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Sunita

@sunel303

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Fantastic Nidhi!!! Waiting eagerly to read the next part.

Like I mentioned in one of my earlier posts, if CV picks a handful of our members, Parichay will reach the top slot soon!!

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gaya3sp

@gaya3sp

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Aweeesomeee... kunal is just like a small kid... continue it soon Nidhi...
very nice update nidhi...

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Padmini

@d.padmini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

hey it is lovely. yaar .Waiting for what will happen next so please continue as soon as possible

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N i d h i.

@GuardianDevil

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Thanx for the appreciations frnds...WIll try to update by tomm morning...

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shilpa maity

@shilpa_maity

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow nidhi its too good ,,,,,,,,,,,

nice writing ,,,,,,,,,,

plz cntnu dear

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AnkitaKaran

@AnkitaKaran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

waw so nice..plz plz plzzz continue soon..i am waiting..👏

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: --nIdHi--

I have tried to write something diff ...Yeah i will cont soon...

u have written it very well...i was picturising all those scenes...hoep they showed something lyk this on TV ...do continue soon

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N i d h i.

@GuardianDevil

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Part II

"Seema nashta laga de"

Siddhi turns back with a shocked face...

And your guesses are correct its none other than KUNAL...

Siddhi: Aap kahan chaley gaye they...

Kunal: Nahane(LOL😆) Par tum itni ghabrayi huyi kyo ho???

Siddhi: Nahi wo kuch nahi...

Kunal gets ready to go in search for a new job as baatliwala threw him out of his office because of thakral...

Kunal: Siddhi...

Siddhi(in a low tone): Aayi...

Kunal: Siddhi...Meri Tie...

Siddhi: Bhabhi aap nashta lagaiye main dekh ke aati hu unhe kya chahiye...

Seema: Jao jaldi jao aapke patidev aapko yaad kar rahe hai...Kahin phir se ghussa na hojaye..😳 Waise lagta hai wo tumhe dekh ke apne din ki achi shuruwat karna chate hai...😆

Siddhi(nodding her head): Bhabhi aap bhi na...

Kunal: Siddhi...

The door of the bedroom is halfclosed and kunal is just about to open it when suddenly siddhi pushes the door hardly...It hits kunals nose and body and a bit of his face...

Kunal: *Oouch*

Siddhi: Oh sorry mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap darwaje ke peeche khadey they...😆

Kunal: Tum darwaja dheere se bhi to khol sakti thi na..😡

Siddhi: Galti aap ki thi aapko darwaje ke peeche khade honey ki kya jarurat thi...

Siddhi: *Laughs*

Kunal: Ab hansi kis baat par aarahi hai..???

Siddhi: *Laughs* Apki...

Kunal: Meri Kya ...???

Siddhi: *Laughs* Aapki Naak tamatar ke jaise lal hogayi hai...😆

Kunal goes in front of the mirror and and sees that his nose has really become red like a tomato...

Kunal: Ye sab tumhari wajah se hua hai...

Siddhi: *Suddenly stops laughing* Har samay aap mujhpe hi kyu ghussa hote rehte ho... Waise aapney mujhey yahan kis liye bulaya tha...

Kunal: Meri Tie...

Siddhi: Mere bina aapko apni ek bhi cheez nahi milti to mere jaane ke baad kya hoga...

Kunal: *Shocked*

Siddhi: Ye lijiye...

Kunal: Siddhi ye main...

Siddhi: Ab kya hai...

Siddhi sees a small box in kunal's hand

Kunal: Ye main tumhare liye laya tha...😳

Siddhi: Isme kya hai...

Kunal: *Holds siddhi's hand and keeps the box in her palm* Issey mere jaaney ke baad kholna...😳

Siddhi: *Blushing* Thank You...

Seema shouts Siddhi nashta lag gaya haiKunal & Siddhi comes out of the room

Seema: Kunal bhaiyya nashta lag gaya hai...

Kunal: Stares at siddhi and says mujhe bhook nahi hai...😳

Seema: Stares at kunal...😳

Kunal: *Shocked* Kya ?? Mujhey aise kyo dekh rahi ho...😲

Seema: *Laughs* Aapki naak ko kya hogaya hai...😆

To be Contd...

Edited by --nIdHi-- - 13 years ago

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N i d h i.

@GuardianDevil

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Suggestions/Appreciations are heartly welcomed...But only leave comments if u really like it..No false comments Pls...😊

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chitsss

@chitsss

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: --nIdHi--

Suggestions/Appreciations are heartly welcomed...But only leave comments if u really like it..No false comments Pls...😊

really nice Nidhi... par itne chote chote installments mein kyun dete ho ??? 😊

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