OS-Kunal's confess-Part IV added - Page 2

thank you all for reading the OS...i will ttry to post the last part next week mostly. Glad that everyone liked it..had no intention of making anyone shed tears though😭

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Oh my god.ur os was just so goood.u must be a writer.i bcame a bit emotional aftr reading it.its that goood.

Pooja, great OS and I had great time reading it. Hope you continue the next part soon as I want to know what would be Kunal's next move.

Aww this one is so absolutely beautiful. You are a poet, do you know it? 😆 I had tears in my eyes each time I read it imagining Kunal sitting on the steps of a temple reading this letter. I can imagine the tears in his eyes when he reads the words and I think Sammy will do a great job. What is so great about this is that you have used the Anand angle which is the thorn in their side and turned it around - he is the past you are the future. If Kunal reads this letter and gets one advice session from Raj he will get some sense through his thick skin 😊

👏wow...what an OS...GOD...u r amazing writer.. plzz plzz plzz continue...ur dialogues are perfect...beautifully written and hearttouching.
Incredible confession part...would love to know how kunal reacts afterreading such intense letter from his wife...yaar rula diya tune mujhe pur khushi ke aasoon the ...A bigg hug for u from me...HUGGIEEE...🤗

👏👏👏 FABULOUS!!! Well written !!!! This is a wonderful OS. Please keep writing. It would certainly be a pleasure to read this and keep the mind off the current track that is going on.

Part IV

Given that lot of people are upset some with Siddhi for her main choop rahongi role and some with Kunal for his short temper, I am jumping the sequence here

Initially the plan just one short article- OS means one shot right ?
Given the positive responses, I am putting another part to this..Kunal and Siddhi's interaction.

(If I can come up with good storyline/lines I want to put two more parts
Kunal's reaction on reading the letter
Kunal's interaction with someone else, yes I would like it to be his father only and not Seema, because she is a lady
and also she is younger, here Kunal needs to talk to someone older than him..)

Kunal was wondering where is Siddhi, she is not with her brother, not at their house, where would she have gone in the afternoon.
Just then he remem some thing and took an auto

And he was right, there she was..sitting near the lake..staring blankly into the lake with her eyes wide open. He had decided to go to Powai lake, he thought that she might have gone to the lake.

Mujhe pata tha tum yahi milogi,
Haan yahan par wahi log aate hai jinke pass kaam nahi hota..Siddhi trailed off
ya fir woh jo ek doosre se bahut pyar karte hai..Kunal completed his own sentence for Siddhi.
Kafi der se yahan baithi ho lagta hai?
Nahi bus abhi thodi der hui hai.
khana khaya? he asked her and then opened a lunch box, and offered to Siddhi.
Siddhi looked at the box, it had freshly cooked pasta, steaming hot.

There was a faint smile on her lips..she remembered how she had cooked pasta for him.
However the divorce was still looming large on her mind and she refused his offer,
Nahi mujhe bhookh nahi hai
Thoda sa kha lo..
Nahi

He started talking

Aye ( I know words can't do justice to how he actually tells aye :)) to her...but this was the soft/pleading one..
Ek baat puchu (there is a pause..a pause is needed for the effect)...kya tum mere bina khush reh paogi?
Siddhi for a second didnt decipher the question, she looked at him with question filled eyes.
But she had heard it right.
She just kept looking at him, not knowing what to say,
He was still looking at her expectantly and was waiting for her to answer the question.
She didnt know what to say, she just shifted his gaze and looked down.
she didnt know that he had read the letter..she was expecting him to either shout at her or fight with her as she had disappeared so mysteriously from the court.

Meri hi galti thi jo main tumhe kabhi samjh nahi paya, aur pichle kuch mahino mein jo bhi takleef maine tumhe di hai
jab jab tumhara dil dukhaya hai, us har baat aur har pal ke liye I am sorry

Siddhi, pata hai, jaise jaise hum bade hote jate hai, apne man mein ek tasvir bana lete hai
ki zindagi aisi hogi,
yeh sahi hai, yeh galat hai
aisa ho sakta hai, aisa nahi ho sakta hai
aur us tasvir mein is tarah bandh jate hai ki hamare samne jab zindagi
nayee tasvir banaa rahee hoti hai
hum usi purani berang tasvir mein ulajh kar reh jate hai
wahi sahi galat mein uljhe rehte hai
jab umeed se jyada kuch mil jaye to insaan ko upar wale ka shukriya
ada karna chahiye, na ki upar wale se shikayat karni chahiye

us din main tumhare ghar jab tumhara haath mangne aya tha,
maine tumhara haath apni maa ke liye manga tha, tumse kahan tha ki tumhe anand ki jagah leni hogi
magar aaj mein tumhara saath kisi aur ke liye nahi, apne liye mangna chahta hoon
kya tum mere saath meri zindagi mein meri patni ki jagah lena chahogi?

maine kahan tha, ki sacha pyar zindagi mein ek hi baar hota hai, abhi abhi humne apna pyar khoya hai
magar aaj main kehna chahta hoon, ki maine ab jana hai ki sacha pyar kya hota hai, aur usi pyar ko bachane ke liye
main tumhare pass aya hoon
Ab se tum mere liye sirf meri patni ho, Siddhi Kunal Chopra, tumhare beetein rishto ki main kadar karta hoon, aur main unke jagah nahi lena chahta hoon,
magar mein yeh bhi janta hoon, ki meri bhi apni ek jagah hai jo shayad koi aur na le payega

Aur main tumse puchna chahta hoon, Siddhi Chopra, kya tum mujhe, Kunal Chopra ko apne pati ki roop mein
saari zindagi dekhna pasand karogi?
Main janta hoon, ki yeh asaan nahi hai, magar main ise tumhare liye asan banana chahta hoon
Hamari zindagi mein samjhote ke liye koi jagah nahi hogi
Aur na hi koi Seemarekha hogi,
jab zindagi mein na to dard ki koi seema rekha hai, na khushiyon ko,
to hum insaan rishton mein kya seema rekha rakhenge.

us din tumhe rokne ke liye kai bahane the,
kabhi almari ki chabiyan
to kabhi meri cheezein
aaj to koi bahana bhi nahi hai
na chabiyan na cheezein.
fir bhi kya tum mere saath chalogi

Siddhi couldnt beleive all that she was hearing, all that she wanted to tell him, all that she wanted to hear, he had finally told her. Tears of joy fell out of her eyes, and this time Kunal didnt offer her the tissue, but he wiped them off with his hands.
He held out his hand towards her, which she shlylyl held on to.

(There is one technical problem in the story..i wanted them to meet at the lake..but talking all tis much and showing emotions on the lake is tough..i dont know how to

get them to the house or room or any privat place..so pl pardon this blooper)

(Now for the lighter version from Kunal)

Main wada karta hoon ki, kal se
main roz subah shaam tumhe SORRY kahunga
din ek baar to jaroor muskuranonga
aur tumhe hamesha aye kehkar nahi bulaonga..kabhi kabhi Siddhi keh kar bhi pukaronga
tumhare haath se tiffin lete waqt, thoda sa smile kar diya karonga
aur kabhi kabhi tum se pyaar se baat bhi kar liya karonga
tum chaho to thakral, vikral ya fir chudail kisi ke bhi office mein job kar sakti ho, main nahi rokunga

They were now off to their house and were sitting in the rick.
Kunal showed her the letter and asked her..
Kapil ne yeh khat diya hai, lekin koi naam hi nahi hai, pata nahi kisne likha hai kiske liye..
Siddhi, showed mock anger towards him
Kunal goes, acha thik hai thik hai, tumne mujhe likha hai
magar is letter ki summary kya hai..mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aya?Itna bada letter likhne se acha hai, ek line mein likh deti jo kehna tha?
Kam se kam tumhara letter hamare divorce lene ke pehle khatam to ho jata, hume divorce to nahih lena padta.
And they both shared a light laughter

(I have shown a lot of serious stuff which is not in keeping with Kunal's character probably, but I felt it was required..Siddhi deserved to hear all this and it was high time Kunal did something that Siddhi liked, no harm in him indulging her with some food..i wanted to add roses and chocolates too)

Poshah, you are a fantastic writer. Siddhi confession was out of this world. So full of meaning and feeling. Dil ko hilakar rakh diya. Didnt think that it can be topped BUt you did it dear. Superb confession from Kunal too.