FF:Zindagani UPDATED PART 4

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Gayathri

@Gayathri_MSK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Amazing portray of Future track dear... CV's please take suggestions from our forum and specially from this FF of Paradigm ( May i know ur name?) . 👏👏👏

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Aparichit

@Phenyl

Sparkler

+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awsum update...hope cv's show sumthing like dis wen kunu comes to knw about gaurav's ema.do continue sooon...

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annie_mckinnen

@annie_mckinnen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: paradigm
PART 2

A few weeks passed. Kunal got a job in a great law firm in the interim. He was really happy about that. But more than him Siddhi was happy. Happy to see him happy about something.

He continued to be a devoted husband and father to be. But siddhi knew that he was very hurt and his distancing himself emotionally from her caused her a lot of pain.

Siddhi:(on the phone): haan shilpa shaam ko shopping jayenge. Koi problem nahi hain. Main akele ghar aa jaoongi. Bachi nahi hoon
Bbye
Kunal: Shopping ja rahi ho. Accha hai. Par tum akele nahi aaogi. Office ke baad main tumhe pick karoonga
S: par kunal;
K: par war kuch nahi!!!

In the evening
Siddhi and Shilpa were trying out dresses. Siddhi looked at herself in the mirror and was pleasantly surprised to notice a slight baby bump that became evident in the figure hugging dress. She looked down and smiled tenderly.

From afar a man was looking at the sight; his face beaming with pleasure. Kunal was ecstatic to see their baby's presence become visible. And his heart skipped a beat as he saw Siddhi smiling and blushing at the same time.

Kunal realized that his emotional detachment was hurting Siddhi. And as he saw Siddhi and his baby he realized that he owed it to her to put her happiness foremost; forgetting his own pain.

He walked towards her and spoke to her directly; fpr the first time in weeks
K: Bahut acchi lag rahi ho.
Siddhi blushed and turned more pink; making her look even more beautiful.
Shilpa went home. Suddenly kunal spoke
K: chalo aaj dinner baahar karte hain
Siddhi was ecstatic;

At the restaurant Siddhi was touched to see how Kunal remembered all her prefernces and also ordered for himself vegetarian food.

They were eating when Kunal got a call and stepped out for a second.
Siddhi was looking around when suddenly she caught sigt of Aksha and Gaurav romancing at one of the tables. She felt sick to her stomach to see Kunal's brother behaving like that. But she had decided to stay out of the matter and wasnt going to say anything abt what she saw.

Just then Gaurav caught sight of her. Seeing her alone he thought she was again spying on him. Quickly the two of them left the restaurant.

Kunal camw back to see siddhi looking disturbed. For the rest of the meal she was quiet and not eating much. tHhinking that she was tired he took her home.

A storm was waiting for them home. Just as they entered seema yelled angrily at siddhi
Se: tum apni harkaton se kab baaz aao gi
S: par bhabhi
Se: Gaurav ne mujhe bataya ki tum phir unpar nazar rakh rahi thi
G: Bhabhi main to meeting ke liye gaya tha aur aap. Aksha ne to shehar cchod diya hai. Seema, bhabhi se galti ho gayee hain . Par unhe maaf kar do

Siddhi couldn't take it anymore
s: Band kariye apna naatak. Apni se aadhe umar ki ladki ke saath:

Seema stepped towards her and raised her hand to slap her. But someone intervened. Kunal held seema's hand and threw it down aggressively

K: meri siddhi par koi haath nahi uthata hain. Tum bhi nahi

Kunal was shaking with anger Unknown to all.. Kunal had seen Aksha at the restaurant. And hearing what gaurav said he realized what a blunder he had made in not trusting siddhi

Good job Paradigm👏 I like the fact that Kunal is showing being able to deal with his hurt in such a mature manner and still be caring towards Siddhi. But I would like that instead of Kunal accidentally finding out about Gaurav several weeks later, he starts questioning why Siddhi is being so stubborn and putting everything on the line, takes the initiative to resolve this issue by himself and discovers the truth about Gaurav. I don't want fate to play a hand in Kunal's life but rather want to see Kunal taking matters into his own hands.

Thanks for sharing.😃

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Thanks for all your appreciation 😊 Will update again soon :)

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

PART 3

He wanted to smack Gaurav across his face. But he knew that doing that without proof would be repeating Siddhi's mistake.

Seema: Kunal Bhaiya!!! Aap Siddhi ki side le rahe hai.

K: Nahi seema. main sahi ka side le raha hoon. Kisi ko bhi siddhi par haath uthane ka hak nahi hai. Jahan tak Siddhi ki us restaurant par hone ka sawaal hai, hum donon dinner par gaye the. Main kuch der ke liye baahar gaya tha phone par baat karne ke liye..

Siddhi hadn't been feeling well all evening.. and now all this stress. The world began to blur around her.She was about to fall. Kunal saw this and held her just in time.

Gaurav came forward with his fake concern trying to help Kunal in picking Siddhi up. Kunal's blood boiled as he saw what a fake person his own brother was. He swept siddhi up in his arms not letting Gaurav even touch her.

She lay on the bed, unconscious, looking pale and weak. Kunal sat by her side holding her hands. He remembered each time he had turned away from her. He felt very guilty. He felt bitter that his faith on his brother had been wrong. He caressed her hands kissing her fingers from time to time.

She woke up after some time to find Kunal starting at her misty eyed.

Si: Kunal i am sorry i yelled at Gaurav Bhaiya again.. But he is such a two faced... anyway. please dont be angry again. I cant handle you be angry with me.

He looked at her, she was the most precious thing in the world for him.and he had caused her so much pain.

K: Siddhi I am the one who was wrong. I saw Gaurav and Aksha at the restaurant tooo. I am sorry i didnt trust you. The lawyer in me always demands proofs even from my own wife... But now you dont worry I will expose Gaurav. Aur main usse aise sabak sikhaoonga ki woh zindagi bhar yaad rakhega.

Saying that he embraced her, She stayed in his arms for a long time.. eventually falling asleep snuggled close to him. He didn't move her head onto the pillow. He felt no discomfort as she slept all night with her head on his arms.. All he felt was tremendous warmth at having his wife and little one so close to him.

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Prity_ruchi

@Prity_ruchi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

hats off to your imaginations and thinking...so well written and expressed...can feel it in real...hope show main bhi kabhi kuch aisa ho...

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

read all the 3 parts of Ur FF...

I loved it...very well written...hoping to read more from u...

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tanyashrivastav

@tanyashrivastav

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awesome update dear ..loved it lots...

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

plz update the next part soon..

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

PART 4

Siddhi got up the next morning. She turned to look at the clock and saw that it was 9. She got up with a start. Kunal walked in.

S: Kunal itna late ho gaya hai. Aapne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi...

K: Kyunki aaj saturday hai aur main chahta tha tum rest lo. Accha ab jaakar fresh ho jao.

S: Kunal.. par... mujhe kitne kaam hote hai.. breakfast...

K: Bas bas jhansi ki raani.. maine tumhaare saare kam kar diye hai. Aur breakfast bhi maine hi banaya hai aaj tumhare liye...

Siddhi smiled at his words.. "tumhare liyee".. Kunal blushed and tried covering it up.

K: mera matlab hai sab ke liye.

At breakfast everyone was surprised to discover that Kunal had cooked for them. It was a delight for everyone exceot Gaurav to see Kunal pay special attention to siddhi and pamper her. Even seema, despite her anger with siddhi was very happy.

Later in Sinal bedroom.

S: Kunal aap gaurav bhaiya ke baaren mein kya karne waale hai?

K: Siddhi tum uski tension mat lo.. tum bas apna aur humaari beti ka dhyaan do,,

S: Beti? yeh kaise decide kiya aapne?

K: arey mujhe pata hai na... meri nanhi pari.. tum dekhna.. aur waise bhi mujhe to already experience hai ek bachi ko handle karne ka.

He looked at siddhi meaningfully with a glint in his eyes.

S:Kunal aap bhi naa..

she hit him playfully...

K: dekha kitni badmassh bachi hai

Siddhi began laughing. He stared at her like a lovestruck teenager. He had missed this laughter so much.

Kunal had worked out his plan of action to expose gaurav aksha..he knew that their relation based on deceit was low on trust and he was determined to exploit it. he created situations where gaurav was forced to spend more and more time with seema and his daughters and made sure that Aksha saw this. Kunal's plan worked like a dream. Aksha got tired of seeing Gaurav go on outings with his wife and daughters. They began having frequent fights..

It was the day of Gaurav and Seema's 10th anniversary. Sudhanshuji had throwwn a huge party for them. Kunal rightly anticipagted tjat Aksha didnt know about th party.

Kunal called Aksha up as an anonymous caller.

K: Agar dekhna chahti ho ki tumhara boyfriend kya kar raha hai to aaj hotel Taj aa jana 8 baje..

A: par aap..

Click.. he kept the phone down

It hurt Kunal immensely to be spoiling seema's special day but he knew that he needed to expose Gaurav;s lies and deceit...

At the party..

Party is going on in full swing.

Suddenly vikram takes the mike..

V: my dear behna and jeejaji.. dance floor pe aa jao..

And he played the song.. tera ishq sufiyana...

Gaurav and seema began dancing, Siddhi went up to Kunal linked her arms through his and turned to him with a grin

S: kuch yaad aaya aapko yeh gana sunkar.

Kunal blushed rememberig how he had forcibly danced with her on this song.

K: i am sorry siddhi.. main woh.. mujhe...

S: sorry mat boliye.. apne angry young man look mein aap bahut hot lag rahe the..

Now it was time for siddhi to blush.. they both looked at each other lovingly...

The moment was broken by a loud voice.

G-A-U-R-AV!!!!!!!!

everyone turned around to see aksha at the door.

PRECAP

Gaurav: aapne meri biwi aur bachiyon se mujhe door kiya...Main kasam khata hu ki aapse is baat ka badla loonga... aapko aapki biwi aur bache se door karoonga...

Kunal punches Gaurav.

Edited by paradigm - 13 years ago

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