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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

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Posted: 3 years ago

Khushi when will this story be completed ?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Khushi you deleted part 2 which you had updated ? Why ? It was beautiful one .

Edited by N_sharmaa - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

CHAPTER-5



"Hey .... Minni...Minni...wait.. Would you please tell me where are you dragging me?"



"Nopes" she replied, while continuing to tug him forward with all her might, pushing her way through rows of hapless bystanders , consciously averting their inquisitive glances.



"Minni ,is some one sick, are we going to a hospital?" Neil yelled, hiding the sarcasm with a straight face.



"NOO."


"Then are we going to catch a train?"



"Neil NOOOO."



"Hold on....Minni you are not dragging me to the airport, are you? Listen I don't want to go back so soon."





"Can you not keep your mouth shut for 3 straight minutes?" Finally she stopped with a jerk & turned around in one sweeping motion, as her long hair twirled in the crisp mid-morning air and ended up lashing against her sun-kissed face.


"I was just hoping against hope that you would cooperate for once and we would make it to Flury's before 10.30." She yelled.


"But Congratulation Mr. Neil Oberoi.....thanks to you, we have royally missed it."



"Now what the heck is Flury's?"



"Flury's is one of the most famous bakeries in kolkata, and perhaps the only one to serve authentic continental breakfast.


Their muffins," she muttered, licking her upper lip "Are to die for!!"



"So all this for a mere breakfast of MUFFINS??? Are you kidding me? As if I already didn't have enough of them back in New York that you have to drag me across a street full of people?"



Minni's face fell. Why hadn't it struck her before. What was novel for her, was routine for him.


When would she understand, Neil was no more the young boy from their suburban hilly town, she had seen off at the Delhi airport? He had traveled far and wide, seen a world, she could only dream of and evolved into someone, probably out of her league. Minni slowly withdrew her arms from his and began adjusting the hem of her kurta, fighting back tears.

The mock anger on her face, her red swollen cheeks, that trademark hint of annoyance on her asymmetrically raised eyebrows, the cute little sniffing nose; things that he adored in her, things that made him tease her in the first place were missing. There was no sign of anger, anywhere on her face, only a veil of sadness. The girl who was bubbling with joy barely moments ago, was standing in front of him, like a deflated balloon.

If there was anyone in the whole of Neil's universe who didn't deserve to be hurt, it was her. And every single time, he fu*king ended updoing just that.


"Minni, can we go back to the hotel, once? I need to pick up something important." Neil requested, not so much as asked.

Minni nodded in silence and quickly looked away.

When the cab crawled its way out of the busy Park street and began racing down the E.M.Bypass expressway, Neil pulled the window down. At once, a gush of cold air rushed in, and disheveled Minni's unbraided hair. They spread all over her face, a few random strands stuck in odd places, even as she tried to gather them and bunch up in a bun.

Minni imagined herself looking like the funnier version of the girl from 'The Grudge', and turned to Neil, expecting to find him laughing at her. Instead, she caught him frowning as he panicked to roll the window back up. Her heart went out to him. Why was she wasting time being angry at the poor guy, when he had traversed half the world, just to be with her. Every second with him was worth its weight in gold. God knew, once he returned to the US, when she would get to see him next...


She put her hand on his thigh, and when their eyes met, she smiled.



As soon as the cabbie dropped them off at the lobby of the Hyatt, Neil grabbed Minni's wrist and skittered towards the lift. "what did you forget in the room? We could have bought it frm some where, couldn't we?"



It was only after they had reached their room on the 7 th floor, overlooking the grand Salt lake stadium, that Neil replied, taking Minni by complete surprise when he pulled her into his arms with a sudden jerk. "This, I had left this." he replied pointing to her.

Her heart started thumping so loudly, she was afraid, even people from the neighbouring rooms could hear it. She barely managed to utter.

What do you think, only you miss me haan?"

"How would I know if you do?" She started slowly, finding her footing, then her pace picked up till it left her breathless "All you ever do is tease me. I thought at least as long as you are here, you would not tease me and just love me, but no, You to can't survive without pulling my leg na, and I am sure you will keep doing it till my last breath. If I tell you 10 times that I love you, you barely reply once. You knew I don't want to waste a single moment while you are here and YOU, what did you do? push me back to college at the first chance you got.

Wo to doctor Ashok understood my emotions, otherwise weren't you so happy seeing me off. And you are always like this, those rare days when I can't call you on Skype, I know for sure that you feel relieved." she knew all along, that she was bickering rubbish.

It wasn't true....well not untrue if you merely deconstructed the words, but doesn't a book hide more between its lines than it expresses m them? No one knew better than her, just how much he loved her. She understood his silences better than he did himself. Yet, she was cribbing to him and about him, because in the whole wide world, if there was one person she could complain to while still holding him to her bosom, it was him, her Neil.


"How did you become a doctor?" he asked with a faint smile, tightening his hold around her petite waist.

"Do you know how old you look now?"

"NOPES" she fiercely nodded her head.

"Not a day more than 13. if your professors see you now, they won't give you your degree on Wednesday."

"I don't care."

"But I do. I pretty shamelessly do.. I have waiting for this day since forever."

"Why do you have to care when you don't even love me?"

"I don't love you?"




"No.."



"Right, that's why I came here, to have yummy muffins at Flury's and flirt with your classmates...especially that psycho roomie of yours...Isha."



"Yes, precisely! now please let me go." Minni began gosling against him to break free.

"I am not letting you go, nopes, that's not happening. I didn't come here to let you go." He shifted her a little and grabbed her with one hand. With the other, he cupped her chin, even as she refused to look at him.



"Then what did you come here for?"



"For this.." Neil bent down and kissed her hungrily, throwing her off balance and knocking her out of her senses. All this while, it had felt surreal, even though he was right next to her. But it had to come to this, to her being locked in his arms, to their bodies being pressed against each other, to their lips being fused together, to their souls being entwined in one another, for her to believe that he was actually here. No it wasn't one of those day dreams she had conditioned her mind to imagine whenever she missed him, she wasn't walking on a carpet of make belief clouds. Neil was here, for real, as real as it could get and she could actually hold him, touch him, feel him...For a moment Minni felt chocked with happiness. It was finally sinking in.



"I don't generally use cheesy lines, but I will make an exception today. Just so you know stupid girl, if I had wings, I'd fly here every single night that I have been away. I may be bad at expressing, but don't you ever doubt my love. I love you with an intensity that will scare you." But his words didn't reach her. They slowly blurred out till they totally vanished in the air. She kept on staring at him, reeling under her new found realization, wide eyed, spellbound, close to tears.

To be continued...

Edited by A_Cosmic_Dust - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Khushi you deleted part 2 which you had updated ? Why ? It was beautiful one .

thanks dear...Don't worry ...it's under editing...I'll post soon..
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Khushi when will this story be completed ?

something even I don't know(surgery sessions these days are hetic🤣) but something I know is I'll finish all 3 of them....i can't promise when but surely someday...
Edited by A_Cosmic_Dust - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

something even I don't know(surgery sessions these days are hetic🤣) but something I know is I'll finish all 3 of them....i can't promise when but surely someday...

Proud of you finally you confessed openly about surgeries 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

You write about emotions in beautiful way . Neil ,tappri this was beautiful ❤️ Mini's expressions I could imagine. Infact I could imagine Ash . Those style , expressions How Neil understands it and how Mini knows him so well but still she has thay fear and neil knows it well. Looks like something is stored. Is separation on the way ?

Edited by N_sharmaa - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Minni slowly withdrew her arms from his and began adjusting the hem of her kurta, fighting back tears.

The mock anger on her face, her red swollen cheeks, that trademark hint of annoyance on her asymmetrically raised eyebrows, the cute little sniffing nose; things that he adored in her, things that made him tease her in the first place were missing. There was no sign of anger, anywhere on her face, only a veil of sadness. The girl who was bubbling with joy barely moments ago, was standing in front of him, like a deflated balloon



This is Mini love this details you keep on MiNeil

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