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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowgirl

Nice chapter 😊 Somehow I felt you might have written this in a hurry, I don't know why though 😕 Looking forward to the next part 😊



Thanks ! Yes as a matter of fact I did write it in a hurry and couldnt make it as detailed as I would have liked to
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow pankhuri...awesum update...loved each & every part of it...the scene of kc with his baby was simply fab...along with kc even i was crying out of happiness...very well written dear...precap is just too gud...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Malarkodi

Fantastic update dear 😃



Thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rainzy04

Wow pankhuri...awesum update...loved each & every part of it...the scene of kc with his baby was simply fab...along with kc even i was crying out of happiness...very well written dear...precap is just too gud...waiting for the next part...



Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -apoorvas

wonderful update..😳



Thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 38

Seema walked into the nursery

Seema: Kunal Bhaiya!
Kunal: He is perfect isnt he?
Seema: Yes he is! Bhaiya Sia tab se zidd kar rahi hai ki woh hospital aana chahti hai!
Kunal: Arey abhi to bahut late ho gayi hai! De mujhe phone.. main apni princess ko samjhata hoon!

Kunal gently placed Akdoo Jr in Seema's arms who immediately started crying! Seema did her best to pacify him and Kunal did his best to pacify his princess

Sia: Papa! Baby kaisa! Sia ko Baby aur mummy se milna hai aur unko kissi karna hai!
Kunal: Hi princess! Baby oerfect hai bilkul aapki tarah! Aur woh bhi aap se milna chahta hai. Par abhi baby aur Sia dono ke sone ka time hai na! Aap kal aa jana!
Sia: Par papa!
Kunal: Par princess.. aap papa ki baat nahi sunoge!
Sia: Ok Papa! Par aap mummy aur baby ko Sia ki taraf se kiss karna! Good night Papa!
Kunal: Good night angel

Kunal went back into the nursery to find seema still struggling to get his son to stop crying! But the moment he came into Kunal's arms he stopped crying!

Seema: Accha bachu! Chachi tab se koshish kar rahi thi aur aap chup nahi huye! aur papa ki god mein aate hi chup!

Bhaiya ab main chalti hoon! Sia ko padosiyon ke ghar se laakar uske bed mein sulana hai!

Bye bhaiya! bye rajkumar!

Kunal took little Akdoo into Siddhi's room! He gently kissed Siddhi who was still unconscious. He then tried putting little akdoo to sleep but with little success. He then tried getting up and moving around and finally Akdoo Jr began nuzzling up to him and closing his eyes

Just then Siddhi opened her eyes and looked around groggily. Just then she caught the most beautiful sight in the world. Her strong, handsome husband was holding their baby most gently and dancing around the room slowly to rock him to sleep

Siddhi had tears in her eyes seeing them together. She didnt want to disturb the beautiful scene. But she wa salso keen on meeting her baby. Kunal and her baby!

Siddhi: Kunal!
Kunal's eyes began to sparkle as he turned to look at Siddhi. He slowly walked towards Siddhi just in time to prevent her from trying to get up. He placed the baby next to Siddhi. who placed her hands on him. She slowly moved her hand from his tiny hands to his chubby face. She bent over to kiss him and by this time had tears in her eyes!

Kunal placed his hands over Siddhi's and kissed both her and Akdoo Jr together

Siddhi: He is so beautiful! My Baby! Your baby!
Kunal: Our Baby! Thank you so much Siddhi! I have no words to desribe how happy I am
Siddhi! Neither do I
Kunal: My life was meaningless till you came in! Your presnece filled my life with joy happiness, peace and contentment. Then SIA came along to amplify our happiness! and now with this miracle our life is complete!
Siddhi smiled through her tears as Kunal bent down to kiss her. They remained like that for a long time. Holding each other's hand and looking at their baby.

After a while Kunal realized that Siddhi and little akdoo were asleep. He gently picked him up and placed him in the cradle. But as he was trying to move away he realized that the baby had gripped his finger. He smiled and sat down next to the cradle. And he sat like that all night with his hand in the cradle and little akdoo holding onto his finger

PRECAP: Harish Salve comes to the hospital


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey pankhuri... Its lovely... Needed...
Thanks for updating it on d rite time...
Kunal-jr. Akdoo scene was beautifuly written...
Sinal & jr. Akdoo scene ... Awsm...

Yaar plz continue next part asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey punkhuri, it was indeed very well written...i was visualising whole scene(kunal with baby scene) and simply loved it to the core...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Hey pankhuri... Its lovely... Needed...
Thanks for updating it on d rite time...
Kunal-jr. Akdoo scene was beautifuly written...
Sinal & jr. Akdoo scene ... Awsm...

Yaar plz continue next part asap...



Thanks a lot! I will try and update soon! 😳

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