Monday Episode - A sensual romantic SINAL?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lazing around the house,poking here and there, mind wandered to Monday's precap

Well, honestly I don't know wha to expect for I feel more negative stuff going to happen but I don't want to spoil my Sunday afternoon and thought of taking this on a more positive and romantic aspect.The way I like it and want it.!

We saw Siddhi on the floor on the floor nursing her ankle in the darkened room and Kunal came and offered his hand to her . She got up and room suddenly lit with light and both were shocked to see each other...going back in time 9 years ago

My wayward wandering mind imagination...Here it goes.

Seeing Siddhi after almost 9 years, Kunal was too disturbed to appreciate that he was in shock. He missed her and seeing her brought back all the sweet old memories. He did not want to go back there...was that really his Siddhi.?She has changed... When did she come back from jail? Why didn't she come to see him ? Did she hate him that much? But then again, why would she come to see him when he didn't make any attempt to see her at all? He did exactly what she told him to so wasn't it? Stayed away from her as she shouted on the last time he met her...She hated the sight of him but he still...no, he can't be after all these years. But a mocking voice reminded him that he wss fooling no one, least of all him . He is seeing her everyday in the form of Anand...sweet torment and torture.

Suddenly his mind roamed involuntarily back to her getting down from the limousine . She looked different , not his old Siddhi with subtle make up, innocence and a glowing girl who was always up to some mischief and was all shy when he took her into his arms and kissed her.

This Siddhi looked more glamorous, confident...appears that she has put her past behind her and forgotten him . Siddhi had moved on from their marriage in a startling speed. It was evident that she was enjoying her new found success, attention and the new man ' whom she placed her hand into.!

Thinking about that, made him fill with white heat of rage and fury. Was it jealousy?. His mind questioned the strength of his reaction of seeing Siddhi with another man. Why was he feeling betrayed.? She made it clear that she didn't want anything to do with him or their child, didn't she? He was truly rid of her wasn't he? Who was the other man who now hold Siddhi's heart.?

The thought of another man succeeding while he failed, outraged and challenged him. The thought of Siddhi with another man, touching and claiming her was something that he could not think about...and his subconscious mind was telling him something inevitable...

Why did she have to come back into his life now? What was she saying to Anand just now?

He hurriedly walked out of the room in pursuit of her. He needed to find her. He wanted answers. And she will answer him even if she didn't like it.

He was so disturbed in his thoughts, that he was brought back to reality when he heard a slight whimper...a cry. A woman's cry...He retreated his steps and followed the soft cries . It was coming from the room right at the far end of the corridor...there was no one else. Perhaps it was a child who might have wandered ...

He took long strides into the room where the cries were coming from. The room was quite dark, almost ...exxcept for a small ray of light thru the windows, there was no one there. Must have been his imagination and he was about to turn when he heard the whimper of cry again. This time he knew someone was there definitely.

As he slowly progressed further into the room, he trained his eyes to focus more intently and he could make out slightly someone sitting on the floor..A woman, who was nursing her foot. She must have fallen to the ground wearing those ridiculous five inches heel! . What's with women and high heels when they could not walk with stability and balance themselves?

He went and stood in front of the the small, slender woman, who face was now partially covered with tresses of curly black hair. He could not see her face. He leaned forward and extended his hand to her and asked in a concerned voice

"Are you alright? Looks, like you had a nasty fall...is your ankle hurting?

"Yes, it is...hope I did not sprain my ankle...the woman said confusedly in a soft panicd voice.

There was something familiar about the voice but he didn't ponder on it and went on to ask

"Here, why don't you take my hands and try to stand to see if your ankle is hurt or not"

The lady shook her head and Kunal said a little frustratedly "Listen lady, I am only trying to help. I am not going to attack you. If you rather wish to stay here in darkness and wait for someone else to rescue you, I have no problem with that too. So do want me to help you or not?

When she did not answer, Kunal a had enough, sighing heavily and was just about to turn to leave when he heard her whisper softly

"No,no, please don't go...I am scared of darkness. Sorry, I didn't mean to be rude just now by my silence. Please don't leave me here alone. I dropped my phone...don't know where it is now..Please help me.."

"Come on, hold to my arms for support, I'll slowly lift you to you feet, it's ok..." he said reassuringly.

The lady put her hands tentatively at first but gripped his arms tightly. Kunal slowly lifted her gently to her her feet , taking care not to rush her so that she does not add further injury to her foot.

Finally the woman was standing in front of him and she gave a sudden shocked cry for she would have fallen backwards. Instinctively Kunal caught her with his arms around her waist which landed her being crushed hard against his chest.

Squeezing her eyes shut , she turned her face upwards. Forcing her lips to smile, she opened her eyes to the man who was holding her to this chest with his arms around her waist.

The blood drained from the woman's face , for the man who was holding her was none other than her estranged husband ' Kunal , the father of her children . Whose babies she carried inside her and sacrificed her life for his happiness , only for him to betray her at the end by marrying Richa !. There was no mistaking this man. She could see thru some light through the lourve doors of the windows...yes, she knew this man...he was


"Kunal," she breathed... her hands flattened on his chest... .

Kunal's blinked his eyes at the sound of her voice and he was gazing at her with dazed shocked expression. Siddhi, forced herself to meet his gaze, acutely conscious of the uneven thud of her heart as she studied his heavy winged black brows, his nose and his mouth. and the signature style of the shadow of dark stubble on his jaw only added to his blatant sex appeal.

Time stood still for both of them. Kunal's eyes narrowed and he was staring her now with deep intense making Siddhi feel scared and something else. Excited. Did he guess what she was thinking? She felt embarrassed and blushed deeply.

Suddenly the memories of him holding her in embrances and hugs, refused to take a back seat and kept pouring in. She could not shut them out. He was still the same. The Proud angle of his head, the almost insolent air as his trailed his eyes over hers was full of arrogance. Siddhi was wishing the ground would swallow her...she wanted to be anywhere but not here but she wanted to feel heaven again in Kunal's arms.

Kunal tipped his head at an aggressive angle and he subjected his estranged wife to further scrutiny. He instantly noted the changes in her . What did she do with hair?. Straight hair was replaced by some curls. She was wearing more make up than before. Even her attire changed. She was wearing a sleeveless blouse and a lacy pastel saree with beautiful accessories. Long earings dangling and swinging sexily around when she moved her head to look up at him.

Her eyes soft and her full pink mouth was doing strange things to him . His chest felt strangely tight.

He eyes glittered and he murmured in a deep voice " Siddhi...?

Siddhi stiffened at his calling her name. She gazed back at him and felt very vulnerable as if he has stripped her of all her defences.

Something was happening between the two of them. Kunal lifted his hand, and gently pushed back Siddhi's fringe and tugged it behind her ears . He continued to look at her with the dark intense passion which she could not resist then and now. Her treacherous body leapt with actual physical hunger. She was astonished that after 9 long years, her body responded to him. Only he can provoke this kind of response. Her husband.

And before Kunal could stop himself, he tilted his dark handsome unshaven face and ran his angular side of his jaw back and forth over the smooth soft line of her cheek. Siddhi was swaying on her feet and she tried to turn her face away but he would not let her. His lips closed over her cheeks and he pulled her even more closely to him, leaving her with no chance of escape. His mouth was now trailing across her shoulder, her neck...

Siddhi was cold and clammy but she was on fire under the assault of his lips, his mouth ...Her head was swimming, her legs were trembling violently and her hands clutched his shirt to steady herself. Slowly she moved her hands to his head and was running her fingers through his thick head and wanted him to stop but he was too fast and locked his sensual mouth over hers and kissed her fully on the lips.

"Siddhi, Where are you? Abhay's voicebrought her back from her reverie with a jolt. With a choked cry, she disengaged and freed herself from his strong embrace.

Kunal breathed , "Siddhi...?'

Siddhi twisted back and said bitterly " No, no don't say anything. Just leave it. This was a mistake." And she ran leaving a stunned and a confused Kunal standing staring at her with bewilderment...

End or just the beginning ?
What do you think?

Edited by Silambu - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woo!! Thanks for this treat on dull sunday Silambu!!😳 Loved your romantic angle to the precap we saw!!😳 Wish this is the way it actually goes.. but again I am wishing those things which will never happen in EK land!😕 Superb writing and lovely imagination!!👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting forward to the precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was such a superb piece of writing Silambu .👏...it brought back those sweet memories wen i was a teenager nd was an avid reader of mills nd boons series😳 ...how i wish we do get this kind of romance for sinal as u have described ...how wish tomrrows epi turns out to be da way you have beautifully written ...but the reality remains ...its an EK show after all ...forget abt these kind of intense passionate scenes ...all we ll get is siddhi shedding non stop tears nd ever increasiung MU's between sinal...after all emotion overpower s logic🤢.😡...
anywayz loved ur version of tomrrow's epi ...i would do anything to see it turn into reality
Edited by stuti123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey... That would hv been a real treat to watch but i guess we r nt dat lucky to see they both performing on such a beautiful n very well written scene n by no choice hv to c what ever the idiotic cv's hv planned...
so keeping fingers crossed n hoping for the best... pls continue wid ur imagination...
this ones really good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi

Superbly written and indeed romantic. Enjoyed reading it.

Wish we actually got such scene between sinal in the show.

Looks more like they wont be any direct talk between sinal on monday however i am expecting to hear some self talk between the 2

norzar


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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Just wow!
Carry on this is very well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb writing👏
please continue writing...😊

Edited by myra_islam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. Superbly written 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Perfect scene...
Wish the CV's have some amount of cells working in their brains to show such kinda an act in parichay...


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