OS - Mini's Dad - Part 3 pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry for editing issues.. will correct tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago
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keep writing , we would love to read more from u .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awww.... Riti meri jaan... Rula diya mujhe literally.....😭


But khushi ki aansoon se....

So beautiful bond.....

Ab jaldi jaldi Hanuman and Babita se Hanita bana do..❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully written OS Mini's Dad.....Hanuman Singh

Loved it.

Edited by sheeluneelu - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great..best thing about this OS was it seems so natural yet beautiful...but want something for hanuman and babita

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing os. Loved it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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your os proved that silence have their own words.Action speaks more than expression.

beautiful ending❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rosellia

your os proved that silence have their own words.Action speaks more than expression.

beautiful ending❤️

Ending???😯But what about Hanita?? Will they just be sharing living space un the haveli? Will Minnie not do anything about her Babes and HS relationship before she leaves? Riti plz continue this soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTDeewani

Ending???😯But what about Hanita?? Will they just be sharing living space un the haveli? Will Minnie not do anything about her Babes and HS relationship before she leaves? Riti plz continue this soon...

i mean to say ending of this part of os😆

last lines of os was so beautiful

ofcourse riti pls continue i want to read further😊

Edited by Rosellia - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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🤗Thank you all for your lovely comments

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