Mein...kuch kuch yaad karta jaata hoon abb tujhko! - Page 9

Originally posted by: purvimehta

Thank you Bhavi!! all thanks to my partner in crime😉. Sometimes, I myself fail to understand, what I am writing😆😆. though, people like you on this forum have been very very kind to me..ghisi piti bakwaas ko tum log poem samajhte ho...pata nahin aise kaunse jhaad pe chadhaate jaa rahe ho ki niche uttarne ka mann hi nahin karta..😆. heath wise, whenever I have to write or listen or read or chat, I am always in pink health😆. right now, I am trying different medicines and nuskaas, lets see which ones work. My cousin has convinced me to even try brandy which I did and honestly, I could sleep well after taking it😉

Originally posted by: purvimehta

Ramyaa..yaar, abb toh maare embarrassment ke mera red colour bhi khatam ho gaya..😆. I am no shaayri queen of any sorts..I jsut write..thats it. thank you so much for the appreciation. you said its like climbing 1000 stairs..are you sure your legs dont hurt...or in this case your brain doesnt hurt..😆😉.

@bold-wait till he comes up with the most modest answer ever.. he is definitely amazing yet very modest..I wish he just accepts that he is a good writer!!😆

I think you should come up with something too...you still sound very much creative..aur haan..creativity per kabhi zung nahin lagtaa...woh sadabahaar hoti hai!!😆

Originally posted by: sks18

I would like to say thanks to Purvi, Amrish, Bhavi, Ramya & all others who liked my poems.

Guys, I'm really touched by your appreciations.

Meri aankhon me khusi ke aanso chalak aaye hai... & so this is what I would like to pen down for you people (Though, I don't have a touch screen P.C to use lightpen...😆 😆)...

Likhu kuch aaj, yeh waqt ka takaza hai,

Mere Dil mein dard abhi tazaa hai,

Gir padte hai ashk mere kagaz par,

Kalam me syahi kam aur aansoo jyada hai..."

Sorry, for being too much melodramatic!!!!!!! 😆

Originally posted by: shamrish

Guys, i am really thankful to our Mahaguru Kavayatri Purvi for starting this online Kavi Samelan and contributions from participating Kavi's Sobhit, Ramya and Riddhi have made it more entertaining and eventful... 👏👏👏

I have been thoroughly enjoying [ and will continue to enjoy.. ].
Pretty sure my co-audience Bhavi, Fari and others will agree..


Hence as a token of appreciation on behalf of the audience group attending your Kavi samelan, presenting a Ghatiya Shayari..


Purvi ki Thandi Europewali kavitaon se mujhe thand mehsoos karne ko majboor kar diya

Shobhit ki Garam Registhanwali kavitaon se mujhe garmi mehsoos karne ko majboor kar diya

Ramya ki Titanic mahasagarwali kavitaon ne mujhe rone ko majboor kar diya

Riddhi ki Hinglish wali kavitaon ne mujhe hasne ko majboor kar diya

Karu bhee to kya karu

Ek Ghatiya shayari likhne ko majboor kar diya 😭

Jau bhee to kaha jau

Forum pe isse sunane ko majboor kar diya 😭

Phooti kismat forumwalo ki

Meri iss torture ko sahane ko majboor kar diya 😭😭😭

PS : Will continue to provide my bakwaas comments.. 😉😭

Originally posted by: sks18

@ Purvi: My lines made u cry or was it the effect of "Amrish's Killer Shayari"???????? 😆 😆

Since, now the focus has shifted from SiNal to our friends, so this is by me to all my dear friends of this forum...

"Kya kahe hi kuch kaha nahi jaata,

Dard-meetha hai par saha nahi jaata,

Dosti ho gayi hai is kadar aapse ki,

Bina yaad kiye raha nahi jaata"