Dil Mein- ShiVi Drabble

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people, decided to write something out of the blue.

This is a little bit of my imagination of the burning certificate ka scene.

Have not proofread, so please do ignore if you come across any grammatical errors.

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Dil mein


“Itni samajhdar biwi tujhe aise hi nahi mili shiva, bhar diya maine tera form” raavi said with a wide smile


“Tujhe kaise pata tha ki main maan jaunga?” he asked in disbelief


“Yahaan, tere dil mein rehti hoon mein shiva. Tujhe pata ho ya na ho, mujhe tere dil ki khabar rehti hai” she said while pointing at his heart


“Kaise hai tu aisi raavi. Kya kiya hai maine jo tu meri zindagi mein aayi.” he said with tears brimming his eyes


“Hmm kiya honge tune koi ache karam, ki tujhe mujh jaisi biwi mili hai” she joked around trying to lighten his mood


It took shiva less than a second to engulf her in his arms, how lucky had he gotten


“Thank you chipkali, thank you so much meri zindagi mein aane ke liye. Aur most importantly, mere itne kharab bartvaav ke bawajud mere saat dene ke liye.” he said while tightening his hold on her


“Tujhe chod ke toh mein nahi jaane waali, yeh baat apne dimaag mein bithale bhootnaat. Aur yeh bhi janle ki tere harr kadam pe saath dene ke liye mein humesha khadi rahoongi-” she tried to complete while moving back


“I love you raavi” he said while cutting her in between


Yes they had confessed that they loved each other but shiva could never put the 3 words together.


“Kya kaha tune?” she said while tears of happiness made their way down her cheek


“I love you. Kabhi socha nahi tha ki yeh teen shabd mein kisi ke liye bhi bol paunga, lekin tune mujhe apne pyaar mein pagal kardiya hai chipkali. Jab tu mere paas hoti hai toh mere dhadkaan achanak se itna tez hojata hai-” he stuttered while trying to express himself


He was stopped midway as he felt her lips softly pressed over his, he could swear that he felt all the tiny strands of hair on his body stand up on its own accord.


Raavi moved back a little to check if he was okay with this, seeing him stand blank without an expression scared her the wits out of her


“Shiva agar tujhe yeh-” she said instantly, feeling guilty


Before she could complete her sentence and start assuming things, shiva grabbed her by her waist and slammed his lips against hers. His hand slowly making way to her cheek while he swiped his tongue over her lips. Raavi gasped at the feel of him, taking the opportunity he plunged his tongue into her sweet mouth.


Raavi locked her hand in his hair while trying to pull him closer to her while he took his own sweet time devouring every bit of her.


He moved back when he felt her pant for air.


“You have no clue about what those rosy lips of yours have done to me, I’ve had my eyes on them for a while now jaan” he winked while pecking her lips again


As they leaned in for round 2 of their makeout session they heard dhara bhabhi call them out for dinner


Shiva whined like a kid who was denied his favorite candy, Raavi couldnt help but smile at his expressions


“Baaki ka raat ko continue karenge jaaneman” raavi winked while hopping her way out of the terrace

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwwwh 🤍

Dont give me hopes , yaha toh bound by kasams 😫😫

So cute though ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haaayee...loved this❤️❤️ I had genuinely expected a hug during this scene in the show but koi baat nahi ...ab toh saare pappi shappi FF mein hi milege kyunki show mein toh kasam le liya gaya hai🤡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hayyee

How I wish we would get a hug

Amazing drabble dear

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I really want a hug at this scene🥰🥰

You potrayed it beautifully❣️❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing!!❤

The hug was so beautiful 😍

And that naughty raavi, ufff!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aweee!! So Sweet and Cute 😍❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Adored it!! ❤️

I so wanted a hug at the end of the scene. It would have been so natural, lovely, and poignant.

Thank you for this. 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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THIS IS WHAT YOU WERE WORRIED ABOUT??!!!


Thisss??


Pagal Noodles.


You gave us something SO GORGEOUS I cannot.

I was waiting for your reply but I am even more happy that you chose to post it without waiting for me to proofread or tell you to post it.

Post it anyway, always. Always post the things you write.

It was a lovely piece of work.

The "Jaan" in the end though has my freaking heart. ❤️

Baaki ka bhi batati beyyy aise chhod di beech mein? Bad bad. 🥺😆

Continue writing 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a cute one smiley42

I so wanted them to hug at the end it would have made the scene more phenomenal smiley27

But nevertheless we get a kiss here and "jaan" can Shiva for once call her the same in show...(asking for too much I guess😆

Loved it ❤️

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