ShiVi FF - Redemption - Chapter 32 (updated) - Page 115 (9-May-22) - Page 8

Hello Namratha🤗! I've been following the story, but haven't had too much time to comment.... Just dropping in quickly to say that Raavi letting Shiva tend to her wounds would not only be an amazing lollipop, but would also show SHIVA her recognition of his attempts to redeem himself being HONEST. She only doubts if he'll stick to it instead of flipping.... Also, it could give us a glimpse into how much Raavi WANTS to forgive him, which knowing Raavi, she does. And then she could shutter down, become sakht laundi again, and we could see Shiva SEE that, you know? Giving him a tiny bit of hope, and therefore keep him going, but also let him know that this isn't going to be easy at all!

Summary (because I just realised this is pretty long) :

This scene would not be only a lollipop, but also an amazing plot device if you executed it right!

PS Loving everything you've written so far! I'll come back with detailed comments for each part later! Promise! 😳

Kash serial mai bhi aisa ho shiva ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho jaye🥺

Raavi nahi karne degi but shiva being a ziddi baacha he will definetly tend her wounds and let her go 😳

Excited for next chapter 💜

Read last two chaps in one go,and let me tell that this is balanced yet beautiful, i was reading and it just got ended like a flow, update fastt

Namratha, loved this part as well

Raavi refused to go with Mami and Anita and exposed their true self and asked them the right questions. It was heart wrenching to read her breakdown. She has every right to make decisions on her own, I am happy that you are writing her to be strong, independent and finally not a dobi. I also don’t want Shiva to be her savior all the time. She should be all face all the adversities on her own.

I am looking forward to her encounter with Shiva in the next chapter. Hope she tells him not to follow her everywhere.

Iam glad that atlast Shiva is doing everything in his power to make her happy...even not imposing his presence upon her😳👏

Iam really happy that Raavi is taking care of her and her studies...this is the Raavi we want🥳

SHE IS A QUEEN👸🏻...A REAL QUEEN♥️

Her response to Anita and Maami👏🏻🤩 and i also liked Gombi supporting her😇...and Hardik is just 🥰

Just loving this story😍

Waiting for the next update🤗

A very emotional yet needed update❤️ I like how Raavi is trying to be independent and she is making efforts on it. This was the Raavi that I wanted to see in the show. Shiva supporting his chipkali. Everything is love🤗❤️

Okayyy WHY'D you end there?

Ye cliffy ends will kill me one day. ❤️

It was an emotional chapter... But I'm super excited for the next one now.

Cannot wait.

I hope you update soon.

Lots of love.

Okay this chapter was so goood.

Raavi’s pain man 🥺❤️

Also, I love that you oscillate between Gaumbi and Hardik being Raavi’s supporters, these two are lovess.

Shiva checking up on Raavi ❤️

awwh poor baby got hurt, Shiva what are yiu doing following her around 😂😂

Waiting for next updates ❤️

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

I've have already fallen in love with your writing. Everything is so on point that I want to read more& more❣️❣️