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Sunita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Keep it coming Nancy!! Wonderful!

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tanyashrivastav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

wonderful update...Nancy loving this ff lots...do continue soon...

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Sorry for the late reply

just logged in after 2 days

Haye haye jab Shumi, Rani aur Sahasra involved hai tho kahani tho interesting hona hi hai 👍🏼

lovely concept

waiting for the next part

pls send PM when you update

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Iamrani
Hi Nancy, just read the 2nd part. It was very good, but very short😔. You are really writing this in soap style where you end the parts at such notes where readers are left craving for more😆. I am sure the result of Siddhi's test is "In love with Kunal" right? Sorry just doing the guessing game as we do it for the show and try to speculate what will happen in the show the next day😆. Waiting for the next part so update it soon.

🤣🤣 Soap style... what to do Rani.. itne serials dekhte hoon ki kab unse influence ho gayi pata hi nahin chala... Vaise same thing happens in books too... Aur next update abhi thodi der mein upload karne wali hoon!😊

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Priya4Mirra
Hi Nancy, just read both the parts in one go, loved it. Thanks for the FF, pls update the next part soon...it's so interesting :)

Thanks Priya.. am glad you are liking it... I will be updating the next part sometime today!

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: rdfan
Loved it cont soon PS I shall w8 for the special

Thoda time hai abhi.. after 3 parts I think...teri baari hai Pooja!

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sunel303
Keep it coming Nancy!! Wonderful!

Thanksss! Will pm you when I upload the next part!

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: tanyashrivastav
wonderful update...Nancy loving this ff lots...do continue soon...

Thanks Tanya.. am very happy you are liking it...

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: MsCeylon
Sorry for the late reply
just logged in after 2 days: Oh that is fine... hope you are doing well!

Haye haye jab Shumi, Rani aur Sahasra involved hai tho kahani tho interesting hona hi hai 👍🏼

lovely concept: Thanks... yeh hamesha kehte hain ki they can coach Siddhi isliye socha ki inko FF mein dal deti hoon...

waiting for the next part: Will upload it in sometime

pls send PM when you update: Sure will do!

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nancy1996

@nancy1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Continuation of scene from Pg. 4

Siddhi enters Shumi's living room and finds Rani and Sahasra sitting there enjoying samosas. Siddhi sits next to Shumi, hands over the paper and asks "Main test main fail hui ya paas?" Shumi stares at the paper'"Yeh kya hai?"

"Wohi test jiske bare mein Rani ne subah bataya tha.. maine kiya." Rani, Shumi and Saharsra start laughing "Siddhi tumne test likh ke kiya' hey bhagwan kya hoga iss ladki ka."

"Please bataye na main fail hui ya pass?" Rani takes the paper from Shumi and goes through it. "Pass ho gayi full marks." Tears start rolling down Siddhi's cheeks.

"Siddhi kya hua?" Shumi asks and puts her arm around her shoulder. "Main bahut buri hoon Shumi' mujhe Kunal se kaise pyaar ho sakta hai.. main toh Anand se pyaar karti hoon'" Rani and Sahasra give questioning looks to Shumi. Shumi gestures them to keep quiet and concentrates on Siddhi "Siddhi tum kaise buri hui.. tumne pyaar hi toh kiya hai!"

"Par Anand'" "Toh Anand tumhara pehla pyaar tha.. jo shayad tumhari kismat mein nahi tha.. tumhari kismat mein Kunal hai'" "Par yeh galat hain.. main Anand ko kaise bhool sakti hoon'." "Kisne kahan ki tum Anand ko bhool rahi ho? Anand ki yaadein tumhare saat hamesha rahengi.. par tum yaadon ke sahare akele zindagi kaat sakti hoon Siddhi' Zindagi jeene ke liye pyaar chahiye. Yeh hamesha jaroori nahin ki humhe apna pehla pyaar mile' par iska yeh matlab bhi nahin ki hum pyaar karna chod de"

"Toh main'" "Bilkul buri nahin ho'. Par agar tum ab aur rona dhona karogi.. phir hum sab tumhe bura kahenge." Siddhi wipes her tears. "Acha abhi tum ghar jao' hum kal baat karenge.. ok" "Theek hai Shumi" and Siddhi hugs Shumi, Rani and Sahasra and leaves.

Next Day per plan the four of them meet in a coffee shop. Shumi by then has already provided Rani and Sahasra with circumstances around Siddhi-Kunal's wedding. The 4 girls sit down and once coffee has been ordered they start their planning.

"Pehle hame iss Mission ka naam rakhna chahiye'kya rakhe?" Sahasra asks. "Mission Akdoo" Siddhi answers immediately and four of them start laughing'"Nahin Siddhi koi different sa naam, kuch exciting sa naam" Rani says.

"Mission Vishwamitra?" Sahasra suggests. "Ohh yeh naam acha hai'" Shumi replies "Aur naam jajta bhi hai.. Kunal Vishwamitra aur Siddhi Meneka'."

"Par yeh galat nahin hai?" Siddhi wonders aloud "Aise planning karna ki Kunal bhi mujhse pyaar Karen" "Kissne kaha ki hum Kunal ko tujhse pyaar karne ke liye keh rahe hain' main 100% keh sakti hoon ki unhe tumhse pyaar hai.. bas abhi tak realize nahin hua hai'" Shumi answers.

"Aapko aisa lagta hai Shumi?" "Haan aur agar tu chahe toh Rani to Sahasra ko bhi kunal se milayenge.. phir dekhna'yeh dono kya kehte hain'" "Acha milne-milani ki baatein baad mein' pehle mera plan to sunn lo" Rani quips.

"Essentially hame 4-5 main cheezen karni hain'. Sabse pehle' Siddhi ka hairstyle change karna' phir wardrobe'. Siddhi tum salwaar suit pehti ho?" "Salwaar suit haan kabhi kabhi kyun?" "Theek hai.. toh ab tum wohi pehno gi' kyunki ladkon ka love affair ladki se pehle uske hawa mein udte hui dupatte se hota hai" Rani explains.

Sahasra, Siddhi and Shumi all three choke on their coffee "Kya?" they all ask in unison. "Arey seriously" Rani explains "Koi bhi serial le lo' sabse pehle ladki ka dupatta hi hai.. joh udh udh ke ladke pe jaake girta hain' kya tum logon ne dekha nahin hai?"

Shumi looks at Siddhi and says "Kaha tha na bahut filmi hai' Age bol Rani" "Acha aur haan Siddhi tumhe tumhare attitude mein change lana hoga' Shumi bata rahi thi ki tum Kunal ke saamne aate hi bheegi billi ban jaati hoon.. jaisi tum ho full of attitude spunk' who sab choo mantar ho jaata hain. Woh nahin chahiye hame' jaise ho waise hi raho.Dont care attitude dikhayo apna'.Aur last and not the least'ek ladka."

"Ek ladka? Ab yeh kyun?" Siddhi questions. Shumi answers "Tried and tested formula hai.. tumhara akdoo tumhe do-theen baar ek ladke ke saath dekhe ga' toh dekhna kya haal hoga"

Siddhi looks at Sahasra for help. "Mujhe aise mat dekho Siddhi" Sahasra replies " Mujhe itna experience nahin hain' main bhi sab seekh rahi hoon"

"Siddhi koi hai tumhara dost.. jo hamari madad kare jise tum jaanti ho par Kunal nahin?" Shumi questions. "Haan shayad' abhi abhi shift hua hai wapas Bombay. Woh shayad madad karde'" "Excellent tum kal usse bula sakti ho?" "Ji kahan?" Mere ghar pe" Rani suggests.. "Theek hai'" The girls continue chatting for sometime and then part ways'..

Subsequent evening, Siddhi introduces Shumi, Sahasra and Rani to her friend Bipin. The girls sit and explain their plan to Bipin, who towards the end of the explanation, stares at them shocked and then bursts out laughing "Tum deviyan' koi chance hi nahin ki Kunal bach payega. Siddhi tumhara akdoo gaya ab toh!"'

Continued...on pg 9

Edited by nancy1996 - 13 years ago

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