aanth bhala to sabb bhala...confession OS. - Page 8

I wish i could write even closer to the writers on this forum and even hope that the CVS show even 50% of the passion that you have shown here - We have waited enough for this It is now almost 1 and half month after they consumated and 6 months from they were married - and still no confession - 😡

One more thing in common - I share the common last name as yours - before marriage so am even glad to know that you too speak the same mother tongue as i do - 😃

Originally posted by: purvimehta

😆...yeh aanth hain ya firr nayi shruwaat😡😆

Right guys...finally its ended now time for some more...

khushi ke maare..

aaj forumwaasiyon ke liye ek chotaa sa surprise hain...😳

Coming Soon...

watch this space for more...😆😆

Ok guys I think I have built enough anxiety and now is the time to open my goody bag..

just a warning, I am going to disappoint many of you ..because this surprise is gonna be pleasant for some and shocking for others😲

😆

so, here it is

Presenting my first OS...dhanta naan...

I know many of you are disappointed...apologies to all but do read it...

guys,

We have all been really depressed since past one week due to the crap that has been shown to us by dear CVs. Just as the court case has ended and we are all desperately waiting for that one very moment when Mr. and Mrs. Chopra would confess their love to each other. Time is crucial we have heard that since mahabharat times'samay bada balwaan'.lol . So I thought, without wasting one more minute I should present to you the OS that I thought would suit Sinal when they actually confess. I have used poetry as for me nothing can be as romantic and expressive as poems. The poem is by the great poet Waqas Yakub. I have definitely changed the urdu to hindi as I cant imagine Sinal speaking urdu'(hindi mein hi bol do..toh meherbaani ho jaayegi')

The scene is after the court case where Kunal has been proved innocent and Richa has reached the mental hospital'.high hopes I guess..anyway continuing'

Kunal goes to Siddhi and looks in disbelief..

Kunal: aye..maine kitni baar kaha hain tumse ki tumhe jhaansi ki raani banne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Magar tum ho ki kisi ki baat sunne samajhne mein vishwaas hi nahin rakhti. Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? Kabhi socha hai mera aur gharwaalon kaaa kya hota wo? Ziddi toh aisi ho ki hargeez kisi ka nahi sunogi, arrey kisi ki chodo apne pati kit toh baat maan liya karo aakhir pati parmeshwar hota hai..(what cheezy lines'hahaha)

Siddhi: dekhiye'fir se mat shuru ho jaayie. Maine aap se kitni baar kaha hai ki mein bilkul thik hoon aur mujhe kuch bhi nahin hua hai. Mere liye aap se jyaada iss case se jyaada kuch bhi aur zaroori nahin thaa.. waise bhi taklif mujhe hui hai, aap ko isse kya? Waise, kamaal hai, ek court case se nikle hi the ki abb humein dusre court case ki tayaari karni padegi. Aap mujhe jaldi hi divorce jo dene waale hain'

Kunal: divorce divorce divoce..yeh baar baar bus tumne kya laga rakha hai. Itni jaldi machi hai tumhe divorce ki. Itnaa ubb gayi ho tum mujhse ki divorce chahti ho

Siddhi: jaldi ho yaa naa ho'jo hona hai who toh hokar hi rahegaa naa, aakhir aap kunal chopra ho, aap jaisa chahenge waisa hi karenge. Aaj maine apna farz pura kiya'aap ki rihaayi mere liye sab se jyaada zarrori thi so who ho chuki. Abb humein apni zindagi ki sab se badi sacchayi kaa saamna karna hai..divorce

(kunal is really annoyed at Siddhi'he in his angry mood and is just about to say something to Siddhi just then Seema comes and intervenes)

Seema-Arrey Kunal bhaiyaa, siddhi, aap log yahan khade khade kya kar rahe hain, chaliye ghar nahin chalna hai kya?

Siddhi- haan bhabhi chaliye, waise bhi jo kuch bhi kehna sunna tha who ho chukaa

(Kunal is further infuriated)

Kunal- Seema tu jaa, hum buss abhi aaye'kisis ko karana hai aaj sachaayi se parichay'lol

(siddhi has just started walking ahead of Kunal'and Kunal shouts)

Kunal- aye!!! Mrs. Siddhi Chopra'bahut ho gayi tumhaari yeh baatein baatein baatein'

(she starts walking away again kunal hold his hand and starts talking again..)

Kunal- Shaayri karti ho, meri itni fikar karti ho, mujhe samajhne ka daawa karti ho..par meri aankhein nahin pad sakti? Meri bechaini nahin padh sakti. Kys kehti ho tum, mujhe dairy likhna nahin aata'depressing hoon? Muh fer ke buss chaldi? Aur jo tumhe kab se kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon'woh samajhna bhi nahin chahti.

(Siddhi looks at Kunal surprisingly'long eye lock session!!!)

Kunal- tum jahan par baith ke jaati ho'

Jis cheez ko haath lagaati ho,

Mein wahin par baitha rehta hoon

Uss cheez ko chuhtaa rehta hoon..

Mein aisi mohabbat karta hoon..

Tum kaisi mohabbat karti ho?

Tum jisse has kar milti ho

Mein usko dost banata hoon

Tum jiss raaste pe chalti ho

Mein ussise aata jaata rehta hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karta hoon

Tum kaisi mohabbat karti ho?

Tum jinko dekhti rehti ho,

Who khwaab siraane rakhta hoon

Tumse milne julne ke kitne hi bahane rakhta hoon..

Mein aisi mohabbat karta hoon

Tum kaisi mohabbat karti ho?

Kuch khwaab sajaakar aankhon mein

Palkon se moti chuntaa hoon

Koi lubs agar choo jaaye toh,mein pehron usko sochtaa hoon..

Mein aisi mohabbat kartaa hoon'

Tum kaisi mohabbat karti ho?

Har mauke pe har manjar pe

Mein saath tumhaare rehta hoon..

Mein chashm-e tasavoor mein aksar,

Buss tumko sochtaa rehta hoon..

Mein aisi mohabbat karta hoon

Tum kaisi mohabbat karti ho?

(there is a pin drop silence 'all we can hear is heart beats '2 heartbeats!! Kunal leaves Siddhi's hand and starts walking away from her.. as soon as he turns around he hears Siddhi)

Siddhi-tum jab bhi ghar par aatey ho

Aur sab se baatein karte ho..

Mein parde ki aad se buss

Tumko hi dekha karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Jab darwaaje pe dastak ho..

Ya ghanti phone ki baajti ho,

Mein chod ke sab kuch bhaagti hoon

Tumhe jo naa paaon uss aur toh..

Jee bhar ke ronay lagti hoon..

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mehfil mein kahin bhi jaana ho

Aur kapdoon kaa rang jo chunnna ho

Uss rang pe dil aa jaata hai..

Joo rang tumko bhaata hai

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Jiss chehre par bhi nigah pade,

Woh chehra tumsa lagtaa hai

Woh sham ho ya dhoop kaa samay,

Sab kuch bhala saa lagtaa hai

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Tum jab bhi saamne aate the

Mein tumse sunna chahti thi..

Kaash kabhi tum yeh kehdo

Tum mujhse mohabbat karte ho

Tum mujhe bahut hi chaahte ho..

Lekin jaane tum chup ho kyon?

Yeh soch ke jee ghabarata thaa

Aisa toh nahin hai naa

Ki yeh meri nazar kaa dhoka thaa

Tab chup chaap si mein ho jaati hoon..

Phir dil mein hi aapne kehti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon

Mein aisi mohabbat karti hoon.

(another long silence'both have tears in their eyes!! They keep looking at each other. Kunal goes near siddhi and wipes her tears)

Kunal-aye, tum roti ho naa, to bilkul acchi nahin lagti..tum buss behes karte hue hi acchi lagti ho..

(Siddhi starts crying further..)

Kunal- aye..tumse ek baat kahun'

Siddhi- kya?

Kunal ' tumhaare binaa jee nahin saktaa..mujhe chod ke mat jaao, mein marr jaaungaa'(tears rolling down his eyes)

Siddhi- breaks down in Kunals arms..

(both of them hug each other and are lost in the tight embrace.. the moon and the stars witness their union)

THE END

I am sorry guys, if you come across any typing errors or grammatical mistakes, kindly pardon me..

Do leave your kind thoughts and comments. As usual I am open to full criticism as well'lol

well written. enjoyed reading it

keep it up

norzar

Purvi, I'm really amazed to know that you draw inspiration from Mr. Yeats's lines of making poetry from quarrels...

You really are a talented person because finding something so positive like poetry from ups & downs of life is not a task of amateurs.. (As this is what you like to be called.. 😉).

However, what was astonishing for me was that you actually think that I have a good command over Hindi... ( Wish I could have met you earlier so that I would have made my Hindi teacher read your comment to actually make her believe that I wasn't too bad in it... as she use to fear that I was good only at my science subjects & not Hindi... 😆 ).

As far as my lost interest is concerned (as this is what you called...😆), I would like to mention that I'm still in love with my interest in automobiles & software programming... but yes, your writings do have forced me to spare certain amount of time for something equally creative as Poetry... though if any of my friends read this... I'm sure they would go into "COMA" as according to them, poetry & me are like "two like poles which will always repel each other"... (Guess, I can't silent the geek in me as well.. 😳).

Talking about Mr. Yeats, you made me remember some lines from his poetry which I had read in my school days...

Can't stop myself in replying in your style!!! 😆