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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Simi.

Purvi I love u too...ab isse bhi galat mat samjhana🤣... iss forum pe tumhare teen pakke diwane hai...Riddhi, Savi and me😆...tumhari shayari ke...tumhari dhamkion ke...tumhare sense of humuor ke...

Haye...Simi thank you so much...

bahut sharmindaa hoon ki tumhaare pyaar ko galat samajh baithe hum...😆😆. On a serious note thank you so much for reading it and liking it...I am over the moon with the love and gratitude you guys show to me...

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shamrish
Purvi, Thanks for the PM...
Amazing O.S... Was hoping you would say at the end, to be Contd... 😉...
These days I am just enjoying reading all wonderful posts of all the wonderful creative writers including you... Have stopped watching Parichay past few weeks...Now that the court case ended today, depending on how they take it further, would look forward to watching...

Finally we got to see what i was expecting to happen yday after your other post 😉...
Buildup was good but i really liked Kunal's dialogues just before his shayari... Both Shayaris were awesome as expected... That's your forte anyways... Remember that joint FFwala discussion??? Imagine kitna hungama ho jayega...

Again i hope similar confession happens in Parichay though i doubt we would be lucky to even get a confession which everyone is eagerly awaiting...

Thanks once again for providing all of us sprinkler of happiness amidst this ocean of Torture by the CV's...
Pls continue so that we all can engulf this monster of the torture CV's are pushing on us...

Thank you so much for taking out time to read this...all thanks to your SS and FFs...inspiration is the key you know😉. I think you should definitely come up with your next so that I can further drive my inspiration from it...

Without you guys and without your appreciation, nothing is possible..please keep reading and commenting..

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: awesumsonia
kya baat hain...aaj toh full-on romantic mood mein lag rahe ho

Abb kya kaare...romance toh kabse andaar paale rakha tha...

aaj buss jasbaat umad umad kar bahaar aa rahe hain...

for all of us isnt Sinal=Romance...😆

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Shobhit18

@Shobhit18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Another awesome post by you, Purvi!👏 (Though, I'm really confused as which one was the best??😆)

You call yourself an amateur as far as poetry is concerned, but let me tell you that this is definitely not the case... (As far as I can understand them... 😛).

Your writings have actually compelled me to stop noticing errors & comedy in Parichay & that's the reason I haven't posted any such posts in-spite of being so many in recent episodes!!!😃

Writing poetry was never my passion or something that I enjoyed doing in my leisure time but your writings have sort of awaken my inner poet... 😆

Now, I'll stop being melodramatic & would like to share something related to Kunal's present state in your style... though it may not be good... 😕

Arz kiya hai...

"Har Mulaqt par waqt ka takaza hua,

Har yaad pe dil ka dard taza hua,

Suni thi sirf Gazalo me judai ki bate,

Ab khud pe beti to haqiqt ka andaza hua.."

The above lines are in Urdu, so guess they won't be apt for Kunal's character but these are what came to my mind considering Kunal's present situation & your post!

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

lovely OS..hoping to see something like this in show too..

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padmaja19

@padmaja19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: purvimehta

how sweet of you Padmaja..I am overwhelmed that you like it. There is even better creativity on this forum..you should read other members stuff its wonderful...all I can say I have derived my inspiration from these members..its a great place to be..

do keep reading and commenting, as it helps writers like us to grow every single day with every single post!!😊

i had read all the ffs ond oses on this forum and love them... actually i'm in a way addicted to them but the thing which i loved about ur os was that it was simple yet full of emotions . kunal n siddhi r such persons that they don't know how to voice their feelings but they r gud at expressing their feelings through poetry, thats wat they r gud at and u used tht way for their confession

... it was simple yet effective ...it touched my heart purvi... 😳😳

before reading ur os i used to find confessing one's love through poems n shayari very chessy n cliche😆 but after reading ur os i think i won't mind if my man confess his feelings for me in this manner through poems n all😳😳

plzzz keep on writing such gud os n ff ...i'm eagerly waiting for them😃😃

Edited by padmaja19 - 13 years ago

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sks18
Another awesome post by you, Purvi!👏 (Though, I'm really confused as which one was the best??😆)

You call yourself an amateur as far as poetry is concerned, but let me tell you that this is definitely not the case... (As far as I can understand them... 😛).

Your writings have actually compelled me to stop noticing errors & comedy in Parichay & that's the reason I haven't posted any such posts in-spite of being so many in recent episodes!!!😃

Writing poetry was never my passion or something that I enjoyed doing in my leisure time but your writings have sort of awaken my inner poet... 😆

Now, I'll stop being melodramatic & would like to share something related to Kunal's present state in your style... though it may not be good... 😕

Arz kiya hai...

"Har Mulaqt par waqt ka takaza hua,

Har yaad pe dil ka dard taza hua,

Suni thi sirf Gazalo me judai ki bate,

Ab khud pe beti to haqiqt ka andaza hua.."

The above lines are in Urdu, so guess they won't be apt for Kunal's character but these are what came to my mind considering Kunal's present situation & your post!

Wah wah wah...andaaz aapka subhan allah...a big round of applause for the above jotted lines by you..👏.regarding poetry, I would like to just repeat what Mr. W.B Yeats always says..."out of the quarrel with others, we make rhetoric, and out of the quarrel with ourselves, we make poetries". So now you know where I get my talent from😆😆. 9 times out of 10 it comes up just because of my struggle with myself..forget the world..

Thank you so much though because all your appreciation goes towards my encouragement to write more and more..

I am haapy to know that I have introduced someone to their long lost talent!! you should start writing this very minute. I am sure you will do well. your command over the hindi language is awsome anyway..I will be looking forward to reading more and more posts from you😊

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: stuti123
lovely OS..hoping to see something like this in show too..

Thank you Stuti. I appreciate your time and patience for reading and commenting on it...😊

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: padmaja19

i had read all the ffs ond oses on this forum and love them... actually i'm in a way addicted to them but the thing which i loved about ur os was that it was simple yet full of emotions . kunal n siddhi r such persons that they don't know how to voice their feelings but they r gud at expressing their feelings through poetry, thats wat they r gud at and u used tht way for their confession👏... it was simple yet effective ...it touched my heart purvi... 😳😳

before reading ur os i used to find confessing one's love through poems n shayari very chessy n cliche😆 but after reading ur os i think i won't mind if my man confess his feelings for me in this manner through poems n all😳😳

plzzz keep on writing such gud os n ff ...i'm eagerly waiting for them😃😃

I know Padmaja, aren't they all wonderfully written!! Thank you for the kind words...I have always thought that love itself is very complicated and to solve its equations, one has to use very simple formulas...sometimes you say so much and you cant make ends meet, and sometimes just a glance full of love is enough!! If I have touched your heart through my writing, its one of the biggest achievements!!thanks for that...

beleive me, I used to think that way about poems..but over time they have helped me grow and know my own self..I am glad I could change your opinion too..😆. I will try and write as much as possible...

Thank you😊

Edited by purvimehta - 13 years ago