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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Honey

Shumi di, wonderful FF... thanks 😃Just like Ishq Sufiyana 😃 ...wish soon you say it is better than ishq sufiyana
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: archana.d

hii shumi wating for ur nxt update.???

will update today😃
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thanks for ur rply shumi :) :) love u 🤗
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PART-6

for the next one week siddhi was busy with her work, had no chance to interact with kunal.she went through all the paper works of canteen and catering department and was unhappy with that department.she told catering department people to bring all the files for checking.for the past 10 days she was working on that and was tired of doing it.she closed the files , leaned back on the chair and relaxed.she looked in to the wall clock.it was 1.10pm. for the past two days she was thinking to visit the canteen personally to clarify the doubts.she decided to visit today.
she got up from her seat ,fixed her saree and walked out of her cabin...walked towards the canteen...
canteen:
as it was lunch break...canteen was over crowded .the workers wished her and moved to give way to her to get in.she wished them back while getting in.when she stepped in to the canteen...some of the workers who were sitting and eating stood up to wish her.

siddhi:' please sit ...don't get up while you are eating...food deserve more respect than me...😊'she told them politely with a friendly smile.as she thought the canteen was not that clean...she looked around the canteen with a slight disgust on her face she looked nook and corner of it...while looking around her sight hooked on to a table for few moment.yep..she found kunal sitting beside a worker and eating kichdi with a plastic spoon.the worker
is from his unit , he is wearing kaki uniform...different unit workers have different colour uniform...so that from the very sight of uniform we can say which unit workers they are...
kunal did not noticed her.he was looking at his plate and eating his food.he was wearing cream colour plain full sleeve shirt, folded his sleeve just above the wrist...soon siddhi remembered her purpose of coming to canteen and moved to the counter.the canteen people came running to her for service.
siddhi: 'wo yellow wala food give me...😊'she pointed out the kichdi and told in half hindi half english.

'wo kichdi hai...😆'..a worker standing beside her chuckle ...'
siddhi: 'oh! whatever...give me sample of that..'she don't want to high light that she forgot the name of indian foods.
the canteen man served her the kichdi in a small plate along with a spoon..she took spoon full of kichdi and put it in her mouth...

siddhi:' eww...'her pretty face shrunk with disgust.she put back the spoon in the plate abruptly...looked at the canteen people with anger.
siddhi: ' what the hell food this is?😡...yeh khana workers ko khila yenge! if this type of food they eat kya kam karenge wo?😡...called the catering in charge...'she screamed.catering supervisor appeared in front of her in no time.
siddhi:'ye kay hai...?😡'she showed the food plate.
supervisor:'kichdi...😊'he said slowly.siddhi got annoyed with his stupid answer.
siddhi:'i know that..eat the food..khaye yeh..😡'she told her to eat the kichdi.supervisor stood silently.
siddhi:'kabi kabi tum bhi khaya karo...then only you will know the quality of your food ...?😡'
supervisor:'ma'am yeh khana concession price mai hai.bahar kay mol se bahut sasta hai...😊'
siddhi:'so ...?that doesn't mean you can serve bad quality food to them.look..😡!!!! they are loyal workers of this company.i would like them to have a good meal atleast a day.from tomorrow onwards sample food should come to my table before it was served to them...?she showed her fingers at the workers.'if you can't i don't mind to cancel your contract and with in no time i can arrange for the other caterer...by the way i want to see the canteen clean...do you understand?😡' she said in warning tone,
the whole canteen went in pin drop silence.even though kunal was looking at his food and eating he was listening to her
'keeping aside her attitude she is a good hearted girl'...the thought crossed his mind...he stopped eating...leisurely raised his head and turned towards her...she was standing near the counter and firing them...his eyes stuck on her.she stood like a marble statue...peacock blue plain silk sari with a thin silver border ,sleeveless matching blouse...the sari was elegantly flowing on her shoulder and she was looking gorgeous...the way she was shaking her head with a silky short hair cut was eye catching...he tried to take off his eyes from her...but could not... he was stunned by her look ! first time he hooked on to her !...he tried to swallow the kichdi ...but it refuse to go inside... stuck in his throat ...he started coughing...

worker:'sir...paani lo...'the worker sitting beside him took the water and helped him to drink...the water too refuse to go in...he was chocked.
worker:'aap teek tho hai na sir?...😔"
kunal:'i am ok...' he pushed the chair back...left the food and walked out of the canteen.
after two days siddhi was still working on canteen files.the time was 12:50 pm.she took the phone and dialled the number.
siddhi: 'i need your help... will you please come to my office..."with in few minutes kunal was in her office.she wanted to discuss about the development of canteen.

siddhi:'you may sit...' she showed him the chair while studying in to her files.

kunal:...without hesitating he sat in front of her.
siddhi: ' mr.kunal chopda... i have some suggestions... before finalise them i would like to discuss with you (actually raj told her to take his advice before taking any decision...)...' she spoke fluently with british accent mixed with indian ...

kunal:'sure...😊'

siddhi:' you may be knowing the canteen is over crowded...it should be extended...all the furniture should be replaced, they are all very old and some of them are broken too...about the menu...every time the same kichidi, daal , roti, chawal...would like to introduce more items ... of course simple ones...'kunal was listening to her carefully...he liked all her suggestions ...she was pointing out the files with the right hand which has no accessories like bangle...finger ring...not even nail polish...her hand was looking as if it was made up of smooth and polished ivory...thin long fingers, pink, healthy and clean trimmed nails...it was like close up look of the statue what he saw in the canteen!...when kunal was peeping in to the file ...he could feel her feminine fragrance...

she was discussing till 1.40pm. soon after the discussion kunal stood up to leave as if he was already late.

siddhi:' you did not say your opinion😕...do you have any recommendation...' she stopped him.

kunal:' no...' he said fixing his handcuff.

siddhi:...no..😕'

kunal:'out sketch of your proposals are perfect...😊' he was in a hurry to go.

siddhi:' thanks!...😃...' she smiled with satisfaction.she closed the file and stood up.

kunal:...without responding to her thanks he walked fast towards the door.

siddhi:' ruko...'...she came out of her seat. by that time kunal reached the door , grabbed the door knob to open the door.


kunal:😕...he left the door and turned towards her.

siddhi:' canteen lunch time is over... right?...' she asked looking at her wrist.

kunal:'yeah...it won't be crowded now...you can visit if you want...' he suggested.

siddhi:'have lunch with me..." she said on spur of moment.
kunal:😲 😕...he was completely knock out...did not expect this invitation.it took few second for him to understand / react /reply.
kunal: 'it is ok...' he don't want to stay further, he pulled the door again to open...
siddhi:' you said lunch time is over in canteen now ...' she said.
kunal:'not a problem , i can manage...' he tried to avoid again.
siddhi:' but for me it is a problem...i don't like to see any of our staff working with empty stomach...that will reduce the efficiency of their work...'she walked towards the sofa which was placed in one side of the room .in front of the sofa a big hot pack was kept on the tea table.already out side of her cabin the red light was on which says not to disturb.

first time kunal is seeing her very calm and quite...he don't want to displease her or make her angry by refusing her again.

kunal:😒...he stood still looking at her.

siddhi:' come...😊' she sat in one corner of the sofa leaving the other corner for kunal to sit.

he went and sat beside her .it is only a two seater sofa...there was no much distance between them.she opened the hot pack and served the food in the plate.it was chicken pulao with cucumber and yogurt salad... her favorite food. the whole room was filled with the smell of chicken pulao. she gave the plate to him.

kunal:' 😔...he took it unwillingly.for few seconds he did not eat...he was simply holding the plate and staring at the food...and looking at siddhi.
siddhi:'have it...'she gave the spoon thinking that he is feeling shy to eat.
kunal took one spoon full of pulao and put it in his mouth...instantly his face shrunk ...he tried to swallow..he took one more spoon and stuffed in his mouth ...siddhi was looking at his weird way of eating...he tried to stuff one more spoon without swallowing previous mouths...next movement the food fall out of his mouth...he spit the food in the plate!

kunal: 'i am sorry ...' he place the plate down...moved out of the sofa..'excuse me...'he said to her without looking at her.without waiting for her action or reply he walked fast and went out of her cabin.
every think happened with few minutes...which siddhi did not expected...

siddhi:😔😕...she looked at kunal rushing out .it took few seconds to come back to her sense.she could not understand why he did not eat' she took one spoon of pulao and tasted...it was delicious...and more over it was her favorite food too...

siddhi:😡...she got so mad... 'what did he think of himself ? he can eat such a worst kichidi in the canteen... but he don't like to eat malik house food...😡 insult to me...' she lost her cool temper... pushed the hot pack with anger from the table...the hot pack rolled down and the food spilled all around...

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PART-7
few more days passed without any remarkable face off or tension between siddhi and kunal.
kunal's apartment:
kunal lives in 1200 square feet double bed room apartment in a posh area of delhi.he own that apartment.it has a big modern kitchen with wooden cabinets, all advanced electrical appliances like cooking range,micro oven,sandwich maker, bread toaster, fridge..etc...attached to it a dinning hall furnished with six seater dinning table.a luxuriously furnished living room with a flat screen TV,...both the bed rooms are neatly decorated with costly curtains, bed spreads,pillows with a ward robe and attached bath room .
one fine friday (weekend) night: kunal was sitting in the living room couch and watching news in the TV.from the kitchen THAKRAL a 60 year old man came to the hall wiping his hands.
thakral:'saab mai ne sab kaam katam kardiya...ab mai chalta hun...😃' he wanted to leave. THAKRAL is kunal's servant who comes and does all the house hold work like cooking ,washing (including wash room 🤣),cleaning dusting, mobbing etc...🤣
kunal:'teek hai...' he switched off the TV and got up.he lives in that apartment all alone.i will let you know about his parents later.
kunal went to his bed room and fall flat on the bed, don't even care to place his head on the pillow.he was so tired of his office work.just needed to lie, soon went in to deep sleep.middle of his sound sleep his cell started ringing continuously.he don't want to wake up at all.unwillingly he opened his eyes,switch on the light and looked in to his wrist watch.it was night 2 am.
kunal: ' iss waqt kun hai...?😕...may be wrong number...'with a question mark on his face lazily he took the phone and attended.

before telling hello he screamed ' k...y..a...?😲
it was dadima's phone.'mai abhi aa raha hun...😲 ' he jumped out of the bed ...garbed a shirt from his ward robe...hurriedly wore it in no time,took the car key, pushed his feet in to the chappals...rushed out of the apartment.since it was odd time there was not much traffic ...he could easily speed up...he raced on the road... parked the car in the city hospital public parking lot... slammed the door...did not even care to close the door properly...rushed in to the casualty department...no need for him to ask others ..he knows the way to ICU.
when he reached the casualty he saw dadima and siddhi were standing and crying out side.he reached them in hustle...
kunal:'sir ab kaise hai...?😕" he asked them while he was gasping,but non was in a position to answer him...

siddhi:😭

dadima:😭
kunal:'maasi ji...' he hold her around her shoulder.took few deep breath to enable him to speak.
kunal:'dheeraj rakhiye... sir ko kuch nahi ho ga..."he said to dadima in a promising tone...looking at siddhi.

siddhi:😭...she was in her baby pink satin night wear , leaning on the side wall for support standing weeping.

dadima:😭...she wiped her eyes.

kunal:'aap dekna...sir will me fine soon...' he kept on saying consoling words.
after a long time doctors came out of the casualty room.at once all three rushed to the doctors.
kunal:' how is he?😔' he was the one who has the courage to question the doctor.

doctor:'he is out of danger now...he is improving too...' kunal sighed with relief and looked at siddhi expecting her to calm down.

siddhi: 😭...
doctor:'still...his life is under risk as it is his second stroke...with in a year time he got twice...' he continued.

siddhi:😲...she was shocked to know that it is his second attack.
"what!😲 this is his second stroke?...?😲"she never knew that.when first time he had the stroke siddhi was in UK and it was her mid term exams time. hence kunal and dadima decided not to inform her.

siddhi: 😡 😔 😭...she looked at kunal with accusation...'...he was my so called care taker...who did not even let me know about dad's heath...'tears rolled down on her cheeks.

kunal:... felt sorry for her.he wanted to console her...convince her...explain her the reason why they did not inform her but couldn't. he was just able to give a sorry look to her...
doctor:'ji...yeh unn ka second stroke hai...he can't with stand third stroke...' doctor continued...

siddhi:😭

dadima:😭
kunal :'we want to see him...' he was desperate.
doctor:'not now...he is still unconscious...we want to keep him under observation for another 10 hours...'
all three were waited out side the casualty restlessly.

siddhi:😭...she was crying constantly.her small sharp nose and eyes became red and dirty. kunal looked at her.it was heart wrenching to see her in that condition...siddhi! who dominates hundreds of workers ...who make them run on her finger movements...who always try to find fault with him...adamant in letting him down...keeps her anger and attitude on her nose tip...was crying!...he stared at her helplessly...
he felt that she need somebody of her age group to stand beside her and console her...some ones shoulder to rest...she need some one to wipe her tears...soon he grabbed his cell and called some of her cousins . with in an hour time few more people gathered in front of casualty. Rana one of siddhi's close cousin stood beside her, holding her around the shoulder...wiping her tears...and consoling her.
it was morning 9am when raj got his conscious.doctor came and told them " you can meet him...but not all together...make sure that he don't strain himself much..." he gave conditional permission.
siddhi and dadima rushed towards the room.kunal too want to go. raj is not just a boss to kunal...more than that...kunal lost his father 13 years ago.after that when he met raj he saw his father in him.when he came to know that raj was his father's friend he became more close to him.
kunal:😒...he stood in his place and looked at siddhi and dadima. dadima understood his feelings.she knew raj and kunal are how close to each other...more like father and son.
dadima:'kunal tum bhi aao...' kunal don't want to miss that invitation and followed them immediately. raj was lying on the bed.some time before they removed the oxygen mask from him.he was looking lethargic and exhausted .siddhi and dadima went and stood beside his left hand side. kunal stood beside his right hand side.all three can see fear for death in his eyes.

siddhi:😭...tears started rolling down again for siddhi. she could not see her dad on death bed.
raj:' si...ddhii...😔" he called her in his feeble tone.

siddhi:😭 ...she sat beside him.
raj:'sid...dhi... ro maat ..." he tried to rise his hand to wipe her tears but failed.he could hardly move his fingers.
siddhi:😭... she could not stop crying...she could not speak.

raj:😔...he looked at siddhi with concern.

siddhi:😭 ...
raj:😔...he turned to his right side with struggle and looked at kunal.

kunal:' sir...' he moved more close to him.

raj:'😔...'by his head movement he told him to come closer. kunal too understood his action , went and sat beside him on the other side and took his hand in his hands.
kunal:'sir aapko kuch nahi hua...aap bilkul teek hai..." he said in broken voice , could not speak properly.
raj: ' ku...nnal...i know i can't withstand one more stroke...mujhe meri fikar nahi hai...'he looked at siddhi...

raj:' ...meri bachi ki bahut fikar ho rahi hai...😭...mere baad wo bilkul akeli ho jaye gi...😭'...tears brimmed in his eyes.

siddhi:😭 ...his words made her more dejected
kunal: 'sir ... kuch nahi hoga aapko...kuch nahi...' raj did not listen to him.
raj: 'kunal mujhe ek wada karo...' he struggled to breath.
kunal:' ...😔'he said holding his hands in to his.
raj:'wada karo...tum siddhi ka ghayal rakho ge...'kunal looked at siddhi.

siddhi:😭 ...she was still crying.
kunal: 'zaroor rakhun ga sir...aap fikar maat kijiye...😭'he said emotionally.
raj:😕...he was not satisfied with his words of wada. he looked at kunal for few seconds.

kunal:'trust me...sir...mai wada nibhaunga...zindagi bhar... 😭' he said with tears.

raj:'par... zindagi bhar ka khyal tho ek pati hi raksak ta hai...😒'

kunal:😕 he could not understand what he is hinting.
kunal:' tum meri beti se shaadi karlo...'he said as simple as that.
kunal:😲 ...taken aback with his words. he was speechless...a sharp feeling of shock and shiver passed through his veins.raj hold kunal's shivering hand with his both the hands as his action of request...as if asking some thing from him.

siddhi:😭 ...

raj:'...tum siddhi se shaadi karlo...' he said again.

kunal:😲... looked at siddhi.

siddhi:😭 ...she went completely blank.she was not in a position to understand what is going on.raj turned towards siddhi...touched her cheek with passion..
raj:'...siddhi...mere baad srif kunal hi tumai sambhal sake ga...i have seen him taking care of you...jab tum UK mai thi wahi tumhara khayal rakta tha...muj se be ziyada...khud se bhi ziyada...' he struggled to breath.

siddhi:😭...she looked at dadima.

dadima: '😭... mujhe umeed hai tumai kunal bahut kush rakhay ga...' she said in a feeble voice stoking on her head as if she too agree with raj.

raj:😭

siddhi:😭...'she buried her face in his hands.her tears made raj's hand wet.

siddhi:'tumai kuch nahi hoga dad...kuch nahi hoga...😭" ...raj closed his eyes for a while . tears rolled down from his eyes too.he opened his eyes...pulled his hands from hers.with difficulty removed his ruby finger ring and gave it to siddhi. siddhi understood what he was trying to tell.

siddhi:😭...she looked at kunal.
kunal:😲...dumbfounded!

raj: 'siddhi...mujpe bharo sa karo...🤢'

siddhi:😭...

raj:' mai sukoon se marna chahta hun...🤢' he took kunal's hand and showed to siddhi.

kunal:😲...he was paralyze...benumbed...he could not understand how to react...raj's delicate health did not permit either siddhi or kunal to speak.

siddhi:'😭...after few dead seconds siddhi slowly extended her left hand and took his right palm. it was their first physical contact. both the hands were freezing cold as if there was no body heat to transform...and their fingers were vibrating... dadima placed her palm on her back to ease her.
siddhi:😭...with the help of dadima siddhi slide the ring in his ring finger.in the same hand kunal was wearing a ring in his little finger which was his mother's.it is just a plane solid gold ring.no design in it. dadima removed that ring and gave it to kunal. without saying any thing he put the finger ring in her right hand ring finger.it fit perfectly in her ring finger.
raj:😭 😃...he was so happy to see them engaged...he wiped his eyes and hugged both of them with his both the hands from both the side.
kunal and siddhi were still under shock...kunal alternatively looked at the ruby ring and siddhi.he was stuck with mixed emotions...every thing went on before he could think or act.

he thought...'kaisa hai yeh bandhan...???😲...kitna ajeeb sa ...😕' he never expected that this could happen in his life.he felt uncomfortable with his weird emotions.
till the nurse come and told them to go out they were sitting with raj with no words to speak.later they came out.
they were sitting out side for a long time with out looking at each other... drown deep in their thoughts.it was afternoon 2 pm.the doctor came and checked raj.
doctor:' he is improving very fast.still we can't discharge him now...'
kunal: 'when he is likely to get discharged...'
doctor:' may be night 9 pm you can check out...'

as raj was improving and siddhi too was trying to keep herself calm her cousins wanted to leave the hospital.

kunal:'maasi ji aap bhi ghar jaye ye...poori raat aap yahan ho...aap ki BP bad jaye gi...you need to rest...😒' by force he send dadima home with siddhi's cousins.

kunal and siddhi were left alone in the hospital...siddhi was sitting on a long bench , closing her eyes ,leaning on the back of the bench.

kunal:...he looked at her...she was ...lifeless...like a weathered flower!...ailing chick!

kunal:...with lot of hesitation he went and sat beside her , taking care to leave distance between them.

siddhi:😔...she opened her eyes...without changing her posture looked at him.

kunal;' wo...mai...tum...😒' he could not say what he wanted to.
siddhi:😭 ... tears started rolling on her dry cheek again.

kunal:'please...no need to worry... mai iss kay bare mai sir se baat karun ga...😔' he said looking at his ruby finger ring.

siddhi:😭 ...she looked at her ring finger.

kunal:'as of now this is a tonic for him...tum dek na ...wo bahut jald teek hoja yen ge...' he said with confident.

siddhi:😭...she too realize what he said was right.

kunal:' let him get well...we will talk to him...😔' he convinced.

siddhi:😭...

kunal:'tumare marzi kay bina kuch nahi hoga...yeh mera wada hai...😒' he promised.

siddhi:😭...his promising words gave a kind of relief to her.

till 9 pm kunal and siddhi stayed there without speaking much ...frequently looking at each other...around 9 raj was discharged, after paying hospital bills...they came back to malik home.

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Posted: 12 years ago
2parts in one go.. awsum👏 thank u so much🤗and
thakral as kunal's servant..🤣 i love it.. and thn kunal and siddhi's sudden engagement.. hope it wont brk😕.. waitin to read futher😊 and thank for the pm too😊
Edited by archana.d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Shumi Di..😊

Di cheating cheating... U said 2 parts.. & its one..😆
Kya comment du.. words nahi hai.. its just awesome,👏👏👏 👏beautiful fantastic.. superb..
blockbuster,,,...👏👏⭐️

remo's way- This is it... 👏👏👏
Loved it... 😊

thanks for the pm too..

Plz next update soon... plz..

Anyway if u hv some appreciation words let me knw.. bcz meri dictionary mein to khatam ho gaye...😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... Loved it a lot..
Takral bangaya naukar..super..
Update nxt part asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shumi, you are too good...
I've been constantly saying this & now, you've proved the same, yet again!!
Thakral as Kunal's servant... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣

The moment I read this, I forgot even about charming & adorable Siddhi... 😆 😆

Here's one more reason to prove why I consider you as a best writer.. 😆

Now, you've raised my hopes of seeing Richa as Kunal's maid... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

As a result, I've no hesitation in admitting that I liked these parts mainly because of "revenge" that you've taken from Thakral.. 🤣

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