A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 8

haha, thank you so much and next updated 🤗

That was really nice.

Can't wait for the next update

The entire fic is so great ❤️

I love the little bachcha Shivi moments, hope Raavi initiates some of those memories too ❤️❤️

Aah Shiva’s nightmare, and Raavi’s prediction about him crying the most 😭❤️

Also, may Allah grant you all that you want ❤️

Omg it gets cuter and cuter ❤️
How I have missed seeing Shiva concerned for Raavi
Loved it!

Amazingg i loved how you are transitioning in between and balancing them equally,update soon!!!!

Oh my god why such cliffy ending 😒

Shiva was possessive about raavi since childhood but i think he is realising it now bit by bit 😆

My poor raavi 😭😭

After a very very long time i m saying this i m liking dhara here ❤ this is first ff that is again making me like dhara 😛

Excited for next chapter 💜

This ff has my whole freaking hearttt💖

I've gone from blushing to smiling to crying in the span of couple minutes.

This is getting better by the second. Not kidding.

The childhood personas are the GAME.

I loved that you started with Shiva because chapter four had to do with him coming to a sudden realisation that he indeed has a connection with his Maami Ki Behen Ki beti and not just a negative one. It is ALWAYS a treat to see a flustered Shiva, because he has always been so... To the point and just out there with his personality. This flustered 'Woh.. Woh...' man is something that made me smile.

The FB scene of Raavi and Shiva and Mangoes?

Sigh. How did you make the dynamics soooo... I don't have the word yk... Attractive? No... Full of innocent attraction?... I don't know I don't have the perfect word for it but it was BOMB.

Shiva reacting to her fall was when my heart beats quickened. Truly.

To be cherished and wanted and be of some consequence in other person's life? How is that like... How would that be? It got to me. At that moment she had a person who would be pained by her absence and that's gold in itself.

I shed several tears at 'I thought I died...'

It was a reflex reaction. I couldn't stop. It... Mean yeah. You understand I guess. Anyway.

I have fallen in love with this.

Just putting it out there.

In case it wasn't evident. ♥️♥️♥️

Sending you lots of positivity, strength and love.

Praying that whatever it is you're worried about turns out well👍🏼! On the other hand, I'm reading this story, wo come back with proper comments later, but this is LOVE! I couldn't help but mention that, you know? 😆

My god 😍😍 such a intresting story.

Kya dekha raavi ne?🥺

Teenage/kid shiva and raavi's moments are adorable.