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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

So, Aniruddh Dave's stellar performance in this week's episodes, and the scene with Tu Hi Re playing in the background really made me want to write something.

I was slightly apprehensive about posting a story, with the complete lack of fics being posted in recent months. Then again, with Friday's episode and the promos, I guess we all could do with some Hanita positivity.

This has been written in the middle of the night with literally no beta reading, so it's still half-cooked and slightly raw. But I hope you like it.

TU HI RE

They were all gathered in Naeem Bi's living room, shocked, when a seething Beeji placed an ultimatum in front of Babita.

"Aaj faisla kar hi de, Babita. Ya toh hum rahenge, ya ye Hanuman Singh. Aaj tay kar de ki tere liye kon jyada karibi hai."

...

"Minnie, ghar ja tu. Or ha, tere Hanuman uncle ko bol de ki woh bhi ghar jaye."

"Par Babes..."

"Tujhe jitna keh rahi hu utna kar. Mujhe or tere Beeji-Dadu ko thodi baat karni hai."

...

Chaahat Hai Agar, Aake Mujhse Mil Jaa Tu
Yaa Phir Aisaa Kar, Dharati Se Milaa De Mujhko
Tu Hi Re, Tu Hi Re, Tere Bina Main Kaise Jiyu
Aajaa Re, Aajaa Re, Yu Hi Tadpa Na Tu Mujhko

Hanuman sat down on the steps to the barsaati, his head in his hands. He didn't sob, no, but he let his tears fall freely. So what if Minnie was right there, watching him? His world was this close to shattering around his feet, he was allowed a moment of vulnerability.

Things had taken a terrible turn. Babita had been forced to choose between him and Veer Balika's Beeji-Dadu. That really left him no chance, did it? They were her daughter's grandparents, their blood flowed in Minnie's veins. They used to be as important to Babita as her own parents, perhaps still were. Against that, who was he? He was just a guy who decided to help them out of respect for his late wife and her ideals, then ended up falling in love with Babita. It was his fault that he got his hopes too high even when she repeatedly said she wasn't looking for love. Why would she ever choose him over them?

Maut Aur, Zindagi, Tere Haathon Mein De Diya Re

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Babita stormed through the doors of the haveli, with stone cold eyes and a stern face. Hanuman saw her gaze fall on Minnie, soften at the sight of her daughter, then reach him. He wondered if he should be preparing himself to be told that he was no longer a part of the mother-daughter's life.

Hanuman stood up, his eyes refusing to meet Babita's, and started, "Jee, main-"

Whatever he had to say was cut right off when Babita ran straight into his arms, almost making him lose his balance. Babita, with her arms around his waist. Babita, with her forehead resting against the crook of his neck. Babita, crying her heart out. Babita, right here, with him.

Aayi Re, Aayi Re, Le Main Aayi Hu Tere Liye
Toda Re, Toda Re, Har Bandhan Ko Pyar Ke Liye
Jaan Re, Jaan Re, Aaj Tujhamein Sama Jaau Main
Dil Re Dil Re, Teri Saanson Mein Bas Jaau Main

Hanuman's arms immediately moved to clutch her closer. Sobs that he had so desperately suppressed deep within himself managed to escape his throat, as the realisation of what must have gone down at Naaem Bi's house dawned on him.

He suddenly remembered Minnie standing there. Softly called out, "Veer Balika?" He did not know how she would react. After all, she was a kid still trying to process her parents' violent divorce, and her dad's less-than-successful remarriage. Now her mother severing away all ties with her grandparents, without even telling her first, was bound to sting. Considering past experience, he should probably expect an angry outburst, hiding innumerable fears and insecurities that the girl had always needed to bury, conceal from the world.

Minnie proved him wrong. May be Babita had talked to her about this before. May be she knew her mother's mind better than he thought she did, she was a smart girl after all. Teary, but determined, Minnie just walked over and wrapped them both in a hug, tender, warm, and accepting. So warm and accepting, that it made Babita break down in tears all over again, that it made Hanuman wonder how he ever got so lucky to have met the mother-daughter duo.

Sau Baar Bulaaye Main Sau Baar Aaun, Ik Baar Jo Dil Diya
Ik Aankh Roye To Duji Bolo, Soyegi Kaise Bhala
In Pyaar Ki Raahon Mein Patthar Hain Kitane , Un Sab Ko Hi Paar Kiya
Ek Nadi Hoon Main Chaahat Bhari Aaj Milne, Saagar Ko Aayi Yahaan
Sajnaa, Sajnaa, Aaj Aansu Bhi Meethe Lage

...

Hanuman did not know how long the three of them stayed there, arms around each other. He did not know how this would change his life, change their lives. But that was a question for later. Right now, this was enough.

...

So Amazing, when it will come in the serial Tarasna padega hume.

Until Mini dominates, I didn’t know about Babita ek Kadam Bhi age badhayegi.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indulatha

So Amazing, when it will come in the serial Tarasna padega hume.

Until Mini dominates, I didn’t know about Babita ek Kadam Bhi age badhayegi.

Why does Babita refuse to take her own decisions and gives in to Minnie's demands every time for heaven's sake 😡

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

Thank you so much, I'm glad you loved it! ❤️😳

I am now officialy obsessed with your write up 👏❤️!!! I actualy dreamed the entire HANITA scene during my nap🤣.. But have to say that was beautiful,beyond perfect☺️. Now I can`t wait to watch it on screen .Keep writing whenever you have time.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Needblessings

I am now officialy obsessed with your write up 👏❤️!!! I actualy dreamed the entire HANITA scene during my nap🤣.. But have to say that was beautiful,beyond perfect☺️. Now I can`t wait to watch it on screen .Keep writing whenever you have time.

Oh my god really?! 🤣❤️

I do have a few more story ideas, I'm trying to work on them as soon as possible ❤️😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Cant wait to read this wow thanks ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Totally loved it. Finally I could get a hand on at least one Hanita os/ff. Please do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: YuvanshiG

Totally loved it. Finally I could get a hand on at least one Hanita os/ff. Please do write more

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! 😄💞

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Why don't they show something like this? I want THIS AND ONLY THIS RIGHT NOW!

Tu hi rey is my favorite favorite song and what better than this scene to represent its feel?

OMG. This has to be my favorite out of all your stories. Just hitting the bull's eye.

I know, it's swayed too much off the reality of the show but it's so so good to imagine, especially at this stage.

Now what shall I do today with Babita talking of leaving, after reading this

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Why don't they show something like this? I want THIS AND ONLY THIS RIGHT NOW!

Tu hi rey is my favorite favorite song and what better than this scene to represent its feel?

OMG. This has to be my favorite out of all your stories. Just hitting the bull's eye.

I know, it's swayed too much off the reality of the show but it's so so good to imagine, especially at this stage.

Now what shall I do today with Babita talking of leaving, after reading this

Thank youuu!! ❤️🤗 Matlab, pehli likhi hui story hi favourite ho gayi aapki 😆

Even at that stage, we really needed some Hanita moments. And AD was soooooo good that I ended up writing in the middle of the night 😅

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

Thank youuu!! ❤️🤗 Matlab, pehli likhi hui story hi favourite ho gayi aapki 😆

Even at that stage, we really needed some Hanita moments. And AD was soooooo good that I ended up writing in the middle of the night 😅

Yes yahi favorite hai!

I'm gonna read this a few more times till these people start interacting for real

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