FF Siddhi mat jaao mujhe chodke.. Updated pg -15 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malarkodi

Awesome update
...Cant wait to see you next...So plz do it fast Sree


thanks malar glad you love the update yaaar Dhamaka update update is on its way dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: paradigm

Great update. Waiting for the next part!!


thanks dear glad you liked it... yeah interesting twists ahead will be up by tonight

by the way how shwould I address u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hima2012


Just finished reading all the parts.. very well written.. please continue!


thanks hima ... will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: eshi.nl

kya timing par latka diya apnevery well writtenwaiting for next update


hahaha yAaar tabhi tho dil aur tej dhadkega na

will update it by tonite ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki-73

Awsome!!Im eagerly waiting for ur next update.Please update soon.


thanks nikki am happy that you liked the update . next one will be iup by tonite
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sinan_sinal

@sreerabhi hey dear very nicely executed FF loving each n every part especially the Part- 7 s tooo gud. thank you so much for the wonderful update n a request pls PM me wen next part s updated


yaaar thanks and glad tat u loved it ... suree I will PM you. by tonight u will have part 8 dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sreearabhi


yaaar thanks and glad tat u loved it ... suree I will PM you. by tonight u will have part 8 dear



waiting for ur next update eagerly dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sree eagerly waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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they both move towards the table and siddhi slips and kunals comes and catch her as she started wearing deep neck blouses her bare back and his hands come in touch ...they share a sweeet eye lock ...screen freezes...

PART *8

His hands gentleness crawiling on her skin made her feel as if she is a pearl which is floating in deep waters under the sea where moon light with full bliss wants to peirce into the pearl with its shine ...by creating ripples in the water while the twillight kissing each water droplet of occean reflecting the stars moving on it ...and all moon light starts with smiles and waters from the surface of the blue occean in that romantic night trying to squeeze of the pearl with love and the pearl happily floating in the deepwaters under the sea ... her heart melting ...like an ice subjectd to heat ...and her love from her eyes running down as an water falll from the great heigths washing off all the dirt (Pain) which got stagnet since years ...and its going to a new world where only she and her Man are there ...slowly looking and getting lost in her eyes Kunal stood properly and siddhi regained her selves but then ...the power went off ...and the windows just opened and welcomed them to a new paradise which they both were craving for ... there the beautiful romantic blissfilled breeze ... thrashed insdie the room carrying a tons of joules filled luminosity in the form of Moon light which too is crazily in qunech to pierce through all her body which is adored and draped with sky blue colored sarree with silver jeri...the transperent effect of the saree challenging every breeze thats peircing but only one thing which she and her feminity couldnt resist is Kunals pinning looks at her...his every look every breath is challenging to fight with her silence which she built years ago and got locked in it ...
His eyes were so intoxicant that one once if starts exploring the meaning behind those small eyes ...one can never dare to return back and one can never even repramind oneselves entering in it to explore ...those eyes were speaking volumes which were left incomplete unexpressed since years ...still waiting standing their and ordering every romantic breeze saying " Oh dear breeze dont you dare to touch thee, as I am plant born wanting and waiting for only thy breeze who is known to called as SIDDHI, so I am here standing as a Touch Me Not plant "
His eyes looking piercing deep in her eyes getting lost completely in hers ...opened his mouth to say a few words ...
" SIddhi, Siddhi, I love you, I love you, You are my life , without you I am a touch me not plant used for nothing...
SIddhi mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai bohoth zaroori baat hai ...woh kya hai ki mujhe 9 saal pehle kya baat hui thi aur tun e mujhe kyun chod diya aur us nafrat ka dikhawa ke peeche chupi hui pyaar sab sab pata chal gaya
pata hai siddi mein shaadi ke baaad humesha se sochta aya hai ki tm anand ki pyaar ho aur mere tum pe koyi haq nahi par kab kaise kaha nah i pata par mujhe tumse beinteha pyaar hogayi aur us raat teri ankho ki aasu mujhe bechain bana diya aur hiladiay aur meine apni chaav me tujhe apnaliya lekin mera mann ghabrata tha ki kya mein sahi kya tu mujhse pyaar kar ti ho ya nahi ...phir gult men jiya par uske baad jab hum ek doosre se apni pyaar ka izhaar kiya na tab mer izindagi ki bade khushi mili hai aur papa ban ne ka khushi bhi
phir jab sab kuch accha tha ...tu ne meri behen ki zindagi bachane vkram ko bachane teri birthday wali din se ek din pehle raat ko jake vikram ko rhit se bachayi aur tum khud unlogon chaa lmein phas gayi ...aur phir richa meri zindagi ke sabse badi bhoool us ladki hai ...apni obsessivity ke karan unhone tumhe mohra banake mujhe aur ...tum uski chal me phas ke mujhe azaadi dilane keliye tum apni hi parivaar se nafrat ki naatak ki aur hum sab ke dilon me tere liye ghrina paida karke chaligayi ...
pata hai siddi in juban pe to nafrat ki kadwa shabd sab log sunte hai lekin in seene andar jo dil chup hai woh har saas mein har jagah pe tumhi ko doondleti hai ...sapno mein yaadon mein khyalaon mein aisa ek pal nahi kata in 9 sall mein jab mein tumhe na yaad kiya ...
jab mein tujhe abhy ke saat dekha to dil ek dam jal gaya pata bhi nahi chal a ki mujhe kya ho ratha ...pani puri wala ke samne bhi ...teeka pani pi liya hai meine mein tumhe kisi aur ke kareeb kabhi bhi nahi deksakta itna pyaar karta hu mein tumse...
SIddi living that moment of her life as an acheivement of her true love gfetting lost in his eyes words and love ...listening ...
KUnal: aur ek taajub ki baat yeh hai ki humara bada beta anand zinda hai... us din mein tere haal puchne jail ayatha ...lekin mujhe richa takraiyaur uske haath mein humara bacha that...usne mujhe yeh bataya ki tu mera bacche ko paalna nahi chahti aur use maar dena chahti hai to meine use leliya ...jo anand ko tumne prize di thi ...woh tumhar a bada beta hai ...jise tumhe mara hua paida hua bolagaya tha ...
mein anand ke barein me bohoth posessive hogaya tha aur isliye meine tujhe kuch nahi bataya ...lekin mujhe kal jaaake sab sach pata chala ...kab kaha kaise tu mujhe mat pooch pls ...lekin ek baat mujhe tumse kehna hai ki...mein maaafi ke layak nahi hu...tumhari itni takleefon ki wajah mein huh...mujhe heena ka haq bhi nahi hai siddi ...
aur ha mujhe ye baat bhi pata chala ki humara cvhota beta anand Abhay ke paas hai aur tu isliye abhay ke paas majboori mei nrehrahi hai ...
siddhi ab aur nahi hume humare baccho ke saat humari pyaar bhari zindagi ko nahi terah se shurvwaad karna hai use pehle mein Richa ko sazaa dilwaake rahunga ...lekin uske liye mujhe tumhara saat, bharosa, pyar , sab kuch chahiye kyaa tum mere saat dogi ...? SIddhi please mujhe maaf kardo ...siddhi mujhe ek mauka do ...taki mein humari zindagi sudhar saku ...aur ...
siddhi still enjoying those moments of love and confession ...just like the way the buch of daffodls starts dancing with the very first touch of the romantic fblissful breeze touches it squeezingly at the river side ...with river waters romancing wi9th the reflection of the daffodils dance and here the cupid strikes their hearts ...
Kunal still waiting for her response ...gives her a card on which its written
" Haar mein bhi milti hai jeet ki khusi, GUm mein bhi khilti hai honto pe hasi, Zindagi ke dor is tarah tumse judi, ki tum toh lagti hojaise jadu ki pari
Dil ke har kone me naam tumhari hai, ye dl fid hai itna tum pe ki gulam tumhara hai, in hotonh se nikle jo har pal won naam tumhari hai, jo mili hai pal bar kizindagi hame tumhare liye woh hamari dhadkanome rehne wala shaks mehman tumhari hai"
I love you SIddhi...
SIddhi: Tears drops on the card...and she raises her head ...and looks in to his eyes...screen freezes ...
WHat will be her ansewr, will she support kunal? lets seein our next update ...
NExt part to be continued...
friends pls pls pls hit like button and do leave yoru lving comment ...
cheers,
sree
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey thanks for the update... but felt bad that i dont know to read hindi😭... so need to wait till mrng for my assistant ( my sis) to help me with...

By the way your descriptions were superb and i loved it...

Will edit it once my sister helps me with this😉

Thanks for the PM Sree 🤗

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Awesome yaar... do continue waiting for Siddhi's reply...
Edited by Malarkodi - 12 years ago

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