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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Few lines from one who feels dejected from life:

"Zindagi kaise ji jati he bhul gaya hu mein,

ya phir kabhi jana hi nahi ki jina kya hai;

kisi bhi manzil ki taraf nahi bath raha,

bas yoohi rashton se guzar raha hu mein;

koi manzil samne se pukar le mujhe,

mein kaha kisi manzil ko thoondth paoonga;

na mujhe log jan paye he, na yeh zindagi,

jina to dur, kabhi mein zindagi ko pehchan bhi paoonga?"

Edited by jay_bpm - 12 years ago

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Finally, found a thread with poems 😃

Good writing Jay!👏

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: BHAVI1972
Finally, found a thread with poems 😃
Good writing Jay!👏

Thanks😳

I know you too write very well. Please share some of it here if you can😃

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Salman

@TheBhai

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very Good Jay... My Kind of Dhaaga...

har ek baat pe kehte ho tum ke 'too kya hai' ?

tumheeN kaho ke yeh andaaz-e-guftgoo kya hai?

ragoN meiN dauDte phirne ke ham naheeN qaayal

jab aaNkh hee se na Tapka to phir lahoo kya hai ?

unke dekhe se jo aa jaatee hai muNh par raunaq

woh samajhte haiN ke beemaar ka haal achcha hai

qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN

maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab mein

(Qaasid is Postman)

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wah Salmanbhai,

Khub kaha he aapne👏👏👏

umid he aur aise kai nagme aap hame sunayenge.

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: snmalik4
Very Good Jay... My Kind of Dhaaga...

har ek baat pe kehte ho tum ke 'too kya hai' ?
tumheeN kaho ke yeh andaaz-e-guftgoo kya hai?

ragoN meiN dauDte phirne ke ham naheeN qaayal
jab aaNkh hee se na Tapka to phir lahoo kya hai ?

unke dekhe se jo aa jaatee hai muNh par raunaq
woh samajhte haiN ke beemaar ka haal achcha hai

qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN
maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab mein

(Qaasid is Postman)

Forum ke Ghalib - wah wah wah wah

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jay_bpm

Thanks😳
I know you too write very well. Please share some of it here if you can😃

Jay - Chane ke ped per mat chadha 😆 😆 😆. Purvi ne pine tree per chadha ke rakha tha ...Mushkil se neeche utar payi hoon 😛

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BHAVI1972

Jay - Chane ke ped per mat chadha😆😆😆. Purvi ne pine tree per chadha ke rakha tha ...Mushkil se neeche utar payi hoon😛

That's the problem with you humble people 😛
See my ego looks for people who can continue praising no matter how bad it is 😆