huge fan of ur fic but it is the first time i m posting here. Have been trying to take out time for a long time to read the 50th part.....n seriously hav 2 say u r awesome. Your Pavitra rishta is zillion times better than what they show on tv. Love your writing and the detailing......it is so interesting and engaging without the feeling of gloom the tv pr gives. I just wish PR had gone your way.....atleast there wouldn't have been a compromise on the character of manav. I like you also feel the original plot and premise of the character manav was so beautiful and original. Old Manav was different from all heroes.....soft spoken yet tough.....poor yet worthy......new manav is just wierd. I even like your Archana.....she has more faith in manav than the tv archana had when whole prostitute fiasco happened. Also the love through separation makes more sense in your fanfic than it ever did in PR.

About the 50th part.......really BT CVs should learn from you how to plot an entire scenario....the court scene.....the detailings....the evidences (Ajit blew me off with his manipulations).......is so well described. PR Cvs just bring in a premise and deliver it without making any sense. Love the development of Varsha's and Manav's relationship.....for me they were the best characters. n i kept imagining kaka playing Shinde bhau.....he's got that personality.

I hate PR now....just waiting for 19th and i think that is it for me. Manav cannot be resurrected now....it wouldn't be palatable and will be completely unbelievable. If Jaywant is shown to be negative.....it will make no sense and will be out of the blue coz till now the guy seems alrite infact better than manav. If shravani decides to leave herself.....who would like love in charity and that too when archana has a better choice. Nothing can be set right.

P.S. I loved Manav and Archana's first kiss..........its my favourite part in your fan-fic.