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Posted: 13 years ago
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@nidhi..nothing new I can write that others havent..but its very cute !!! 😃 loved to read it..
and i see you also writing in hindi only..whats your reason for that ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^yeah i wil try to write in eng. I hve written in hindi bcoz i can express my feelings and words much better in hindi. I have got a req to write in eng i wil try as i have already written 15pages in hindi in my diary so translating wil take quite time and as gayatri told me for a ME so thinking of sme interesting as wel as tragedic ones...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --nIdHi--

^^yeah i wil try to write in eng. I hve written in hindi bcoz i can express my feelings and words much better in hindi. I have got a req to write in eng i wil try as i have already written 15pages in hindi in my diary so translating wil take quite time and as gayatri told me for a ME so thinking of sme interesting as wel as tragedic ones...

hi Nidhi..i am all for hindi..no english for me as well 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi Nidhi..i am all for hindi..no english for me as well 😉


okies.. My damn pc has crashed as soon as i get it back i wil post III part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part III

Kunal leaves home on an angry note…

Seema rushes towards siddhi…

Seema: Siddhi kya hua kunal bahiyya ki naak ko…

Siddhi tells the whole story …

Seema: Tu ne unse ladai ki kya ???

Siddhi: Nahi bhabhi wo mujh pe bina matlab ka hi ghussa ho rahe they…

Seema: Kuch bhi ho unki naak badi hi achi lag rahi thi…Tamatar jaisi lal…*Laughs*…

Kunal after reaching outside the home searches his pocket for the phone and murmurs that he might have left the phone in the room…

Kunal standing at the door watching seema and siddhi laughing on his nose…

Seema sees kunal and suddenly stops laughing and hits siddhi with her shoulder and tries to tell her that kunal is standing at the door but siddhi ignores her and conts laughing…

Siddhi without seeing anything moves backwards and hits kunal..Siddhi shocked whose there and turns back and look whose here KUNAL…

Siddhi: *Moves her head down* Aap…

Kunal: Hans liya…

Siddhi: *Moves her hairs from her face* Stares at kunal…

Kunal goes to the room takes his phone and goes outside…

Siddhi: Ku….

Siddhi: Bhabhi aapne mujhe bata nahi sakti thi ki kunal mere peeche khade they…

Seema: Maine tumhe isshara to kiya tha par tum samjhi hi nahi…

Kunal while going in search for a new job recollects few moments siddhi laughing on his nose,when she puts down her head and smiles…

Kunal in office gets msg from siddhi that in the evening they have to go to her house to meet kapil and shilpa…

Siddhi: Bhabhi lagta hai kunal phir se mujhse naraz ho gaye…

Seema: Ab tu unpe itna hasegi to wo naraz nahi khush honge kya…

Siddhi: Main kya karoon bhabhi mujhse apni hasi roki nahi ja rahi thi…

Seema: Chal chod..Ab unko manayegi kaise wo soch…

Siddhi: Aap hi batao na bhabhi…

Seema: Har baar main kyo madad karu teri…Kabhi khud bhi to soch liya kar…

Siddhi: *Nervous*

Seema: Chal mujhey kuch kaam hai main ja rahi hu…

Siddhi sits on half berth and thinks how she will say sorry to kunal..

Siddhis stares at clock for a moment and is shocked to see its 5pm…

Siddhi: *Hits her head* Main kaise bhul gayi ki mujhey bhaiyya aur shilpa se milne jana hai…

Seema: Arey tu abhi tak yahi hai…Tu to apne bhaiyya ke yahan janey wali thi na...Waise tu kunal bhiyya ke saath jane wali hai na…

Siddhi: Arey haan bhabhi main to bhul hi gayi..

Seema: Kunal bhaiyya aagaye kya…???

Siddhi: Nahi bhabhi lagta hai mujhse kuch jyada hi naraz ho gaye hai…

Siddhi: Bhabhi main taiyyar ho hjati hu…Agar wo agaye aur mujhe taiyya nahi dekhenge to phir se kahin ghussa na ho jaye…

Seema: Oye hoye…Pati dev ki itni chinta…

Siddhi while getting ready thinks kunal should have come till now…

Siddhi gets a call from Vikram…

Siddhi: Haan vikram bolo…

Vikram: O ji maine na ek faisla kiya hai…

Siddhi: kaisa faisla…

Vikram: Maine aapkey kehne par apni shaadi ko ek aur mauka diya tha par ab maine faisla kiya hai ki main raveena ko is rishte se azaad kar dunga…

Siddhi:*Shocked* Kya…

Vikram: Raveena aaj bhi rohit se pyaar karti hai aur mujhse theek tarikey se baat bhi nahi karti hai…

Siddhi: Vikram tum apne is faisle ke baare mein ek baar phirse se soch lo…

Vikram: Oh teri main toh bhul hi gaya ki maine aapko phone kisliye kiya tha…

Mujhe na apse aur kunal bhaiyya se kuch baat karni hai…Kya aaplog 8 baje tak ghar ke paas wale shiv ji ke mandir mein aasakte ho..

Chalo ji main rakhta…Aap dono se wahi milunga…

Siddhi: Vikram suno to…

Siddhi comes out from the room and goes to kitchen…

Siddhi: Bhabhi main bhaiyya ke yahan ja rahi hu…Kunal aaye to unhe keh dijiyega ki mujhe unse kuch jaroori kam haiwo mujhey 8 baje tak kisi bhi haal mein ghar ke paas wale shiv ji ke mandir mein miley…

Seema: Kahin phirse divorce ke baare mein to nahi soch rahe ho na…

Siddhi: Nahi bhabhi aisa kuch nahi hai…Mujhe sach mein unse kuch zaroori baat karni hai…


To be contd in next Part...

Edited by --nIdHi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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where are your part 3, 4 and 5 as mentioned nidhi ... i'm dying to read them😭
Edited by padmaja19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: padmaja19

where are your part 3, 4 and 5 as mentioned nidhi ... i'm dying to read them😭


updated part 3...Sorry dear i was typing...as my PC was not working so i had no option left rather than to write it in my diary..and now i have to type all..🤢 My back is paining like hell...😆 WIll update next two parts soon...By today only...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --nIdHi--


updated part 3...Sorry dear i was typing...as my PC was not working so i had no option left rather than to write it in my diary..and now i have to type all..🤢 My back is paining like hell...😆 WIll update next two parts soon...By today only...

thank u nidhi ...😃...u just made my day!!!!!!!!...i just love ur writing👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: padmaja19

thank u nidhi ...😃...u just made my day!!!!!!!!...i just love ur writing👏


M happy that u liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This time it was long enuf nidhi... Too good... eagerly waiting for the rest of the updates

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