Have my heart (OS mostly18+, pg5 21/01/22) - Page 4

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

mere liye toh yahi bohot hota hai ki content ke post par tag hona ekdum VIP vibes 😎

Abeyyy dhooorrr Sathya tho kregi hi na tag re...usko apna jaan pyaara nhi hai kya lol 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

We high on back-ache honeyyyyyyy. 🤪

SuPeRRRRRR BoReDDDDDDDDDDDD ToOOOOOO. 🤡

But also want to study and not able to concentrate.

The usual Hullaballoo.

I've never been high in my life. College Life who?? We never experienced it. 🤡

I've never been high either... Never even tasted alcohol. Not even coffee and tea in our white reflector board of a life.

My only addiction in life is reading. My hands legit automatically search for something to read, even newspapers, if I go too long without words.

#WeKnowWeIsWeird

#JustRealisedISoundLikePreciousGollumFromTolkein'sWorldWhenIUseTooManyWe's

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

I've never been high either... Never even tasted alcohol. Not even coffee and tea in our white reflector board of a life.

My only addiction in life is reading. My hands legit automatically search for something to read, even newspapers, if I go too long without words.

#WeKnowWeIsWeird

#JustRealisedISoundLikePreciousGollumFromTolkein'sWorldWhenIUseTooManyWe's

Okay we tried alcohol with my father...occasionally get a glass when its too special an occasion that requires celebration....Which is like SO RARE in mah life I can't-🤡

Reading is Me. I'm nothing without books.

Stories are my life and no other life exists beyond the confines of these pages for me. Quite literally...

Ye sb bakwas band kro ye batao upload kab ho raha hai...taki main position loon apna...

So Should I like...make the group?🤡

Sathya,

You are such a gifted writer.

Looking forward to reading this amazing piece ❤️

RES

UNRES : First Position~ 😈❤️

Sathhhyyyaaa Jaaneman kya bolun main? bta...nhi bta mujhe...aisa trance mein daali hai tu mujhe ki main ekdum speechless hogyi thi raat ko. Puri tarah se.

TBH I've had this prompt within my mind since a VERY long time and well yes, I've tried to make others write it with a passion, lol. Yaatra kaand is the most intense and brilliantly done episodes according to me, like nothing comes close to me going gaga over KDice's acting. They nailed this sequence beyond measure but this, this piece comes equivalent to that, if not crosses the intensity of the OG. Rightfully so at that!

I wouldn't be wrong when I say that this is one of the most emotionally overwhelming smut pieces I've read here on the forum. Not kidding. The most emotionally overwhelming of them all. From the confrontation to up until the end which I'll be definitely coming to with detail, it has been an enchanting work to read.

The piece opens up with Shiva interacting with his inner conscience - Le Beast (We love the beast-OBVIOUSLY) and I already for some reason know it is going to be much more intense than I imagined. With every passing line be it the FB (The friends talk) or The current turmoil (on the bike) Mr Jelly Pandya is dealing with his insecurities coupled with longing and vexation about not being able to be with his wife fully is setting a great preset, a terrific preset. Its the build up written so beautifully before the actual argument when I knew I'd be so so so satisfied at the end!

"Shiva! Shiva tu theek hai na?"

THIS. Oh lord this!

This was one of my most favourite moments in the whole ordeal as I wrote earlier. Ye 'Duniya hai mere piche, lekin main tere piche' - Kajra Mohabbat wala- dynamics is what always comes to my mind after I watch this scene. It was such a subtle thing, but in that one dialogue I literally felt her love for him, a love that he didn't acknowledge and neither could she accept. Raavi shrugging the hand was THE BOMB MOVE. I literally applaud you for it. Again the beast throughout in the background while Raavi started questioning him and he dealing with that gorgeous intense demon within. Hah!

My breathing escalated after the "Main nahi rokne wala tha tujhe" truly, the paras after this line up until the "No more gentlemanly behavior then" are responsible for me loosing my breath for millisecond.

"Sherni - Bep Pe- His, all his today- Mine of her own will- Fast and Strong"

How'd you do this? No seriously...how'd you blend these kind of mind numbingly fierce emotions with that kind of sizzling smut. HOWWWWW?!

The build up was PERFECT. I couldn't have asked for anything else more. It was fantastic. Sensuous-overwhelming-sexy-mind-blowingly breathtaking. Raavi turning the tables on him was something VERY unexpected and I might have laughed at it a bit but well...you know the best thing? The MINE CHANT he had going on in his brain. All mine, all mine, all freaking mine like a mantra he'd want to imprint within himself.

I officially took a break at "Tujhe Apna Bana Raha Hoon Raavi" and had to pause, shut the screen and get my heartbeat to normal because it was SO FAB. I lost it at this. Had to put my cold palms on them cheeks to control the emotion.

Bringing in the actual FB after the deed was a cinematic brilliance. I just- I don't know what to say of it. The oscillation was so perfect it was as if I was seeing a movie which went on and off b/w FBs and reality. It was artistic and a BOMB thing to do. How'd you do this? How'd you think you'll do it this way?! Man I need tips.

The Pill scene was the final nail in the coffin. You blew my mind with it, such art. Such pure art. I don't think I'll be getting over this anytime soon. The first of MANY MANY reads to come.

I couldn't have imagined a better execution to the prompt man. I am SO HAPPY, so happy. But you're not gonna be happy...because you baby are in BIG TROUBLE.

Now that I've seen you write this masterpiece you've got to prepare yourself for all the cribbing / requesting / pestering coming your way for more of my Shivi fantasies...eerrrr PROMPTS (Yeah right- 🤡). I am going to make everyone's wishes come true by pestering SathyaMevJayathe to continue to spew brilliance with her pieces again and again and again!

Forever. ❤️

[Took me 30 mins to write this comment you better read whole and reply and say you love me 🤔]

Abeeyyyy last post kon dalta hai as update...🐷

#MahaaanLadki

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