Mineil FF: "Her Wishlist" (**completed**) - Page 6

This neil is every bit of a person i always imagine him to be☺️ hot headed, arrogant, full of attitude, Mysterious but good at heart.

Now with mini even i am drooling over him

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Nice . So Mini will go to party ? It was her wish in dairy right ? also kiss ? Is Micky related to Neil ? Brother ? Plz don't make preeth and Mini SIL it's will be very rritating then.🤣 I don't like character of Preeth she is too much into interference. Better stay has friends.

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This neil is every bit of a person i always imagine him to be☺️ hot headed, arrogant, full of attitude, Mysterious but good at heart.

Now with mini even i am drooling over him

☺️

Update soon

Glad to know your curiosity. Well here Neil is adventurous, life- Loving man who very well knows to balance his personal and professional life whereas Mini is like ordinary girl afraid of living her dreams.

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YES!

Maybe we all have often thought about how strange it is that so much in my life rests upon the word 'YES'. It's an agreement, a promise, a comfort and an assurance. We use it so much each day- we say 'yes' far more times than we ever say our own names and yet there is always that novelty , that excitement that comes with saying the three-letter word.

So despite of enormous attempts to deny Mini failed. After being so much pampered and insisted by Preet and Mickey.., Mini eventually had yo agree to come to the party.

Since Mini was new in the town, Preet invited her to her place so that they can leave for the party together.

Mini reached Preet's house. Preet welcomed her warmly.

"So what are you wearing for the night?" Asked Preet while checking herself out in the mirror.

"This itself", answered Mini innocently.

This grabbed Preet's attention and she started checking her out.

"Babe, we are going to hit some dance floor", commented Preet .

Mini wondered in confusion while checking herself out. "I'm not a party girl. U knw nah?"

"Come with me", commanded Preet and took Mini to her wardrobe.

Preet started choosing an ideal dress for Mini after minutes of hardwork that felt like hours to Mini...she finally found one and handed over to her best friend.Mini started checking the dress out and despite the denial Preet finally convinced her to wear the same.

It was kind of bold,stary, off-shoulder,lace white crop top that stopped above her stomach.Mini then adorn herself with silver earrings and right matte bold red lipstick.

Mini along with Preet reached the decided venue. Her dancing eyes started searching for Mickey but unconsciously her heart craved to see Neil in his party avtar chilling himself out.

Suddenly Mini's eyes catched a man in white T-shirt, blue denim shorts and a light brown on his jet black hair tied in a ponytail waving hands towards them. Her mind doubted to believe her eyes. It was Neil, completely engrossed in living the moment to the fullest.

He was wearing a killer smile that can make any girl sworn for him.Mini was mesmerized.

"Let's go Mini"asked Preet.

And took Mini with her.

Neil's glittery black eyes landed on Mini as she came closer to him. He failed to move his glances from her despite enormous attempts. His heart throbbed.

Even the giant speakers, pounding music and hundreds of people hitting their Feet like jerks could not affect him.

Mini and Preet greeted them both.

"You ready for this?, Neil asked.

Mini could hear the boom of the bass as the music echoed.

"Ofcourse", answered Mini grinning,

Though the incident that occurred the day before was still running somewhere in her mind.

She had not forgiven Neil yet but now all that mattered to her was a party she was witnessing for the first time she wanted to give up all her fears ,all her confusions and wanted to enjoy the fullest.

From the giant speakers, the music pounds. Small jolts shakes the floor and travels through Mini, starting at her toes and then spreading upwards. For this reason it was impossible not to atleast tap a foot to the rhythm.

Though parties Don't tend to favour her preferred genre of music but she accepted that at this kind of event all disputes over the soundtrack and with the man standing next to her-Neil, must be forgotten in the mutual urge, simply to dance and be free for a short time.

Mini's started wandering here and there. All that she could see was people.... people and people tapping their foot without a care of the world.

She saw Mickey and Preet engrossed in dancing and howling, maybe due to the effect of alcohol. She noticed Neil standing beside her , tapping his feet and enjoying drink.

No one can ever say that he is some'CEO',her boss and things are going so cold between them.

He seemed so care-free without a care of the world like some free spirit enjoying his new born freedom. He seemed so much in love with life. He is happy and breezy , a totally different man from what Mini had perceived. She was captivated.

Mini signalled him to go and dance but he refused asking her to take the initiative through his expressive eyes.

"You are so sophisticated", Mini complaint.

"Shut your mind for once and give your heart a chance...u will get me", Neil smiled and said.

"When are you returning my diary back?", Mini questioned. But Neil just took her hand in his firmly and took her to the dance floor . They danced a bit. Mini was lost in his magnetic eyes when one kissing couple barged into them and Mini lost her footing in her heels. They were not that high but she was not used to wearing them either, considering her usual participation and social activities.

The one thing keeping her from falling was 'their' entwined hands and Neil stopped from hitting the ground but her arm was jarred at the socket.

"Oww!", Mini cursed, letting go of Neil to clutch her shoulder. He puts his hand against her shoulder, rubbing it lightly, not knowing what to do.

"You alright?", He said.

"Yeah!" Mini answered wondering what else she can say.

"Drinks?", Mini asked.

"U drink?", Neil questioned back in astonishment.

"Yes.. non-alcoholic ones", Mini replied sarcastically.

Neil laughed.

Finally they reached the counter and had drinks. Though Mini was mentally that she'll go for non-alcoholic one, the sight before her tempted her. Everyone present there was sipping some or the drink mainly alcohol. And when Neil ordered one she gave in.

"No", Neil insisted not to take alcohol as she might not be able to handle it .

"Why? Even you are taking one then why not ne?" Mini asked innocently in her puppy voice. Neil laughed.

"Fine! But just a mild one", and they ordered the same drink...both alcoholic...but mild ones.

Mini figured that maybe after this mild drink she might also get into the party mood.

Neil takes a large gulp of his and Mini followed a suit and something it sort of burns her throat but she liked how it made her feel -- powerful, new, excited.

Neil clenches his jaw and then relaxes again and sways slightly to the music. The vibrations seems to travel through them. Mini saw Preet weaving to them as if asking them to join. And to her surprise meaning in not wanted to do so. She did not wanted her FRIENDS to come into the scene now. She was enjoying Neil's company.

"Hey! I have a surprise for you", said Neil as he winked at Mini.

"What? Show me"? Mini ask excitedly while trying to make him hear her in those loud music.

"Come", Neil commanded taking her with her hands. He came behind her closed eyes with both his hands and started to count. Ready for the surprise?, 3...2 ....1....

Mini opened her eyes. They were in a garden near a pool. It was huge and square and the ripples pulsed and ebb with the beats of the song.

Mini did not know what song was playing but she liked it. The music seems to understand that she wants to move, to dance, and her heart soared.

It seemed to be affecting the people in the pool too.... everyone... those dancing beside it and those plunging into the water.

Mini was astonished.

She suddenly remembered her blue diary and the wish she had written a decade ago. That wish was in front of her.

"It's a pool party", she literally shouted.

Neil felt calmed and happy seeing her cheerfulness. He felt happy to make her happy.

He kept looking at her mesmerizingly while Mini was busy examining the things around like a kid.

She couldn't say anything. All she wanted was to thank him. All her grudge from him vanished.

Neil could clearly see her gratitude in her magical eyes but maybe he didn't wanted to hear that right now.

"Hey Mini", a voice called.

It was Mickey.

"Aren't you coming in?", He asked gesturing to the pool.

Fluorescent glow sticks had been thrown in in and in the dark the water had become colourful, bubbling and electrifying.

"Surely I'm", said Mini grabbing Neil's hand. She turned to him.

"Let's go!",

"Like this", asked Neil moving his eyes up and down as if checking her out.

Mini felt shy.

She again wondered should get into the pool?

But then she remembered that life has offered her an opportunity to fulfill her prolonged desire and that it rarely offers someone and thus she shouldn't let it go. she cleared her thoughts and threw away all her fears and then begin dancing again, slowly sliding over her top leaving her only in bikni and bottoms.

Neil too slides out of his t-shirt leaving him only in shorts.

Mini's eyes widened.

She cannot help it----blame the drink but she cannot resist and ran her hands over his abs, enjoying the feeling of his muscles against her fingers.

A new song comes on.

"On three" Mini shouted over the music., "We'll jump in. Okay?"

"Yes", Neil agreed,. "Just don't jump on Mickey", he grinned.

Mini rolled her and muttered something under her breath.

"Three", she said finally....

"Two...one"

Together they jumped.

When they surfaced Mickey wiped droplets of water from his eyes.

Mini giggled.

She enjoyed alot with Neil pouring water over each other's face and shouting with the beats of the music.

"Wish granted", Neil whispered in Mini's ear and in return she just gave a sweet smile.

Slowly Neil's hands slide through Mini's hair and settled on her shoulder, lightly pressing her skin.

He moves his mouth close to her ear and whispered again "deep breath", before dipping them beneath the surface of the pool.

Clinging to each other, they sank until they reach the bottom and there Neil presses his mouth hard against her as if persuading her to open her mouth wider to make the kiss more deeper...more intimate... as if performing some life saving scene of a movie ...., Mini responded with equal vigor. Mini was just lost in his passion and in the effect water was causing...how couldn't she be afterall it was her first ever kiss that too under water.

The water sipping between their lips

and under their hands. Mini's eyes were closed but Neil can still see the flickers of light writhing along the back of her eyelids like lightning strikes.

Mini gasped and Neil lifted her back up to oxygen where she tried to hide her blush. She remained shocked for a while. She can't meet his eyes and so does he. She kept her eyes down buried in the water. The caress was unexpected. They were not anticipating a moment so intimate....so jarring .

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