H×B OS : Vachan - Page 3

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

I'd been waiting and finally!!!!!

HS will ask na, perhaps later. ;)

Thanks a lot for the correction, Gur! I didn't even realise where and how I picked up the understanding that commas are meant to be outside the quotation. Gosh, such huge blunders!

I'll sure keep this in mind. :)

Haha, no worries! It happens. I noticed I've been using "but" a lot and other such words. Have to find a new way to write. 🤔😆

Although, I have to say your pieces are perfect for me because their length makes it easier for me to read them in one go, but when I'm done reading, I wish there was more. 😆

Also, after reading this piece, Maine Khud Ko has been running in my head nonstop. It also reignited my inspiration for an idea I had. Let's see if I'm able to pen it down today. 😆

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Haha, no worries! It happens. I noticed I've been using "but" a lot and other such words. Have to find a new way to write. 🤔😆

Although, I have to say your pieces are perfect for me because their length makes it easier for me to read them in one go, but when I'm done reading, I wish there was more. 😆

Also, after reading this piece, Maine Khud Ko has been running in my head nonstop. It also reignited my inspiration for an idea I had. Let's see if I'm able to pen it down today. 😆

Hahaha yeah. New sentence structures refreshing conjunctions are much much needed. Though I don't find you using "but" or anything of that sort, a lot.

I can't write any longer than this😆

My attention lasts for only a short span.

Ohh, I just searched up this song, I had never heard about it. Wow, waiting! Chetti likho!

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

This was beautiful and sweet mishti, just like your name 😳. I hope this is what will be shown. Both hs and babes are perfect for each other, inspite of all their flaws.

Awww thank you very much!

Yeah, they are! Lovely people.

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Khudko khokar, tujhko paaya,

Aisa tera mol

Aaj jo tune haath lagaya

Ho gaya main anmol

My favorite lines..... love the os hope to see aisi Babita someday in show....

I loved them too!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Hahaha yeah. New sentence structures refreshing conjunctions are much much needed. Though I don't find you using "but" or anything of that sort, a lot.

I can't write any longer than this😆

My attention lasts for only a short span.

Ohh, I just searched up this song, I had never heard about it. Wow, waiting! Chetti likho!

Haha, that's why I said your pieces are perfect. My attention span is also very short. 😆

I opened up the doc but I can't seem to write. 🤔 It's always the first line that gives me the most issue.

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Haha, that's why I said your pieces are perfect. My attention span is also very short. 😆

I opened up the doc but I can't seem to write. 🤔 It's always the first line that gives me the most issue.

Bold - that is why I've started writing off beat beginnings nowadays. Like just imagine a scene and start writing midway into it through a dialogue, random starts. And explain the rest of setting, context etc as you proceed.

Dunno if I'm making sense.😆

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Bold - that is why I've started writing off beat beginnings nowadays. Like just imagine a scene and start writing midway into it through a dialogue, random starts. And explain the rest of setting, context etc as you proceed.

Dunno if I'm making sense.😆

That's how I write my pieces too! It's just that initial set up of the setting that takes me some time to get into. 🤔

Oh well. Lemme just start from somewhere. I can tweak it up later as I want. 😆

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

That's how I write my pieces too! It's just that initial set up of the setting that takes me some time to get into. 🤔

Oh well. Lemme just start from somewhere. I can tweak it up later as I want. 😆

Yep, you need to get into that scene mode.

Chalo ab likhdo, kaafi baat hogayi ispar😛