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akash

@Spartacus

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Its beautifully scripted,

For once the entire episode was just playing out when i was going through the narration.

Eagerly waiting for the rest of the series, in the offerings.

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smrth

@smrth

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

As always, your prose is delight. As always, your imagination is original. As always, your post is a pleasure to read.

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448368

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Wow! skeppo....nother mushy ep.....nd a li'l sad as well....I hope Archu never sleeps hungry.....bt then she's Ekta's heroine....so quite capable....luvd the terrace scene......cld almost visualize it .....tender yet heartwrenching......2 ppl madly in luv yet cnt be tghthr......hope 1 day all issues wll b resolved betn these2 nd they wll bcme one forever....maybe m too optimistic.....

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grofers

@sensodyne

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

OMG skeptical its amazing i have no words to describing how much i loved ur post its so touching and i could imagine this Arman sequence i would like see some thing like this PR.
U are ⭐️ thank so much for a lovely post.

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GHT_ArMan

@GHT_ArMan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

It was suprb..vry beautiful n touching...😍n u r wriing...Hands Down👏

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: toothbrush13
Wow, your writing is just so beautiful!

I'm running out of words now to describe how wonderful your pieces are... you're absolutely spectacular.

Thanks TTB ................. It's gr8 to be encouraged in this way. 😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mitts
Its magical... 😍 😍 😍

My fav part is wen her hands are on his chest n she could feel his heartbeat ohh my 😍 😍 😍

BUt then hungy??? Staying in terrace?? I dont like it yaar 😭

@ pink

You're swooning when her hands are on his chest to push him away..................what would you do if her hands were on his chest to draw him closer?😉

@ green

This is the scenario which may be shown on TV. But I will take the story from this point and change that situation as per my wish. Just the way all you dreamers would have them to be. Hopefully I shd be able to update quickly and finish it within a week or so. With holidays coming up, I'll be able to do so.

By the 3rd and 4th episode, make sure your smelling salts are around you and you dont faint ........... 😈 😉

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: devashree_h
Its just WOW Skepi....absolutely beautiful. I love how you have described that terrace scene.😍

Dee............. you incurable romantic, you can keep doing 😍😍😍because this week you will be getting 3 more updates. Thanks to holidays on the 26th etc. I shall get time to write. So see you in those pages too.

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: satyamdas
it's beautiful. Would you please explain how you are able to wtite so well...excellent english with ornamental words...hats off to you skep

Thank you ..................... ornamental words? 😆

I just wrote in the story that Arch looks beautiful even without ornaments or even the slightest make-up. Don't you agree? 😉

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: akashraj
Its beautifully scripted,

For once the entire episode was just playing out when i was going through the narration.

Eagerly waiting for the rest of the series, in the offerings.

Yes I shall update quickly this week. Thanks Akashraj...............

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