Sinaliciouus Moments Part 8-9 Pg 7 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey raman once again its too good ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

veru nice writing ,,,,,,,,,,

carry on plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shilpa hi n just wanted to ask that do raman updte daily
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello sandy

ya ,,,,,,he update daily
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Raman...WOW ..WOW...& WOW
Im going short of words to express how brilliantly u are taking this story ahead.

Hey u alwayz stop at the suspense part. U seriously keep us glued as to what will happen next. But ur suspense's are really worth the wait.
Plzz continue...dont stop...u keep writing...can u update more than one part daily..cozz kya hei ki im waiting for their confession.

Thanx a lot for giving us this awesome tracks.
I wish all ur sinalicious moments happened in the actual show.
CV's plzz visit this forum...

Raman waiting for the next part.

Savi...



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Posted: 13 years ago
You are an AMAZING writer ⭐️

please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
contd court rm
thakral: my lord yeh case bohot hi asaanhai kunal chopra ek ghusse wale aur chota insaan hai jo ek ladki ke liye apni fam apna kaam sab kuch daav pe laga kar khud ghar beth kar apne chote bhaiyoon par jeetaa aaya , yeh insaan jo apni zindagi mein harta aya woh insaan ko jab paata chalta hai woh ladki apne zindagi me aage badna chahti hai,, yehbardaash nahi kar paya isliye inhone meri client ko paane ke liye engmt wale din apne havas ka shikar banana chaha uski engnt todne ki sazish ki ...aishe insaan ko sakt se sakt sazza di jaye...inki sachayi jankaar aaj inki patni vakil iss court mein mozud nahi hai mylord to aap isse andaaza laga sakte hai
k: nahi woh aayegi
thk: nahi kunal chopra ...aaj woh nahi aayegi ...agar aayi bhi to koi fayda nahi hoga
k: tum itne yakin ke saath kaise keh sakte ho and looks at ritcha and looks away and looks at her again and there is eyelock
ritcha gets uncomf why is he staring at her like this it had concern for her now she was confused
judge gives half hr to wait for sid

sid arrives at 11th moment
court proceedings start
jud: ms sid c aapko apne client ke defense mein koi saboot gavah..
b4 judge could finish
s: nahi mylord mere oaas koi saboot nahi...
kunal fam all shocked
thakral smiles and sid looks at thak and smiles faintly ritcha catches that and looks at kunal
k:yells .. sid woh cd kaha hai
silence
k: sid woh cd kaha hai
s: woh ...woh cd mujhse kho gayi
k: what ..tumse kho gayi
kunal looks very defeated
judge: iss case kesare saboot gaavah ko madde nazar rakte hue yeh court iss natize pe pohochti haiki mr kunachopra kasoor...
kunal interupts judge : mujhe ek moka dijiye mein kuch kehna chahtha hu
thak: objecn
jug: overel kahiye kunal chopra kya kehna hai
k: sid tumse cd kho gayi yaa..
sid looks at him with disbeleif
s: yeh aap kya keh rahe hai
k: yells tumse cd kho gayi yaa fir tumne woh cd thak ko de di
thak looks confused and ritcha looks at thak
k: kya karna chahti ho ...kya sabit karna chahti ho merehi vakil bankar
s: aap yeh kya keh rahe
k: mein ..mein kya keh raha hu...tum...tum kya kar rahi ho aur kabse ...mujhe shaak tha sidd aaj yakin aaya
s: dekiye aapko galatfehmi huyi hai
k: maine tumhe thak ke off jate huye dekha hai
thak is really confused
k: tum ritcha aur mujhe alag karna chahti thi naa...
sid looks down and doesnt answer
ever1 is shocked disbelief
k: kitne paise diye the ...tbhi toh shp ki shaadi itni dumdhaam se mana paye
s: dekhye aap galat saaj rahe hai
thak: dekha judge sahab yeh insaan
jud: please thak unhe apni baat puiri karne dijiye
kunal looks at ritcha
k: ritcha yeh kya kiya tumne maine tumse itna pyaar kiya aur tumne ... galti meri hai ek lawyer hoke tumhare papa ki chaal nahi samaj paya toh tum kaise samaj pati
rit: yeh sab kya
s: tumhare papa ne mujhe paise diye the kunal se shaadi karne ke liye taki tum uski zindagi se dur ho jaao aur phir mein div le lu
thak: yeh jhoot hai yeh inki chaal hai
ritcha gets up: papa yeh aapne
k: haa ritcha ...jab tak mujhe yeh baat pata chali tab tak der ho chuki thi aur tumne mujhpar itna ganda ilzaam ..
thak: ritcha yeh jhoot bol rahe hai judge saab please inhe rokiye yeh beti ko gumraah karne ki koshih kar rahe hai
k: yeh sab tumhara plan tha nahi toh aaj ke zamane mey aisa kaun hai jo apni puri zindagi uss insaan ke saath bitana chahega jisse woh nafrat karta hoga...sid ne anand ke mauth ko hamesha mujhe jimedar mana aur tumne badla lene ke liye yeh sab kiya
rit: papa aap toh hamesha se mujhe kunal se alag karna chahte the
thak: haa ... par yeh inki chaal
k: ritcha tumne yeh kya kar diya mujhe pane ke liye tum itna sab ...mujhse ek baar baat toh kar leti tum jaanti thi maine shaadi kis halt mein ki phir bhi mera intezaar nahi kar sakti thi
kunal reaches ritcha and ritcha comes and hugs him tightly and cries and kunal holds her trying to pacify her
sid looks away
rit: sorry kunal mujhe nahi pata tha papa yeh sab
k: par aab mujhe tumse alag hona padega
r: nahi nahi yeh nahi ho sakta...jab tumne kuch kiya hi nahi toh tumhe sazza nahi hogi.. tumne uss raat kuch nahi kiya ...yeh sab maine tumhe sid se alag karne ke liye kaha mujhe nahi pata woh mere dad se mili hiuthi ,... nahi toh yeh jhoota ilzaam mein tumpar kabhi nahi lagati (kunal consoling her ..its okay) vineet ,uski gf sab jhoot hai yeh maine ... kya kar diya
s: jo aapko karna chahiye tha
thak: obj
j: overruled
kunal looks down at ritcha and slowly frees himself from her hug and jerks her away
s: mujhe aur kuch nahi kehna hai my lord aur yeh rahi cd...
sinal look at each other and smile





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Posted: 13 years ago
wow👏👏👏
this part is just awesome. i cant express in words yaar.
i just hope cv's read this post and we actually get to see similar scene in the serial.
U r just an amazing writer.
i was waiting for ur post for complete day and finally got such a beautiful part.
what a blast richa got from sinal😆
plz keep updating.😊
and i am the first one to reply😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful counter... i m amazed...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey raman, excellent. I totally loved the way u created the court case story. Mindblowing. I wish i wish sinal aisa kuch kare.


Savi...



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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear ..do continue soon..

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