ShiVixPuchki Diaries - (DRABBLE SERIES) New Update on Page 8 (1/10/22) - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

57

Views

6.8k

Users

12

Likes

136

Frequent Posters

Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: VNuts

It was a lovely update. The three of them as a family. ❤️

Looking forward to the next one.


Thanks dear❤️. Updating soon the new one...

Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#52


Yess.. True indeed. They are the cutest❤️

Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Kakashi2003

Awwww so Sweet and Cute😍💓💓


Awwwie, Thank you so much.❤️

Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Kakashi2003

By the way Author

Can't like Your Stories.....😿


OHH So sorry regarding that . I think when you read my stories that time only I have hibernated my account. So for that reasons you can't like on my Post. No issues for that actually. I'm genuinely happy that you all guys praise my work so much. Thank u❤️. It means a lot 🤗



Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Lauzi

It was adorable and beautiful


Aww, Thanks a lot for the compliment❤️

Shru_thebaadal thumbnail
3rd Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#56

Welcome Chutki



"Oh God!!" Rishita pressed her lips and tried to sit down when she felt a sharp shooting pain in her lower abdomen. She suppressed her painful growls and tried to breathe in and breathe out. "Oh shitt kahi baby toh nahi aane wala... No no no!! Maa, Gaumbi, Dhara bhabhi toh ghar pe hi nahi hai. Krish college gya hai..Aur De... Owwww" She clutched her eyes tight and tried to relax herself. "DEVV!!!" She shouted loudly and clutched her belly tightly.


Raavi who was busy in feeding Puchki heard the loud yelp of Rishita. "Hayye Somnath, Rishita!" She yelled loudly and with Puchki in her arms , patting her back so that she gets a burp came running to Rishita. The sight which Raavi saw made her almost panicked. Rishita was sitting on the ground , clutching her belly tightly, She saw some yellowish liquid around Rishita's legs. "Hayye bhgawaan" Raavi looked here and there with confusion and panic trying to help Rishita come out of this situation.


"Raavi help me... Dev.. " Raavi ran to her room, laid Puchki down on the crib and took her phone calling Dev, but his cell was not reachable. "Raavvvvvi!!!" She heard Rishita's constant yell and ran to her room.


"Rishita, shaant ho jao, gehri saansein lo, " Rishita grabbed Raavi's hands and yelled "Tumhe kya lagta hai mein panic ho rahi hun, Baar baar breathe in breath ou.. aaaaahhh!!" More yellowish fluid dripped from Rishita's legs and Raavi knew that she can't wait for anyone


"Kya karun mein, Rishita ka water break hogya, Maa , Dhara di , Gaumbi Puchki ke maa se milne gaye hai.." Raavi was muttering to herself when Rishita yelled "Raavi take me... Ohhh Hospital.." Raavi nodded and called the ambulance . "Hello, emergency hai, please.." But from the other side a voice came "I'm so sorry par humare saare ambulance already occupied hai, and Bhaari traffic ke wajah se we can't even make out on time. But hum fir bhi try karnege." and the line from the other side gone dead.


"Rishita bas thoda sa wait, mein kuch karti hun." Rishita nodded her pain subsided a little but immediately she yelped and more liquid dripped down her legs. Raavi tried to make Rishita stand and lay on the bed but she loosened her entire body.


Just then she heard his voice "Chipkali .."


Raavi and Rishita's face lit up hearing Shiva's voice . Raavi mumbled saying "Rishita mein bas Shiva ko bolke aayi." Rishita nodded and left Raavi's arms from her grip. Raavi hissed when she saw fingerprints on her arm.


She ran to Shiva and said in a panic voice "Shiva, jaldi kuch kar, Baby aa raha hai" Shiva starred at her in confusion and said "Baby? kiska baby? " Raavi growled in irritation but Shiva saw fingerprints on Raavi's milky white arms and asked "Yeh kisne tujhe chott pohonchai, sab theek haina chipkali." He mumbled in a low soothing voice and Raavi hit his forehead "Ouchh!! Kya hai Gadheri?"


Raavi dragged him to Rishita's room and said " Rishita ka water break hogya hai, Ambulance bulayi hai pann kabtak aayegi koi idea nhi hai... Dev ka phone bhi not reachable aa raha hai" Shiva's eyes widened when the intensity of the situation hit him. "Yeh dev... Aaahh Usko meri parwaah hi nahi hai.. I'm telling you Shiva, tumhare bhai ko zindaa gaar dun....Owwwww.. " She took a deep breathe and slumped her head on her shoulders.


"Ayye chipakli, tu bhabhi ko sambhaal mein Jignesh bhai ki gaadi leke aata hun.." Raavi nodded her head and Shiva ran to fetch the car. After two minutes Raavi could hear the sound of horn


"Jaldi aa!!!" Shiva yelled "Rishita please try karo uthne ki." Rishita stood up but her legs wobbled and she was about to fall but Shiva came on the right time and held her shoulders. "Ek kaam tujhse theek se nahi hota na.." Raavi frowned and said "Tum bhaiyon se kaunsa hota hai. Abhi Dev ko rehna tha yaha kaha hai woh?" Shiva retord saying "Uss nalle se mujhe compare mat karna samjhi."


Rishita gritted her teeth and shouted "Chup karo tum dono.. Yaha mein..(breathing heavily) marr rahi hun aur tum dono ko jhagarna hai. " Shiva carried Rishita in bridal style and murmured "sab iss chipakli ne hi shuru kiya," and Raavi frowned .


"Shiva tu Rishita ko leja, mein Puchki ke paas rahungi." To which Rishita hold her hands saying "No Raavi, I need someone, please.. agar Shiva nahi aata aur ambulance time se aa jaati tab toh tu.. tum chalti na, please.. Puchki ko leke aa jao." Raavi looked at Shiva for assurance and he nodded .


Raavi went to bring a sleeping Puchki and then they all went out after locking the entrance. Shiva very gently made Rishita sit on the back seat and Raavi along with Puchki sat with Rishita. Shiva took the driver seat and quickly speeded off to the hospital.


"Shivaa.. Itni der se tumhara bhai kaha marr gaya hai.." Rishita grunted and yelped. Raavi tried to calm her down and called Dev, but this time his phone was switched off . She then called Gautam telling him about Rishita. She told him to directly come to the hospital with Dhara and Suman. Luckily the hospital in which Puchki's mother was admitted was not so far from the maternity Hospital of Rishita.


"Sab time se aa jaayenge, sivaay Dev.." She breathed heavily and Raavi tried to clean Rishita's sweat . Shiva was constantly watching Raavi and Rishita from the car mirror and sped the car fast. But then again luck was not on their side and they met with a long Traffic jam.


"Bhakkk.. Yahi hona baaki reh gaya tha." Shiva gritted his teeth in anger and blew the horn twice for the front car. "Abbey Dikh nahi raha kya , aage ki gaadiyan jaa rhi hai, Nikal.!!" Shiva popped out his head from the window and yelled at the man who was crawling his car. The driver gave them some space to go and Shiva sped off quickly.


"Iss Raaste se jaayenge toh kabhi nahi pohochenge, Bhabhi.. Mujhe dusra raasta pata hai pann woh lamba parega, Without traffic lekin isse jaldi pohochenge." Rishita shouted "Jaise bhi le jaana hai le jao.. Mujhe bas Hos.. Hospital pohocha do" Shiva nodded and took the long route.


Puchki who was woken up by now was constantly glancing at Rishita. She was at the moment chewing her Small locket and quivering her lips. Rishita felt the constant staring of Puchki and looked up to her. Puchki smiled brightly at Rishita and crawled her hands towards her face.


Raavi saw that and put back Puchki's hands. "Naa Babu, Rishita pain mein haina, abhi unko touch mat karo." Puchki frowned at that and started looking outside through the mirror. Throughout the short journey, Rishita had 2 contractions which were almost 10 minutes apart each. Puchki once again looked at Rishita and wiped her tears through her hands. Rishita felt lighter with that touch and she slumped her head on Raavi's shoulders clutching her eyes tightly.


Then only Puchki noticed faint marks on Raavi's arms. She touched her arms and Raavi gasped at that. By that moment Rishita got another contraction and she shouted loudly. Shiva shriked in fear with Rishita's worsen condition . "Bhabhi bas 5 minute, pohonch gye." And as promised they reached to the destination by the next 5 minutes.


Rishita was almost exhausted and Shiva once gain took her in arms and ran to the hospital. The Hospital was quite busy and Raavi went to the reception holding Puchki . She told them about the emergency and after that a few seconds later a wheelchair came for Rishita and she was wheeled to the ward.


"Dev.. Kaha ho?" Rishita cried calling his name while Shiva and Raavi both were clueless about Dev . Shiva once again called Dev and seemed like the luck finally came in their favour .


He picked up Shiva's call in the third ring and said to Shiva "Haa Shiva bhai, Sorry haa, phone receive nahi kar paya pehle. Woh Rishita ne baby ke nursery ke liye saaman ka bola tha , wahi lene aaya hun baahar." Shiva gritted his teeth and shouted "Tu.." But was cut off when a nurse passed by him and shushed him .


Shiva gave a forced smile and continued "Tu bas bacche ka samaan khareedte reh jaana , Aur yaha tera baccha duniya mein bhi aajayega." Dev gave a confused gasp and said "Kya bol raha hai tu?" Raavi took the phone from his hands and came straight to the point "Dev, Rishita labour mein hai. Jaldi aao Lifeline Maternity clinic." Before Dev could say anything the doctor came and said "Rishita Pandya ke saath aap dono haina?" Raavi cut the call and both turned to the doctor.


"Ok so Mrs. Rishita isn't in a state to say much, so I wanted to ask ki first contraction kab aaya?" Raavi thought for a moment and then said "Dopahar ko 3 bajke 15 minute ke aas paas. Tabhi Rishita ne mujhe bulaya tha." The doctor nodded and said "Well, she is not much dialated , we have to wait for sometimes before proceeding any further."


Raavi nodded and Shiva turned to Raavi confusion visible in his face "Yeh dr. kya bolke gyi? wait karna parega! Toh fir mein gaadi kyun udaa ke laya, hum waha traffic mein bhi wait kar lete..Mujhe toh laga woh majduron wala dard utha hai toh baccha kabhi bhi aa jaayega." Raavi laughed at Shiva's statement and along with her Puchki too started laughing. "Ab tu hass kyun rahi hai?" Shiva asked more confused and with irritation laced voice. "Hassun nahi toh kya karun.. Tu jaisa soch raha hai delivery waise nahi hoti, Doba." Shiva ruffled his messy hairs but then frowned on being called 'Doba' . "Mein Doba.. Chipkali, kahinki"


Raavi ignored his mock and sat with Puchki. Shiva too sat with her and she slumped her head on his shoulders. Shiva too kept his head on her head. "Mujhe toh yakeen nahi ho raha ki hum dono Chacha aur Chachi banne waale hai." Raavi giggled at his statement and said "Bhootnath Chachu aur Chipkali chachi." Shiva and Raavi both chuckled at that and Puchki who was looking quite confused giggled along with them.


"La de, Puchki ko mujhe." Raavi handed her to Shiva and clutched his biceps. Shiva too rested Puchki on his chest holding her protectively , closing his eyes waiting for others to arrive soon.


...


"Shiva.... Uth.." Shiva slowly opened his eyes fluttering it again and again trying to get customed with the light. He saw Gautam's face and smiled to his elder brother. Suman and Dhara were also present there , while Suman was watching them with sparkling eyes .. Dhara seemed off.


"Gaumbi aap.." Shiva asked Gautam softly , so that he couldn't wake up Puchki or Raavi. "Haa Shiva, abhi abhi pohonch paaye, itne khatarnak jam mein fasse the. Aisa laga ki Mumbai aur Delhi ka saara jam aaj Somnath mein lag gaya ho." Gautam chuckled so as Shiva.


"Dev kaha hai?" Suman asked and Raavi mumbled in her sleep holding Shiva's biceps more tightly. Suman corrected her pallu, more off trying to hide her face . Shiva nudged Raavi and Raavi too woke up . As soon as she registered her surroundings , she left Shiva's biceps .


"Rishita iss haalat mein hai, tum dono so kaise sakte ho?" Dhara asked in a cold tone and both Shiva and Raavi felt bad hearing that. Suman shushed her down and Dhara once again sat on the bench opposite to Shiva and Raavi's. They were waiting for Rishita's update when Dev came running to them. He spotted his family and ran but tripped and fell on ground almost near Suman's wheelchair. Suman saw that and gripped his collar "Biwi ko iss haalat mein chodke tu woh school ka samaan lane gaya tha." Dev tried to get out of Suman's held but can't .


"Maa, mein jaata bhi nahi pann woh Rishita hi thi.." He can't complete his sentence as the ward boys came out with Rishita's stretcher. Rishita at once saw him and gave him her shooting daggers glare. Dev flinched with that. He came near Rishita and was about to cup her cheeks when Rishita took his hands and rotated it 180゜ .


Dev yelped but no one came to save him. Puchki peek a boo from Shiva's shoulders and laughed loudly watching it. Shiva tried to shush her down but she was all gyrating her body and clapped her hands watching the scene. A shooting contraction hit Rishita and she dug her nails on his fore-arm. Dev can't stop his yelping and plead Rishita to stop.


"Dev Pandya, Tum labour room mein chalo, I'll make sure tumhe tumhare late aane ki sazaa mil jaaye." The ward boy took Rishita to the labour room and handed Dev sanitized over gown , gloves , cap and mask so that no infections could get. Dev took them, changed and directly went to the labour room, joining his hands before entering.


Everybody else outside took a seat and waited for the delivery to be over soon.


...


Dhara was pacing, outside the labour room. Suman was constantly chanting Bholenaath's name and Gautam tried to make Dhara sit patiently.


Shiva and Raavi were also sitting, while Raavi took a picture of a half asleep Shiva , Puchki and her , to give in her insta story to say that They are soon gonna be Chacha and Chachi and Puchki, an elder sister.


Puchki was cooing, playing with Shiva's stubble which everytime wakes Shiva up. Shiva would glare at her , but then kiss her cheeks to which she would also peck him. Raavi felt ecstatic watching the bond between Shiva and Puchki. Unknowingly Puchki's hands swatted Raavi's arm and Raavi squirmed. Shiva look at her and saw that her arm almost had purplish marks.


"Chipkali!! Yeh?? Tune bola tha thoda sa hai, yeh toh pura kaala pad gya." Raavi tried to calm down Shiva but when he gently touched the bruise Raavi gasped, and clutched his lap probably the jeans fabric tightly. Shiva murmured a sorry and called one of the nurse standing beside them . He showed Raavi's bruise and told her to take Raavi for first aid. But Raavi denied


"Tu baar baar mana kyun kar rahi hai?" Raavi said "Nahi Shiva, bahut dard hota hai mein nahi karwaaungi." He sighed and stood up. He said something to the nurse handed Puchki to Suman and came back to her. Raavi felt that Shiva finally gave up , but to her dismay the nurse came with a first aid kit and gave it to Shiva.


"Nahi Bhootnath Please." Shiva simply took out the spray and sprayed it on Raavi's arm. She flinched and hit him on his shoulders. Suman watched this and glared at Raavi "Ayye Markundi. ek toh mera beta teri marham patti kar raha hai, aur tu usko hi maar rahi hai." Raavi looked down fidgeting with her dupatta while Shiva murmured "Maa rehne de." Suman pulled her pallu aside and played with Puchki.


After almost 2 hours, Dev came out and was engulfed in a tight grip by Dhara. "Kaisi hai Rishita, baby kaisa hai?" Till the doctor came out and asked Dhara to maintain silence and space. Dhara bewildered at that but Gautam pacified her. Dev after disposing the hospital gown came to Suman and kept his hand on her laps stating "Beti hui hai."


Shiva and Raavi shrieked in joy and hugged each other tightly . Dhara came to Dev and bombarded him with questions when Suman told her to stand quite for a while, to which she reluctantly agreed. "Aise bol ki ghar mein lakshmi aayi hai."


After a few minutes, Family members were allowed to see the child and mother. Dhara came in front and expected Dev to take her when he came to Raavi and said "Woh Rishita sabse pehle Maa, tumse aur Shiva se milna chahti hai." Raavi and Shiva's face lit up hearing that and Suman immediately wheeled her chair to the room. Shiva , Raavi and Puchki followed suit.


They saw Rishita lying on her bed ; tired and exhausted yet a smile was plastered on her face. She tried to get up but Suman came and said "Aaram kar. hmm" She nodded her head and took Suman's hand. "Maa... Meri beti" Suman ruffled her hair and she shed happy tears. Shiva, Raavi and Dev saw this affair with a wide smile.


"Raavi, Shiva.. Tum log kyun khare ho aao na." The couple moved forward Rishita and she noticed the white bandage on Raavi's arm "Yeh kaise hua?" Raavi looked to Shiva and then mumbled "Chot lag gyi hospital mein.."


Shiva gave a proud grin to her making Raavi blush. "Thank you so much Shiva , Thanks a lot Raavi, aaj agar tum dono nahi hote mere saath toh pata nahi , kya.." Raavi shook her head stopping her to say anything further. "Well, mein chahti thi ki mere aur Dev ke baad sabse pehle maa apni poti se mile, aur uske Godfather aur Godmother bhi."


Shiva and Raavi's eyes widened hearing that and Dev patted Shiva's back mumbling a "Thank you" .


Suman first took the little bundle of joy and cooed her in her arms. Then she handed her to Raavi . Raavi gave Puchki to Shiva and hold the baby , closer . Her eyes when exposed to light shine bluish and her brownish skin so soft . Raavi swayed the baby in her arms and Shiva looked to his bhatiji with the softest stare he ever had.


Puchki too looked at her sister and giggled at her poking her cheeks. The baby frowned and started crying in response so as Puchki's eyes welled up. But the next moment the baby again stopped her yelling and stuck her small tongue out making Puchki clap her hands.


The Pandya's and the nurse present in the room watched the whole affair and laughed . "Puchki.. Babu apni choti behen ko hello bolo." Raavi said to Puchki and she stared to the small baby wide eyes before caressing her cheeks. "Yeh le Shiva, ab tu le." Shiva tried to give Puchki to Raavi but she held his collar tightly making everyone there laugh again.


"Hmm, Puchki bahut Possessive hai Shiva ko leke." Rishita said in a feeble yet playful voice and Raavi frowned "Haaww.. Mujhe leke toh nahi hui, aur iss Bhootnath ko leke meri bacchi possessive hai, yeh toh cheating hai." Raavi pouted and played with the small baby. "Ab mein Puchki se katti, ab sirf chutki ke saath khelungi mein." Raavi mumbled and Shiva said to her "Jalkukdi chipkali." Raavi was about to give back to him when The nurse shushed them for not making noise.


Shiva finally succeeded from getting out of Puchki's hold and took Chutki in his arms , She smiled back at him and yawned. Shiva smiled ever so brightly and rocked her in his arms. "Koi dekh ke bolega kya yeh tere jaise nalle ki beti hai." Shia said looking to Dev and Dev sighed "Tu bas bhi karega Shiva, sabse pehle apni bhatiji ko godh mein liya aur yeh bola ki woh mere jaisi nahi hai." Rishita and Suman chuckled at that while Raavi tried to stop her laughter. "Matlab tu maanta hai tu Nalla hai." Shiva murmured and Dev sighed.


"Compliment bolte hai usse Dev." Shiva handed Chutki to Dev and he settled Chutki near Rishita.


Raavi shouted in excitement but then apologised when the nurse told her to keep silence. "Ek kaam karte hai selfie lete hai, Chutki ko welcome karne ke liye." Everyone agreed to that idea and by that time Dhara and Gautam were also present inside the room.


They all assembled near Rishita's bed and Raavi called the nurse to click their Picture; with everyone saying in unison "Welcome Chutki."


A not so prefect but cute picture with Rishita kissing her baby, Dev watching them . Suman doing thumbs up with both hands, Gautam kissing Dhara's forehead and Puchki smiling brightly while Shiva and Raavi were looking at themselves, eyes filled with love and adoration.


...


No idea how it was, and how you all will react. Do tell me what you liked and what you all disliked. 🥰 Coz it was quite family Drama with ShiVi and Puchki.

Edited by Shru_thebaadal - 2 years ago
VNuts thumbnail
Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 2 years ago
#57

Man, Shiva-Raavi-Rishita are a hilarious trio. 🤣

This was such a fun update. And it was sweet of Rishita to ask Shiva-Raavi in first, considering they were the ones who got her to the hospital.

Looking forward to the next one. ❤️

Kakashi2003 thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#58

Wow, it was different but beautiful. The part I liked the most was when Shiva in his own way applied medicine to Raavi's bruise but I honestly didn't dislike anything.


I can't say about the show, but Rishita here was Good. Shivi as God Parents😚🥰


This part was very beautiful. Please update soon💖

Edited by Kakashi2003 - 2 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".