MiNeil FF "Dangerous Game" updated Epilogue on 08.09.20 pg 94 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Very nice .All characters are set .Looking forward for next .Neil and Mini's meet

Thanks

Mineil meet might take time

Dont know...have not started working on next part

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

OMG... Neil oneroi the most wanted criminal.... Don... King.... Kya description tha anjali.....

Thanks

He is dangerous don here not any sedha saada insaan😎😈

Preet and Bobby are police....

Yes i know its funny but think them as a comic cops🤣

Nayeembi..... 🤣🤣🤣

Naeem bi ke liye mera pyar itni jaldi khatam nahi hoga🤣

Mini khurana the ex girlfriend or Neil oberoi.... Looks interesting....

Aisa lag raha tha that I am watching and don movie.....

Awww glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Nayembi🤣🤣

Preet Bobby Police🤣

Mini Neil ki ex girlfriend is interesting

Superb

Thanks

Naeem bi lady don with paan chewing habit🤣

Preet bobby comic cops🤣

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Wowww!! Awesome..

Mini is Neil's ex ....

N maybe the reason why he turned don😝

Don Neil😍..

Preet n bobby 😂😂

Loved it..

Continue soon...

Nd do keep it a ff😉

Thanks

Mini is ex...there is more explanation to it...will write it in next part

No neil uski wajah se don nahi bana😆

Neil started pretty early😆

It will be ss or ff....kuch parts likhne ke baad hi pata chal payega

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Dangerous hai ye neil dangerous aadmi belives in dangerous ishq

Am loving it ☺️

Kabh se wait tha iss ka ☺️

Dangerous game is about to begin ☺️

Abhi toh bas description hai abhi hero heroine ki entry hui kaha hai...wait karo abhi toh

I can sense you 😈

Soch ke dekha toh laga wo bilkul fit rahegi lady godmother types ke role mein paan chabate hue

Naeem bi ko gundi bana diya

Perfect hai 🤣

Pan ke saath aur accha lagega 🤣

Lekin ye NB bahut powerful nahi honi chahiye kamini😈

Apna banda best hai

Neil ke saamne NB bheegi billi honi chahiye🤣

Bobby and preet police hi rahenge haan lekin maine bhi socha tha ki unke pair up kar deti hoon yaha pe

Kar kar🤣 mujhe iss ka kabh se wait tha 🤣

Show maine b mujhe lag raha tha humesha ..ye dono jodi mein acche lagenge than sibblings🤣 comedy b toh chahiye na🤣

Neil ka side kick hai par koi aur

Kaun ? Kahi twist mein end mein Hanuman uncle toh nahi ?🤣

ya doodh wala ko b tum ne yahan promotion diya hai? As side kick ?🤣

Ya phir Mini khud toh nahi ? Choti don of Neil 🤣

Mini ka description abhi pura kaha hua hai....abhi continue hoga agle part mein....uska character mix type rahega...thanda garam...palti maarta rahega situation ke hisaab se

🤣 kuch b ho strong rahe ..woh filmy wala melt honi wali nahi chahiye character .

Takkar ki ho

Don Neil ki gf, pyaar hai .. kuch toh unique , special honi chahiye...that he fell for her😉

Meri stories mein tragic end....kabhi ho hi nahi sakta I believe in that dialogue - hamari filmo ki tarah hamari life mein bhi end mein sab theek ho hi jata hai agar kuch theek na ho toh wo end nahi....picture abhi baki hai mere dost

Yes. Ditto feeling🤗

Once a kamina always a kamina

Maha kamina +++ plz ☺️☺️😈😎

Bas ab ek story mei ek hi character rehne do

Spy wale ke liye dusri

Intezaar rahega iss ka bhi

My answers in blue 🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Mineil meet might take time

Dont know...have not started working on next part

Individual character development is also important. Will wait for MiNeil meet 😉

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Individual character development is also important. Will wait for MiNeil meet 😉

I will start writing today

Try to finish it in one sitting

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Mini is ex...there is more explanation to it...will write it in next part

No neil uski wajah se don nahi bana😆

Neil started pretty early😆

It will be ss or ff....kuch parts likhne ke baad hi pata chal payega

Now with this you have made me more impatient...😅

Will Minni bring him back on right track..?Or will it have some tragic ending (happy hi rakhna yaar😛)..

Is Minni upto some revenge?..

But jo bhi ho ultimately Mineil won't be able to resist each other😉

Can't wait for their meet..

I guess that's one of your speciality...you have given so much of scope to the story...and that's now makes it impossible to wait for the next update 😁..

Looking forward for the next.❤️

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

ohh...

Now with this you have made me more impatient...😅

Will Minni bring him back on right track..?Or will it have some tragic ending (happy hi rakhna yaar😛)..

Is Minni upto some revenge?..

But jo bhi ho ultimately Mineil won't be able to resist each other😉

Can't wait for their meet..

I guess that's one of your speciality...you have given so much of scope to the story...and that's now makes it impossible to wait for the next update 😁..

Looking forward for the next.❤️

Aww thanks😳🤗

But sometimes i really am scared itna build kar diya ab story pasand aaye sabko....khoda pahad nikla chuha wala case na ho jaye🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Aww thanks😳🤗

But sometimes i really am scared itna build kar diya ab story pasand aaye sabko....khoda pahad nikla chuha wala case na ho jaye🤣