ShiVi FF - Redemption - Chapter 32 (updated) - Page 115 (9-May-22) - Page 9

Really loving your story.. I wish Choubay also show something like this in the show

It was very emotional part to see raavi breaking down😭

But I love the fact that she put maami anita in their places.

Shiva is making efforts.. Okay... Still me not pighloing🙈 how will raavi pighlo.

You are developing the story very beautifully❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello Namratha🤗! I've been following the story, but haven't had too much time to comment.... Just dropping in quickly to say that Raavi letting Shiva tend to her wounds would not only be an amazing lollipop, but would also show SHIVA her recognition of his attempts to redeem himself being HONEST. She only doubts if he'll stick to it instead of flipping.... Also, it could give us a glimpse into how much Raavi WANTS to forgive him, which knowing Raavi, she does. And then she could shutter down, become sakht laundi again, and we could see Shiva SEE that, you know? Giving him a tiny bit of hope, and therefore keep him going, but also let him know that this isn't going to be easy at all!

Summary (because I just realised this is pretty long) :

This scene would not be only a lollipop, but also an amazing plot device if you executed it right!

PS Loving everything you've written so far! I'll come back with detailed comments for each part later! Promise! 😳

Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

Kash serial mai bhi aisa ho shiva ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho jaye🥺

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Raavi nahi karne degi but shiva being a ziddi baacha he will definetly tend her wounds and let her go 😳

Excited for next chapter 💜

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Read last two chaps in one go,and let me tell that this is balanced yet beautiful, i was reading and it just got ended like a flow, update fastt

Originally posted by: mpks1

Namratha, loved this part as well

Raavi refused to go with Mami and Anita and exposed their true self and asked them the right questions. It was heart wrenching to read her breakdown. She has every right to make decisions on her own, I am happy that you are writing her to be strong, independent and finally not a dobi. I also don’t want Shiva to be her savior all the time. She should be all face all the adversities on her own.

I am looking forward to her encounter with Shiva in the next chapter. Hope she tells him not to follow her everywhere.

Originally posted by: Paru95

Iam glad that atlast Shiva is doing everything in his power to make her happy...even not imposing his presence upon her😳👏

Iam really happy that Raavi is taking care of her and her studies...this is the Raavi we want🥳

SHE IS A QUEEN👸🏻...A REAL QUEEN♥️

Her response to Anita and Maami👏🏻🤩 and i also liked Gombi supporting her😇...and Hardik is just 🥰

Just loving this story😍

Waiting for the next update🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Okayyy WHY'D you end there?

Ye cliffy ends will kill me one day. ❤️

It was an emotional chapter... But I'm super excited for the next one now.

Cannot wait.

I hope you update soon.

Lots of love.

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Okay this chapter was so goood.

Raavi’s pain man 🥺❤️

Also, I love that you oscillate between Gaumbi and Hardik being Raavi’s supporters, these two are lovess.

Shiva checking up on Raavi ❤️

awwh poor baby got hurt, Shiva what are yiu doing following her around 😂😂

Waiting for next updates ❤️