FF Siddhi mat jaao mujhe chodke.. Updated pg -15

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Friends,
looking at the current track, the way its moving, i couldnt refrain myself from coming up with this post... its just a random thought i have on this track... i hope you all will like it...
Part 1:
Its party time... siddhi is getting ready here kunal is full on in arranging and receiving guests and suddenly he spots his family in the hall and gets shocked as to what will be their reaction if they comes to know tha siddhi is his boss ...with a tension on his face ... he enters siddhis room. In siddhis room, siddhi is struggling to tie the dori of her blouse ... and thats when she hears the door sound ...and she assumes it to be sulekha ... and asks for help in tieing the dori...and kunal looking at his beautiful wife dumb struck ... he steps ahead with eyes down and ties the dori...
the very moment his hand touches her bare back while tieing siddhi realises that its kunal and wantedly she stands quiet for him to say some thing taking the pleasure of his touch after a long time and he clears his voice to let her know that its he and starts off saying,,,
hmhmhm ...siddhi turns at him with a hesitation in her face ...kunal aap yahaa ...
Kunal: woh mein actually woh...
Siddhi: bataaiyen kya baat hai kunal
Kunal: mere family members aye hue hai...neecha ...aur mn yeh nahi chahta hu ki tum unke saamne aaye sab ko bura lagega ...aur sab ke feelings bhi hurt hoge ...to pls tum neeche mat aaana
Siddhi: Per un sab ko kisne bulaya? aap toh bataya ki aap unhe yaha nahi leke ayenge phir ye sab?
Kunal: woh Abhay ne mujmhe bina bataye bula liya... ghar jake invite kiya ... hoga shayad/.
Siddhi: stands quite and nods ehr head in acceptance to his wish ...of not comming in front of his family...
Kunals goes downstaris ...and asks how did they come here and all
Abhay says that i have invited...them as a surprise for you... ok you guys pls carry on ..i will be back in few minutes and he brings siddhi
siddhi fails to convince abhay and as he compells her to come down he drags her into the crowd and in troduces siddhi as ,kunals boss to chopra family
the entire face of family turns buring red with flames n their eyes at siddhi though responding a tradition namaste to siddhi and Kunal snaps out at siddhi as she went against his words... thinking as to what she is upto ...
SIddhi wanted to take their blessings and she feels that its the right opportunity to touch their feet and she bends down and touches raj and veena's feet ...leaving them no option other than to bless her by touching her head... ...this act of siddhi surpurises every one among them and more suprised is kunal thinking that if she broke her ties with the family, and hates me y the hell is she showinhg this much respect...
in mdst of all this abhay intervenes and catches siddhis hand and takes her to introduce her to guests ...which throws kunals brave facade hatered face in flames of posessiveness and jealousy that abhay attempting to get close to his lady love... stands there watching abhay and siddhi...
abhay calls kunall too and introduces him to few of his guests and stake holders in his business...though kunal is wishing them his eyes were snapping at siddhi how she is behaving how she is responding to every one
siddhi observes this and she makes a move from that crowd ...comes to kunal and stops him ...
siddhi Kunal mein neeche aaana nahi chahti thi par
Kunal: TUm neche aana nahi chahti par kya siddhi kya ...kya bataane ayi ho mujhe... mere batane par bhi tune meri baat ko side line karke aagayi neeche..? kyun?
SIddhi: Nahi kunal woh Abhay ne force kiya tho ...mujhe aana padaaa.
KUnal: (Petrol added to flame) oh abhay ... hmmm itna maanti ho tum unhe ...ki mere manaa karne par bhi tu aagayi...
kis baat ka dukh jataau mein : iss baat ka ki tum meri baat ko na maaan ke uske baat ko maanti ho aaaj yar phir jaan buch ke ye sab
Siddhi: Nhi kunal jaisa aaap soch rahe hai waisa kuch bhi nahi ...
KUna: tujhe samajh me ata hai kya mein kya soch ta hu... waise abhay aab tumhara sab kuch haina...
SIddhi : aap baat ko kaha se kaha leke jaraha hai .kunal...aap galat soch rahe hai..
Kunal: mein mein galat soch raha hu...to tu abhay ke ghar mein kya krane rehti ho...kya rishta hai tumhara uske saath... khair mujhe koyi farak nahi padta...
siddhi: stands staring at him..abhay as usual comes to siddh and asks whats the matter they both are so seriously discussing...
Siddhi: woh abhay woh kuch nahi bas aisi hi...
Abhay: acha chalo...party shuru karna hai...
three leaves to main area...and Abhay addresses everyone why party what party and opens with a drink...and offers first to kunal and later moves towards siddhi and compells her to have one sip which she rejects sofly ...but while asking her he catches her hand ...and Kunal: on flames full flames his heart hitting peaks of jealousy , posessiveness starts like fountain...he gulps the entrie drink from the glass and moves towards bar ...
and here abhay requests siddhi for dancing with him ...
as per sulekhas request siddhi accepts to dance with abhay though not that comfortable ...
when she gives her hand to abhay kunal gets even more fumed and consumes drink ...and his life with siddhi flashes all those loveliest moments which they spent together ...
he turns and steps ahead towards siddhi...pushes abhay and when abhay asks is every thing fine ... he stops him with a gesture ...and grabs siddhi close to him ...and says : siddhi ko koy haath nahi lagaayega...
places his hand on her bare waist and pulls her even more harder towards his chest ... experiences her raising and fast beating heart beat and her eyes which glimpses like a deep forest ...where once entered its impossible to return back to the world but cant refrain from entering deep into it...
andsays Siddhi meri hai... sirf meri ...bohoth tadpa hu meir tere liye ... in 9 saalon mein ek pal bhi nahi kati ...tere yaad ke bina... siddhi kyu kiya tune aisa...
SIddhi: Bohoth dard horaha hai kunal.
KUnal: 9 saal mein iss dard mein jiya hai... koyi baat nahi kuch der ke liye bardash karo aur tumhe karna hi hoga... mere khatir...
they dance for quite some time ...
and every one starts dancing tooo
while dancing ...
kunal: SIddhi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ..ki tu kuch chupa rahi ho mujhse batao baat kya hai
on the other hand... the song changes to a fast beat ...
SIddhi: she is lost in his eyes in his touch in his arms feeling every inch of his close to hers ...she doesnt answer
Kunal: as he was expecting an answer from her ... he repeats batao siddhi bat kya hai...and he catches her even more tight which really hurts he r...
but she happily enjoys every pain given by him and says meine jo bhi kiya apni pyaar ke liya kiya ... kunal... aap kaise hai... aapki family i mean aapki wife richa aur aapka beta anand ...kaise hai...
on hearing this statement he gets enraged with anger ... and dances in a very harsh way ...with siddhi hurting her in every move ...
as he loses his balance he leaves her ...and stumps down... his family takes him away ...
Party ends and siddhi in her balcony thinking and recolecting kunals words expressions his behaviour and thinks that today whatever i saw in kunals eyes cant be hateredness but its just only love for me ... if he is moved on in his life ... then y i see only love n his eyes for me... if he still loves me ... what about richa ...richa made me do all that nonsense only to marry kunal... then what about that...everything seems to be confusing...and on top of it ...kunals son anand and my son anand are identical
how can all this be possible...whats the underlying fact of all this ... thinking that she places her hand where kunal touched her and she losts her self feeling his touch all over again ...
suddenly she gets a thought to konw about his personal life ... and thinks as to where can she get infor and she remembes office records and his biodata... she immediately takes the car and goes to office and checks his personal profile and comes to know that his marital status is single ... whcih leavs her in even more shock that if kunal is not married to richa, then who is that kid... anand..who is quite identical to her anand...
its in the monring :
Abhay calls Kunal and asks him to come early to the office ...kunal leaves for office and here siddhi tooo...
SIddhi reaches office befoe kunal and she enters abhays cabin...
Abhay May i come in ?
Abhay: Siddhi ao na tum itni jaldi...??? kya baat hai?
SIddhi: Mein woh actually aap mere baat ko agar bura na mane to mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai
Abhay: Haa kaho na
SIddhi: mein aapse kunal ke barein mein baat karna chahti hu..woh kal ki party ko lekar ...
Abhay: mujhe aaj kunal se iss baat pe hi baat karna hai isliye meine use jaldi offce bulya...
Siddhi: EK minute abhay, aap kunal se iss baat ke barein mein kuch nahi kahenge ...please
Abhay: What ? tujhe pata hai na unhone tere saat kinta bura behave kiya aur tu kehrahi hai ki mein use maaf kardooo
SIddhi: Mein maanti hu ki unhone jo bhi kiya acha nahi kiya par ...jab woh mere saat dance kar rahe the toh woh apne patni ke naame le rahe the ...i think he is disturbed ... aap bhi apne family khoya hai mein bhi kh o chuki ho ..aur KUnal ne bhi khoya hai na ...toh aksar zindagi mein kuch aise pal insaan ko hila deti hai shayad uska bhi haal wahi tha kal...so i request you to understand his state from his angle and forgive him and pls do not talk anything to him... please
Abhay: kis kism ki aurat ho tum yaar sab ke barein mein itna sochti ho ... tik hai mein kuch nahi kahunga promise baba ab tum chinta mat karo...
This entire conversation is witnessed by KUnal standing outside the cabin and thinks to self why the hell on the earth is siddhi being so good and submissive to him...why what s the reason?
Siddhi comes out and spots kunal and stares at him with shock expression..
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cheers,
Sree
Edited by Sreearabhi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fasa

i really loved it a lot

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hey thanks buddy actually i want to finish this today itself so you will get next update also in some time ...
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Nice FF. Do carry on with it :-)
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SIddhi not knowing how to react... she just moves to her cabin silently... she is desperate and curious to know everything aobut kunal in this 9 years what all happend with him...an d so she calls kunal to her cabin...
PART 2
KUnal : Aapne mujhe Bulaya Maaam
Siddhi: Haa woh mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai...isliye
KUnal: Agar aap mujhse kal ki baat karna hia toh I dont want to talk anything about it ...
Siddhi: Mein kal ki baat nahi par kuch aur baat karna chahti hu... Anand kaun hai... Aur aapke reconrds me toh aap single hai toh yeh bacha ?
Kunal: Shocked and worried with her questions ... mujhe personal life aur apke saat discuss karne mein interest nahi hai...behter yehi achaa hoga aapke liye ... agar aap in sab cheez mujhese nahi baat kare toh...
Waise bhi kis haq se aap mujh se e sare sawaal puch rahi ho...Maaam
aap hoti kaun ho mere liye ...
SIddhi: PLease kunal mujhe jawab dijiye... pls mujhe bhi aap ko ,kuch batana hai ...
KUnal: Aapko jo bhi batana hai aur jatana hai sab kuch aap ne bata diya hai aur ab kuch nahi bacha hai hum dono ke beech me taki mein sun saku ya ap bata sake... so p ls stop this here
SIddhi: Nahi kunal mein bolungi ... pls bataiye...
KUnal: Please siddhi... before I loose me temper just stop this ...
SIddhi: aaapko aaaj mujhe batana hi hoga kunal ki woh ladka kaun hai jise aap beta kehte hai
Kunal: he moves bit close tosiddhi9 and says ... tum aurat kehne ke layak bhi nahi ho... tum mere bete se dorr raho ho warna mein tumhari sacchayi sabke saamne ladoonga ...expose karunge teri ateet
aur tum woh aurat jo paiso keliye apni pati ko dhoka dekar chaligayi... tu mujhe ye saare sawaal puuch raahi ho ... tum mere liye mar chuki ho ...tu mere liye kuch bhi nahi ho... I hate you Siddhi Dont even show your face to me in this life ... aur aaj men bolta hu ki mein richa se shadi karunga tumhe yeh batane keliye ki mein aaj tumse pyar nahi karta...
SIddhi completely shaken with this statement, eyes filled with tears ... turns to the other side...
KUnal leaves the cabin ...
He calls richa and asks her to come to a restaurant ... and siddhi overhears this and follows kunal...
She sees KUnal talking and moving a bit close with richa and goes down gets jealous with the sight
Kunal observes siddhis presence and her jealous at that sight ...and thinks to self ...
if she hates me then why is she getting jealous by spotting me with richa ...and on top of it why is she favoring me in every aspect ...whats going on ... i should confront her on this ..why is she doing al this ...
kardiya aapne mere ssaath agar mujhe har pal is tarah marte hue dekhna hi thaa aapke to apne mujhe kyun ek patni maa aur beti banaya hai ..
jisse mein be inteha pyaar karti hu...use hi chodne keliye 9 saal pehle kyu mazboor kardiya...
aap chahte kya ho mujhse ... 9 saal pehle ...agar richa ne mujhse woh deal nahi ki hoti ...toh aaaj meri zindagi kisi aur mod pe hogi..mera anand mere aur kunal ke saath hote ... mera anand abhay ko papa nahi pukaarte aur mera kunal mere saath hote ...
aap richa jaise ladki ko azaadi deke mujhe kyu takleef mein dekhna chahte hai... meine kunal ko jail se bahar lane keliye ... richa ke baat mani taki woh kunal ke aginst case waapas leleti ... lekin unhone mujhe mere pariwaar se aur kunal se hamesha keliye door jane ke liye majboor kardi..aur na chahte hue bhi mujhe nafrat ki dikhawa karke apni hi pariwaar se xdur ho na pada ..aur un divorce papers mein again mein sign nahi karti toh kunal kabhibhi jail se bahar nahi nikalte ...
After watching richa nad kunal so close siddhi breaks down and she visits the part near powai lake which she use to visit earlier ...sits there thinking of her past life with Kunal
Just then KUnal follows her and stands behind her to watch what she will be doing ...
She speaks to herself a loud ... hey bhagwann yeh kya
mein kya karti... agar us samayi me kunal ko sach bataati toh pata nahi us gusse mein aaakar kunal kya kar baitta ... e sab soch ki mein chup chap richa ki baat maani ...
mein kunal ki khushi keliye kunal ko aage bhadte hue dekhne keliye mein khud mitgayi...par aaj kunal to age badne ki baat door ...woh law practice chod diya hai aur shadi nahi kiya hai ...aur woh bacha ...kaun hai .. ... wahi ke wahi hai aur phir se sharaab peene lage hai...
Aaaj to kunal ne ye baat bhi kehdiya hai ki woh mujhse nafrat karte hai... aur woh richa ke saat us resturant mein... and she keeps criying continuously...
Kunal is shocked shaked to the core on listening to her confession of past to herself and is left in tears ...
Nex t Part to be continued...
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Edited by Sreearabhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful update
cant wait to read what happens next. 👏
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Originally posted by: nikki-73

Wonderful update
cant wait to read what happens next. 👏

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Originally posted by: Shehnaz.K

Nice FF. Do carry on with it :-)

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Hi Sreerabhi,

Really Goood.👏 wonderful.. Please continue😊
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Originally posted by: Gayathri_MSK

Hi Sreerabhi,

Really Goood.👏 wonderful.. Please continue😊

thanks gayatri... you can call me sree... i promise to bring in interesting twists in the track...

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