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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Chaubeys plz take it from here 😭Your only way to salvage the story now.

How I wish this comes true... Kaash kaash kaash.

Shivi teaming together how lovely it was... And how lovely it would have been had they shown anything close to this.

Beautiful write up❤️🤗

🤣I’m glad you enjoyed reading this

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Very nice!!! But I doubt ki Show me aisa kuch dikhaya jaaega because Show me to raavi ki koi importance hai hi nhi usko kbhi koi plan me shaamil nhi kiya jaata planning karna har musibat se sbko bahar nikalana ye to us pagal mahanta ki murat ka kaam hai n Show me to raavi ko kaise koi credit milega


But you write it nicely ye padhake thodi thandak mile ho sake to plz ise continue karo aur shivi ka plan kaise success hota hai aur FIR shivi milan dikhao

I’ll maybe put up a continuation of them meeting secretively kyunki mujhe unke plan mein koi interest nahi hai

Anything related to Dora is a no no for me

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Iktara22

When it started i was like noodles ko kya hua achanak Aisa kyu likhrahi but oh, the smoothest twist ever, i thought he pulled her to say something mean but oh, ek dum se waqt badal diye,jazbaat badal diye...


And how i want this to happen in show but Choubey se itna achha execution na hobey,but my heart aches and i want this.



Also, please continue this if possible 😭

🤣Noodles pe kabhi shaq nahi karne ka

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Ah the sukoon this Drabble has given me, I swear an entire year of watching the show hasn’t given me!


Could you please please please turn this into a Drabble series? I’m a sucker for Shiva stealing into Raavi’s room in the middle of the night and the chori chori chupke chupke romance. Pwetty please with a cherry on top???


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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR ☺️☺️


Ye kya huyi? Haillllaaa haww//


This was LOVE. Bht bhayankar FOMO wave aaya mujhe at the forehead kiss maeeennnn. 🤡

Also I DEMAND A SEQUEL to this. I DEMAND IT THIS INSTANT.

Mujhe sneaking in wala chahiye...Chahiye mtlb chahiye!

Tu likh aise break time mein theek hai?


Sneak In. Kiss. Cuddle. Chhhaaahiyeeeeee. ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Ah the sukoon this Drabble has given me, I swear an entire year of watching the show hasn’t given me!


Could you please please please turn this into a Drabble series? I’m a sucker for Shiva stealing into Raavi’s room in the middle of the night and the chori chori chupke chupke romance. Pwetty please with a cherry on top???


You are my soul sister. Yup. Sneaking In Fan Number One Reporting Ma'am. ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

On public demand i wrote a bonus part 🤣

Haven't proofread so pls do ignore any grammatical errors

And as always i hope you guys enjoy reading this piece

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It had been the longest 24 hours of her life. Why did she miss him so much. Ever since they confessed their feelings to each other, the thought of distance sends shivers to both of them.


No one other than Suman knew about ShiVi’s plan. It didnt take long for Shiva to realize that his chipkali would never do something so low, all it took was for her to communicate.


Raavi knew that Prafulla is fooling her, but to gain her confidence Raavi signs the legal documents. It is very important for Shiva and Raavi to find out if Anita has actually lost her memory or is this another one of her nasty plans


11:30 pm


“Kahan reh gaya yeh bhootnaat. ‘Khidhki khol ke rakhna, main aunga’ “ she mimicked him


“Oh madam, meri nakal kar rahi thi tu?” asked shiva while successfully jumping into her room


“Ay sanki bhootnaat, itna time leta hai kya koi?!” she said with annoyance


“Akal ki dushman, kaise aata mein jaldi? Sabka sone ka intezaar toh karna tha na mujhe” he reasoned while placing himself on her bed


Raavi’s mind stopped its track as she saw him rightfully sit on her bed. All of it felt new, she felt a sense of security after a really long time. The kind she was craving for all her life.


“Ayy chipkali?” he snapped at her


“Kahan kho gayi?” he raised his eyebrow


“Kahin nahi” she said softly while blushing


“Arrey yeh kya?” he said while slowly moving towards her


“Kya ?” she said while looking around her


“Arrey yeh” he pointed to her cheek


“Acha tere gaal hai, mujhe laga ki tamatar aagaye” he laughed while cupping her cheek


“Bas kar shiva” she said while trying to hide the very evident blush


“Arrey maine abhi tak kuch shuru kiya hi kahan hai” he winked


“Woh sab chod, ghar pe sab teekh hai na?” she asked


“Haan sab sambhal liya hai. Mujhe bas iss baat ki chinta hai ki yeh maami aur woh naagin kuch na kar de” he confessed


“Hum unhe kuch karne hi nahi denge.” she assured him by holding his hand


“Hum , yeh term humpe kitna ajeeb lagta hai haina” he laughed


“Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki hum aise jud jaenge” she said while smiling widely


“Ab jab jud hi gaye hain toh kabhi alag hone nahi dunga” he said while kissing her forehead as a tears make their way out of her eye


“Rona nahi hai raavi” he swiped the drops with his thumb before placing kisses on both her eyes


Unable to take all the love he was showering on her , she takes him in for a strong warm hug.


“I love you shiva” she said while clutching his tshirt


“I love you too Raavi” he said before picking her up in bridal style


“Ayy bhootnaat kya kar raha hai” she screamed on being caught off guard


“Apni biwi ko pyaar” he said while placing her on the bed


As he was about to move closer she placed her finger on his chest inorder to create some distance between them


“Kya?” he questioned with his eyes


“Bas kuch aur din ki hi baat hai shiva pandya, phir main ghar wapas aajaungi. Tab tak apne cold showers se kaam chala lena” she said after pulling him on the bed with her


“Teri toh-” he tried to start a fight


“Shushh bohot hogaya.” she silenced him placing his arm on her midriff, spooning her


“Raavi kya kar-”


“Chup chap so ja. I want your warmth. I want you, lekin i want to be marked yours in our house shiva. Yahan aise nahi” she explained


“Oh fukc i just fell for you all over again” he shut his eyes and murmured


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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Tagging all those who wanted a cont🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Aweeee!!! It was so sweet and adorbs!!❤😍

Especially last part ❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Cutesyy and ahh soo awwdorableee

Shiva and raavii meeting sneakily chori chori chupke chupke has whole different mushy si feel.

So suman knew the plan and supporting them😆😆chlo good enough... Atleast she is behaving like a normal mother here atleast 🤣


Loooveeddd it!!!!!!

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