ShiVi drabble- A Mess

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello,

The episodes that we are getting are leaving things open-ended. This is a small attempt to give closure to one of the storylines in the show.

It is pretty short, more like a drabble. Please leave your feedback.

Hope you like it.😊

Enjoy

A MESS


Things have been a mess for the Pandya family. They always needed a saviour, sometimes it is Dhara, sometimes it is Shiva and sometimes it is Rishita. The whole kerfuffle in the Pandya family also has its own victims. This time the victim was Prafulla but to her bad luck, nobody noticed it.


Raavi was waiting for Shiva in the room after they came back from the police station. The agreement to put the land under Rishita and Dev’s name was not sitting well with anyone in the family. They all were aware that Dev can be manipulated easily especially by Rishita. But there was something else that was bothering Raavi at this point in time. The moment she saw Shiva enter the room, she got up from the bed and stood in front of him.


Shiva was surprised seeing Raavi like this, he knew she was fidgety even when everything is sorted but today, her nervousness was making him restless too.


“Are you okay?” He asked.


“I am fine. Are you?” She said while holding his chin and inspecting his face for bruises.


“Shiva, I am sorry. I couldn’t do more for all of you. I tried—“


Shiva shushed her and hugged her. He knew she needed it and more than that, he needed her close to him.


“Shiva, I need your help.”


Shiva loosened his grip on her and asked her “what happened?”


Raavi narrated him the whole thing that happened in the morning and how her maasi is in jail because of that.


“I know, she is the last person you would want to help but Mausa is unable to do anything, Gaumbi is already handling Dhara bhabhi, I don’t want to burden him more. You are my only hope.” She started crying after saying everything.


“Let’s go.” Shiva simply said and held her hand which was all the assurance she needed.


The whole journey to the police station, Shiva did not let go of her hand. They reached the police station and did all the formalities to get Prafulla out of jail.


The moment she came out of jail, Raavi hugged her. Seeing Shiva standing next to her, Prafulla sensed that it was Shiva who helped her.


“Thank you.” Prafulla said.


“I still don’t like you.” That was all Shiva could say before he left the police station.

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Thank you for reading 😊


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sanchi❤️!!! This was so amazing! Raavi was worried about her maasi, but still was so concerned for Shiva that she couldn't stop herself from asking him about his health first... Also, I liked that Shiva and Mami just sort of came to a truce instead of completely letting go of things. That would simply be too easy. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Sanchi❤️!!! This was so amazing! Raavi was worried about her maasi, but still was so concerned for Shiva that she couldn't stop herself from asking him about his health first... Also, I liked that Shiva and Mami just sort of came to a truce instead of completely letting go of things. That would simply be too easy. 😆

Thank you so much ❤️

I am all for happy endings but Shiva Mammi all happy happy will be too soon for me…their relationship is more interesting like this at the moment 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Maami's Thank You to Khula Saand I can't believe🤣🤣

But I really want closure in this case

Raavi's care for both Shiva and Maami I want it to be shown even lollypop will work for me

This is beautifully written 🤗

Thanks for closure here

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Writers should hire you so that u can give proper closure for every scene we need 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scribble19

Thank you so much ❤️

I am all for happy endings but Shiva Mammi all happy happy will be too soon for me…their relationship is more interesting like this at the moment 😆

Exactly!!! It's too fun to let of!!! 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Maami's Thank You to Khula Saand I can't believe🤣🤣

But I really want closure in this case

Raavi's care for both Shiva and Maami I want it to be shown even lollypop will work for me

This is beautifully written 🤗

Thanks for closure here

Thank you so much ❤️

I wish they don’t leave it like this, mammi shiva have a lot of potential 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Writers should hire you so that u can give proper closure for every scene we need 😆

Hahaha

Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kfof

Beautiful ❤❤

Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome.. would love to see such scenes... where Shiva and Maami try to be cordial just for Raavi

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