Mein...kuch kuch yaad karta jaata hoon abb tujhko! - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
🤣wah wah amrish bhaiyya too good meri hinglish dekh kar i cry kee main yeh kya likh rahi hoon lekin u laugh thank u lekin sach mein rohit waali meri shayri padh ke i was crying wid my writting so bad writer n for this shayri juz luv u bro
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: shamrish

Guys, i am really thankful to our Mahaguru Kavayatri Purvi for starting this online Kavi Samelan and contributions from participating Kavi's Sobhit, Ramya and Riddhi have made it more entertaining and eventful... 👏👏👏

I have been thoroughly enjoying [ and will continue to enjoy.. ].
Pretty sure my co-audience Bhavi, Fari and others will agree..


Hence as a token of appreciation on behalf of the audience group attending your Kavi samelan, presenting a Ghatiya Shayari..


Purvi ki Thandi Europewali kavitaon se mujhe thand mehsoos karne ko majboor kar diya

Shobhit ki Garam Registhanwali kavitaon se mujhe garmi mehsoos karne ko majboor kar diya

Ramya ki Titanic mahasagarwali kavitaon ne mujhe rone ko majboor kar diya

Riddhi ki Hinglish wali kavitaon ne mujhe hasne ko majboor kar diya

Karu bhee to kya karu

Ek Ghatiya shayari likhne ko majboor kar diya 😭

Jau bhee to kaha jau

Forum pe isse sunane ko majboor kar diya 😭

Phooti kismat forumwalo ki

Meri iss torture ko sahane ko majboor kar diya 😭😭😭

PS : Will continue to provide my bakwaas comments.. 😉😭



thank u amrish ke tumne inn mahaan poets mein mujh jaise chullu mullu shayri mein ullu ko shamil kiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
OMG🤣 kaise kaise kaviyon ka sammelan ho raha hai yaha! Superlative guys👏 Aside for poetry & shayari, ghatiya or otherwise, write some dialogues too na. Im sure they'll be so much better than the " mein tumhare bina nahin jee sakhta" types😆

Carry on peeps, super entertainment⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
You can't pick your friends but you can pick your nose,🤣
at least I think that's how the old saying goes.

@purvi...this is a new old saying i've heard till date, LOL

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sandy118

🤣wah wah amrish bhaiyya too good meri hinglish dekh kar i cry kee main yeh kya likh rahi hoon lekin u laugh thank u lekin sach mein rohit waali meri shayri padh ke i was crying wid my writting so bad writer n for this shayri juz luv u bro


arrey Ridz ..yeh kya...arrey teri Rohit waale rap song pe toh mein flat ho gayi hoon...itna aachaa rap toh kabhi baba sehgal ne bhi nahin kiyaa..
too good...please continue,,,,!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
@ Purvi: If my previous lines made you cry, then don't know what this one will do to you...
Hope, you & other members don't faint on reading it...


Ek sher arz hai:-

"Idhar bhi sitam ho gaya,


Udhar bhi sitam ho gaya,



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😊


😊



Zyada scroll mat karo, sher khatam ho gaya"... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sepiasunshine

You can't pick your friends but you can pick your nose,🤣
at least I think that's how the old saying goes.

@purvi...this is a new old saying i've heard till date, LOL

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣



🤣 I guess its just hyperbole..knowing that picking nose is something you have control over...🤣. or unless my friend couldnt come up with something to rhyme with nose😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: sks18

@ Purvi: If my previous lines made you cry, then don't know what this one will do to you...
Hope, you & other members don't faint on reading it...


Ek sher arz hai:-

"Idhar bhi sitam ho gaya,


Udhar bhi sitam ho gaya,



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.

.


.
😊


😊



Zyada scroll mat karo, sher khatam ho gaya"... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


Shobhit, since I call you friend...I cant lie to you...that did make me cry..infact I cant even stop now...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
@ Purvi: See, that's why its said that false praise can have dire consequences... 😉

You had compelled me to believe that I could write a bit & as a result I wrote all the crap...

Now, I won't...

Alas, my writing career came to an abrupt end!!!!! 🤣

Ab batao, kaun kise chane ke jhaad pe chada raha tha????? 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shobhit, since I call you friend...I cant lie to you...that did make me cry..infact I cant even stop now...😭

@all : looks like i am missing out on the fun... Just logged in to take a look and we filled up few pages already today.. Looks like mods are going to kick us out soon for spamming the forum as we filled up almost 100 posts in few days on one thread.. Keep going guys 👏

@purvi : Since we get the best of you when in this mood , hopefully more tears may flow after complimenting Shobhit with one more :

Idhar mat Dekho

Udhar mat Dekho

Upar mat Dekho

Neeche Mat Dekho





😊


😊


😊


😊





😊







😊


Zyada scroll mat karo,
Abhi sirf aage dekho
aur acchi si kavita hume sunao


🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Edited by shamrish - 13 years ago

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