Sinaliciouus Moments Part 8-9 Pg 7

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fasiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

wow yaar u r truely an amazing writer plz continue soon

cant wait

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raman987

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Posted: 13 years ago

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contd...
kap: arre sid tum yaha kya kar rai ho kunal b ke case ki tayyari nahi karni, tumhe toh unke saath hona chahiye
s: woh bhaiya aap akele honge isliye mein
ka: arre meri chinta mat kar pehle kunalji ke case pe dhyan de

after sometime
kunal returns from outside to see sid in the rm
k: kabhie toh bed pe sone ko mile looks at sid and moves his head sidewys
sid looks at him thinks : itni akkad hai inme, sirf taane marte hai
s: aapko bed pe sona hai theek hai mein gadde pe so jati kush
k: koi jarrorat nahi ...huh kal peeth dard hoga madam ko aur bhogatna mujhe padega
sid gets up from bed stands in front of him
k: kya hai
s: aap itni baate kyu sunate hain
k: tumhe kya jarrorat uss aunty ke saath bethne ki
s: toh aap raat raat bhar mujhe akele kyu chale gaye
k: oye raat bhar nahi thodi der ke liye gaya tha ...aur tumhe kya farak padta hai tum to ghode bech kar so jati...tumhe kya parva hai meri
s: mujhe ...mujhe aapki parva nahi...bhul gaye raveena ke shadi ke waqt mujhe road par intezaar karta chod uss chudail ki help karne jaate the
k: ohhh toh yeh sab badla liya jaa raha hai
s: nahi koi badla nahi le rahi hu ...mein uss chudail ki baaton ke liye aapna time kyu waste karu
k: waise ek baat bataoo tumne richa ko richa mam se richa kyu kaha tha
s: ummm woh tries to get out of the situation kunal doubts something is wronng
k: dekho hume sab pata hona chahiye aur kuch nahi toh to case ke liye hi sah
sid goes to the window and stands by berth and thinks aaj toh ye mujhse aur bhi naraaz honge ...par mujhe inhe sab bata dena chahiye
s: woh ek din mein richa ke ghar gayi thi aur mene aapko dekha ,richa ne tab pi rakhi thi aur aap usse waha chod kar chale gaye the ,aapke jaane ke baad ritcha aishe ti jaise usne peene ka bahana banya tha
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shilpa maity

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

nice one ,,,,,,,,,,

bahat hi romantic hai

par bech bbech pe ruk kiu jate ho,,,,,,,,,,,,

cntnu yaar

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fasiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

arre yaar u again stopped ur story at a very exciting moment

plz continue soon

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-Rani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Hi Raman, finally read all the parts, it took me good four hours to read them all, but couldn't help to read them all at one go as they are too good.

My god, you presented sinal in such a romantic light that we only wish to see in the actual show. While reading your OS, I felt like I was watching some very good romantic movie and I could visualize sinal in each and every scene.

My personal favorites are two parts:

1. When Kunal asks Siddhi to come to Kapils's terrace and gives her a kiss on her lips and says he came to meet Shilpa and Siddhi says she missed Ishani

2. When Kunal is outside of Siddhi's house and she goes out to put shawl on him and doesn't talk to him, but when he leaves she whispers his name and he turns around and she kisses his eyes and nose, but sadly he again brings Anand's name

Now I am eagerly waiting for your next part. Hope you update soon. Thanks again for a beautiful story.

Edited by Iamrani - 13 years ago

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raman987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

sorry for not contg sooner fam is going to india so busy with packing..
contd...
sid tells kunal about her seeing richa normal behavior after he left
k: yeh tum abb bata rahi ho ...sid itni badi baat woh mujhe bewakuf bana rahi thi aur tum maze le rahi thi...
s: nahi please... mera yakin kijiye mein aapko batana chahti thi par daar lagta tha ke shayad aap mera yakin nahi karte aap usse pyaar... sid looks down
kunal turns runs his hand thru his hair
k: aur kuch hai jo mujhe nahi pata
s: i am sorry
k: sid maine kuch poocha hai tumse
s: i am sorry
kunal turns bk at her again sees she is crying ,holds her and sits her on the berth
k: sid maine tumse kitni baar bola hai agar tumhe kuch pareshani hai to mujhse kaho
sid silently crying
kunal brings water
k: paani peelo lagta hai aaj aasuo ka quota pura hoga paani pelo kal phir jarorat padegi... tum kal phir rone kiliye kuch na kuch to kar hi dogi ...phir mein yaha tissue lekar...chalo sarcastically sighs
sid looks at him and stops crying
s: kuch aur batana hai aaj hi baata deti hu ...kal phir kaun daat khayega ...aapka quota aaj hi pura kardo
k: sid
s: uske engmt ke pehle mein usse milne gayi thi usse poochne ke woh yeh sab kyu rahi hai ...mera matlab hai ke ... woh ..ke mey ki...
k: sid yeh kua woh mey laga rakha hai kya hua tha
s: maine kaha ki ... shaadi ho chuki hai aap mere pati hai toh woh yeh natak kyu rahi hai ...woh aapko wapas apna banana chahti thi isliye usne mujhse kaha woh aapko jald hi apna banalegi ...aap sirf ussse pyar karte hai ...she stops looks at kunal
kunal sits on the berth and brings her closer looks out the window
and hugs her kisses her forhead
sid cries in his hug
s: mhamara jo bhi rishta mein aapko khona chahti thi mey aapse ...iss parivaar se alag nahi... usne 24 ghante mein aapko apna...
mujhse nahi kaha...
kunal hugs her tightly sid sleeps in his arms sobbing in her sleep and holding more and more tightly
kunal picks her up puts her on the bed puts a pillow in her arms covers her with blanket
next morng
k: maine tumhare liye kuch notes banaye hai pad lo ,,vineet hamare liye kaam nahi aa sakta , uski gf ko thakral asaanise jhootla dega bacha nikhil aur cctvtapes nikhi hosp mein hai cctv mein richa ko kuch milate hue dekha hai par sirf ek is baat se case jitna...
sid reads his notes looks at him
k: mujhpar bharosa karo and leaves

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palzs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

tooo goood continue yaar... nd wish u a happy journey😊😊

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-Rani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Again the suspense and the wait😛. Thanks Raman for the update.

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fasiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

again at a suspense state u stopped

very eager to know what kunal prepared for the notes

plz update soon

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Riddhi (Ridzz)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

hey raman u do great work bt can u tell that how long is ur nice very nice imaginative and new nature more romantic parichay and cat think of kunal coming towards siddhi loving her caring her and more huga more tears and dont believe kunal confesed the love first and siddhi is still crying when will u end this just for info dont feel bad and what is ur normal updating time plzzz reply thank u plzz reply plzz request and update more than two to three stories per day plzz

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