ShiVi TS~ "Suljha lenge uljhe rishton ka manjha"/completed pg7 - Page 4

Such a lovely and fun piece! 🤗

Shivi competing was something I found very amusing. Not because they were up against each other but because the result was a tie.

Such purity! I loved it.

The romance and the moments were beautifully written.

And yes WHY END THERE MAN? Kyunnnn....😭

I hope there's another part.

Imma want another part.

Keep writing ❤️

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Me first I'll read and come

ABE GANDU KAHA END KAR DIYA?

YE KYA HAI? WHAT WAS THIS ENDING? GADHEDI 😭😭😭

janu maar khaayegi mujhse. But this was adorable, Raavi a dn shiva subconsciously choosing each other's favourite colour ka kite snuggling and sleeping, ice cream date ❤️

Gandu ped wala discussion kaha hai😭 likh ab bonus part mujhe kuch nahi pata mujhe chahiye *throws tantrum*

Erm, Kandiya, yeh Kya comment hai? I clicked on your tag to read it and it said complete. Toh complete pe cliff Kyu??? Please write epilogue and I'll read all 3 together.

I'm not someone who likes suman much and also I'm not someone who is interested in culrure traditions much. But everytime you talk in detail about both the topics I can't help but be mesmerised.

I will even dare to say that you hold the power to make me love suman with you well you write them.

This is the perfect example of how i wish the show would portray the precious bond between these two sometimes serious, sometimes fun but always special.

Also bonus part: shivi was very adorable here too

Originally posted by: Binny08

Abe oye bc ??? Ye kaha pr end kiya hai ???

😡😡😤😤ab toh I will definitely murder you

Ye kya baat hui Mai padh rhi thi and khatam ho gyi

Ruk tereko Batati hu

Usse pehle this is so good jaanu 😭😭 I was actually waiting for this u know na

Kaash show Mei aiaa kuch hota mujhe itna acha lag rha tha and I was literally imagining everything it was so so cute 🥺🥺❤❤

I loved it bc

tu bhi aaja update kar rahi

Originally posted by: Anon21

I'm not someone who likes suman much and also I'm not someone who is interested in culrure traditions much. But everytime you talk in detail about both the topics I can't help but be mesmerised.

I will even dare to say that you hold the power to make me love suman with you well you write them.

This is the perfect example of how i wish the show would portray the precious bond between these two sometimes serious, sometimes fun but always special.

Also bonus part: shivi was very adorable here too

aww sriii thankyouuuuuuuuuuuu

bonus part//epilogue

Her eyes got saturated with tears, she looked at him in awe, she loved how patiently he had answered her question, short yet deep, she continued as she said, "voh to mai hu...achha ek aur question puchu?", Shiva rolled his eyes, and said, "yahan aake tujhe mere sath KBC khelna hai?", she chuckled saying, "crore ka toh pata nahi pan pati toh tu hai toh batana puchu?", "haan puch" he said, a little annoyed; "Shiva voh...ek baar yaad hai hum Krish ke college gaye they toh maine voh...matlab jaanbuchke nahi pan mai vahan khadi thi toh maine voh suna tha..toh mujhe voh..", "yeh kya unniso chlis ke scooter ki tarah atak atak ke bol rahi hai seedha seedha bol gadhedi", cutting her in middle, she took a deep breathe and said, "Voh maine suna tha ki tu padhai mai bohot achha tha aur tujhe engineer banna tha aur toh aur voh khiskoli jesi dikhne vali Priti ne tere liye hi engineering liya tha toh tune padhai kyun chodh di?", Shiva's eyes widened, as he felt all of his secrets coming up loud, all the questions whose answers were buried deep down in him but no one had asked him and years bygone, it had forgotten not to him but others, he closed his eyes, he opened it and looked away, Raavi sensed him getting uncomfortable, she put her palm on his hand and said, "Koi baat nahi Shiva maine toh ese hi pucha tha curiosity ke maare aur tujhe toh pata hai mai kitni dobi hu kuch bhi kabhi bhi boldeti hu", she said jokingly, and looked away, he looked at her astonished, thinking how can she be so innocent and caring and why had he not noticed it before, she would always keep joking and being funny with everyone, he realized that all the things of her which seemed annoying to him, all that was her hiding her insecurities with big smile and sunshine personality of her, maybe more than him, she needed to be understood and all these years where she had understood him and now wants to know all the reasons and causes, he had not realized it until now; she snapped her fingers making him break the thinking and pulling him out of thoughts she said, "Kya hua Shiva?It's okay if tujhe nahi batana, sorry".

He shook his head and continued, "Nahi voh kabhi kisine yeh sawal pucha nahi na isiliye...voh baat yeh hai ki baba ke jaane ke baad pandya store girvi rakhna pada tha gaumbi aur bhabhi ko aur jab hum teen school se aate they toh mai roz dekhta tha Gaumbi ko anaaj ki boriya uthate hue unke back pe nishan hojate they, raat raat jaag kar store pe mehnat karte they toh maine socha ki kyun na mai Gaumbi ko madat karu...zaroori nahi har koi galle par baithe, kisi ko toh yeh kaam bhi karna padta, toh maine hi le liya, mai roz zid karne laga school na jaane ki, dekhte hi dekhte mai Gaumbi ke sath store pe boriyan uthane laga aur bas vahi dhanche mein dhal gaya",

she kept looking him in astonishment as a tear rolled down her cheek, she had no words to say, she had always considered him very rude and mannerless, the one who would never fit in the definition of 'gentleman', but he was truly a gentleman and he had never flexed about it, nor had he mentioned it to anyone, she felt guilt boiling up in her, all these years she had used words like 'junglee, gawar, unpadh' for him and oh, how low she had been, she bursted out sobbing and he looked perplexed having no idea of why she started crying, he patted her back and said,

"Arre chipkali yeh achanak kya hua yun phut phut ke kyu ro rahi hai?", she sobbed even more putting her head on his chest, he again patted her back and said,

"Arre meri ma bata toh kya hua achanak teri aankhon ka nal leak kyun hogaya?", she said nothing, continuing loud whimpers, he cupped her face and gently started rubbing tears with his thumb and said, "Raavi tu ab mujhe dara rahi hai bata kya hua...tu ese phut phut ke kyun ro rahi hai bata",

she gulped colossively and said, "Mai bohot buri hu Shiva ek number ki dobi,gadhedi,stupid, fool...hu mai bohot buri hu itnii buri itni buri...itna bura toh mogambo bhi nahi tha", Shiva raised his eye brow and replied, "Voh sab toh thik hai pan itna sach ek sath kyun bolrahi, itna realisation achanak se?",

she hit his elbow and said, "Tu aaj tak chup kyun raha huh?Gadheda idiot stupid fool vandro!!!, itne saalon se mai toh dobi banke tujhe yeh gawar,unpadh,jungli bulati rahi aur tune ittu sa zaruri nahi samjha ke sach bolde,ittu sa bhi nahi?!", she pinched her index finger and thumb, narrowing her eyes, a smile crept on his face and he said, "Raavi mujhe apne aap ko na mahanta ka tag nahi dena tha,mujhe jo sahi laga maine kiya, aur maine yeh batane ke liye toh kiya nahi tha ke poster leke khada reh jaun", she chuckled, he held her hand and continued, "ab ghar chalein?", she nodded, as he helped her get down, after straightening her dupatta, she went and hugged him tightly, he stumbled a few steps backwards, he said, "maine tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ke chipkalio vali harkatein karke khud ko chipkali prove mat kiya kar", she turned her head to his ears and said, "Teri hi chipkali hu toh tujhse nahi toh kisse chipkungi?", he gently hugged her back and said, "matlab tu meri izzat loot ke hi maanegi haina?", she hit his back and replied, "Apni patni ko lipatne mein kesi sharam, teri hi biwi hu,kanta kaki ke bete ki biwi thodina?", she kissed him on cheeks and separated, his face reddened as he grazed his cheek saying, "Humare paas kamra bhi hai bhul mat jaaya kar, ab chup chap ghar chal", to which she held his arms and started walking.

the end.

just because kagaz had publicly demanded this, here i am;))

Res

Yes. I demanded. And FINALLY 😭❤️

Aise latka diya tune mujhe bina mere epilogue ke, I was angre! But now I'm ice cream, so sab maaf kyuki YE KITNA KYOOTU THA🌸

Uff Jaanu

Shivi's conversation about Shiva's education is something I really want in the show😭

Thank you for this bonus part. Beautiful ❤

Ab apna TS complete Kar☺

It was super cute and amazing 👏

Loved it

Chotu sa tha lekin bahut acha tha

😍😍

Waiting for ur other stories

Hayeeee!So cuteeeee😭🤌🏻❤️

Thankyouu for this🤧💖