Shivi OS: BAS, Bahut hua Drama!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey Readers,

I know I have been a ghost for so long in the forum, But wanted to get this off my chest, Totally frustrated with this Suman Pandya😡

Hopefully, we can get something like this in the show!

Happy Reading!





Shivi OS: BAS, Bahut hua Drama!!




"Tujhe meri bhi kasam hai Shiva, agar Disha ki taraf aankh utha ke bhi dekha na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga", Raavi sneered as she jerked his arm and made him face her.

To say everyone was shocked at Raavi's angry stance would be an understatement. At this point, she looked like an angry bull, ready to pounce anyone.

Shiva's heart leaped in an unknown joy, his heart silently praying for her to say the inevitable.

"Humara divorce nahi hua hai, Aur naa hi ab kabhi hoga. Humein 6 months ka extension zarur mila hai par maine mere vakeel ko bol ke case vapas le liya hai. Ab koi talak nahi hoga." She announced as she stared into his eyes, silently conveying her delayed feelings for her Bhoothnath.

Those feelings which everyone saw, but she was a dobi to realize them so late. And now that she realized how incomplete her life will be if Shiva was not a part of it, she knew she had a decision to make.

So she turned towards Suman, ready to give her a piece of her mind, "Aur Kaki, yeh baar baar emotional blackmail karke aap thakti nahi ho kya? Jab dekho tab yeh kasam vasam ka natak chalu kar deti ho. Agar aapka aapke beton pe zor nahi chalta to unhe aise emotional blackmail karne ka aapko koi haq nahi hai. Aapke bete Adults hain, unhe pura haq hai apne faisle lene ka aur agar koi faisla lene mein unhe problem ho to aapka kaam hai unhe sahi disha dikhana. Aapne to Shiva ki problem ko disha dene ke bajaye ek nayi Disha ko hi uske saamne laake khada kar diya. Uski problem to dhari ki dhari hi reh gayi. Aur kya aapko dikhta nahi hai ki aapka beta iss Disha ke saamne kaise uncomfortable behave karta hai? Ya fir yeh kehna chahiye ki aapko apne bete ki marzi ki padi hi nahi hai? Pehli shaadi usne majburi mein ki, toh aap uski dusri shaadi bhi majburi mein karwana chahti ho? Are abhi humara talaak hua bhi nahi tha aur aap itni bechain ho gayi ki aapko meri replacement dundhne mein der bhi nahi lagi. Lekin aapko Shiva ki khushiyon ki koi kadar nahi hai? Ya fir aap yeh nahi dekh paa rahi hain ki jiss Shiva ne divorce ke papers mujhe bheje the ye soch kar ki hum alag hi sahi rahenge, wahi Shiva iss divorce ki baat se kitna dukhi hai? Use kitni takleef ho rahi hai iss baat se ki humara talaak ho raha hai? Aur bajaye iss baat ke ki uske ghaavon pe malham lagane ke, aap uski zakhamon pe Disha naam ka namak chidak rahi hain? Mujhe patthar dil keh rahi thi na aap? Theek hai, mera dil patthar ka hai, lekin aap ka? Aapka to POP(Plaster of Paris) ka hai. Patthar tut sakte hain, lekin POP nahi tutata."


"Aee Markundi gaay, Chup karr!! Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi hai tu? Teri himmat kaise hui mujhse aise baat karne ki? Tu mujhe sikhayegi ki mere beton se mujhe kaise vyahvhar karna chahiye kaise nahi? Are tu hai kaun? Haan? Woh Kagdi ki tarah tera dil bhi kaala hai. Isiliye tu mere Shiva ke saaf dil ko pehchaan nahi paayi, teri galtiyon ko ilzaam tu mujhpe laga rahi hai? Haan? Aur mere bete ki khushi pata hai mujjhe kisme hai kisme nahi, tum dono ki shaadi ke waqt to kuch nahi bol paayi, lekin ab maine zimma uthaya hai, apne bete ki zindagi ko khushiyon se bharne ka, mere bete ko woh har khushi milegi jo use tujhse milni chahiye thi lekin nahi mili. Mera dil chahe kaisa bhi ho, mujhe Shiva ki khushiyon ki kadar hai. Teri tarah nahi hun mein. Use badalne pe nahi tuli hui hun mein, jo use jaisa woh hai waisa hi pasand aa jaye aise hi ladki se shaadi karwane wali hun uski, to tu kaun hoti hai in saab mamlon mein bolne wali? Hain? Bol??? Ya fir teri phir se koi chaal hai kagdi ke saath mil ke jo tu hum sab se badla..."


"BASSS, Bahut hua drama !!!!" Shiva's angry voice boomed in the entire colony as Suman jumped back in shock as she stared at her son in horror. "Kya galat bol rahi hai woh Maa? Kya galat bol rahi hai woh? Tujhe sach mein meri marzi ki nahi padi hai. Agar padi hoti na, to mere talaak ke baad tu mujhe apne aapko sambhalne ka waqt deti. Ek rishte se bahar nikla nahi hun ki tu chal padi, mujhe dusre rishte mein baandhne? Tujhe meri khushiyon ki chinta hoti na to jo takleefein Dhara Bhabhi utha rahi hai, mujhe aur Raavi ko alag na hone se, woh takleefein tujhe uthani chahiye thi. Kya tujhe nahi dikhta ki mein iss Mami ki behen ki beti se kitna pyaar karta hun? Haan maana ki hum dono ne hi galtiyan ki hain iss rishte mein, humne bahut galat faisle liye hain, lekin jab mein divorce ke papers leke aaya tha tab tune mujhe thappad maar ke samjhane ki koshish kyun nahi ki? Kyun nahi kaha mujhe ki mujhe aisa bada kadam nahi uthana chahiye aur thande dimaag se sochke humare rishte ko ek aur mauka dena chahiye? Ya fir tu Raavi ke paas kyun nahi gayi, use samjhane ki mujhe aur iss rishte ko na tode? Tune kiya aisa? Nahi kiya, tune sirf har baat ka galat matlab nikal ke apni khechdi pakane ki koshish ki hai. Mera talaak abhi Raavi se hua bhi nahi aur tu iss Disha ko leke aa gayi." He turned towards Disha who flinched back at the rage in his eyes. He smirked evilly. "Tujhe kya laga ki Shiva Pandya acchai ki murat hai? Kabhi mera gussa dekha hai tune? Mera gussa dekha na to abhi yahin halat tight ho jayegi teri aur rote hue ghar bhaag jayegi tu. Kitni baar tujhe chetavni dene ki koshish ki, ki tu mujhe acche se nahi jaanti, Shaadi ki jald baazi mat kar, lekin nahi. Tu apna pyaar mujhpe thopne mein lagi hui hai. Are tere aur Raavi mein to koi comparison bhi nahi hai. Tujhe mujhse shaadi karna jitna asaan lag raha hai na, utna hai nahi. Jiss zimmedari ko tu usse cheenanna chahti hai na, uska 1% bhi tu kabhi nibha nahi payegi, mein likh ke de sakta hun. Dhara Bhabhi ne khud usse dhaala hai, bachpan se Dhara Bhabhi ki parvarish mein usne zimmedariyan seekhi hain, tu kar payegi woh sab? Bol? Bol na?" He sneered at her and she stepped back, too scared to even say anything.


Raavi didn't know when the tears had started streaming down her cheeks, but she wiped them and turned towards Shiva and placed her right hand on his chest, right above his heart. "Kaki, aapko lagta hai ki Disha Shiva ke liye perfect choice hai, lekin woh kabhi Shiva ke dil ko nahi chu paati. Mere chunne se yeh jo iske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho jaati hai na, aisa yeh kabhi Disha ke liye feel hi nahi kar payega. Mein daave ke saath keh sakti hun. Jiss shiddat se isne mujhe nafrat ki hai na, usse bhi jyada tutt ke yeh mujhse pyaar karega, yeh bhi ab mujhe pata hai." She stepped closer to him, their bodies almost touching. She struggled with the shiver as he gazed deeply in her eyes. She wanted to avert her eyes in nervousness, but she knew, is she averted her eyes now, he will think that she's not confident enough of her feelings. So she decided against this and stared right back in his eyes, with all the feelings she had for him,"Yeh sab mujhe kaise pata hai? Kyunki aakhen kabhi dhoka nahi deti. Iske muh se chahe jitni bhi bakwaas, kitni bhi nafrat mere liye nikle, iski aankhen mujhe humesha iske dil ki baat bayaan kar deti hain. Mujhe nahi pata Shiva ki mein tere pyaar ke layaak bhi hun ya nahi, par jaise aaj tak teri manzuri ke liye ladti aayi hun na, aaj se humare pyaar ke liye saari duniya se ladungi. Dikha dungi duniya ko ki Shiva ne Raavi ka haath thaam ke koi galti nahi ki. Ki Shiva ne Raavi ka haath thaam ke uski zindagi barbaad nahi ki, ulta sawaari hai. Apni aakhri saans tak iss pyaar ke liye ladti rahungi Shiva." She pinched her throat as her eyes pleaded her honesty.


Shiva turned towards Dhara and his eyes softened. "Dekha Bhabhi, yehi tha mera tareeka. Issi tareeke se mein Raavi ko meri feelings ka ehsaas dilwana chahta tha. Mujhe to laga raha tha ki jaise ab tak mein mere aur Raavi ke rishte mein haar raha tha, kahin aaj bhi na haar jaun. Par Raavi ne mujhe haarne nahi diya. Aapki koshishon se yeh sab ho paya hai Bhabhi. Thank you." Dhara just smiled victoriously and hit his temple slightly as Gaumbi smiled at him sarcastically and replicated Dhara's actions. He just smiled slightly and turned towards Rishita as she also wore a triumphant smile. "Thank you Rishita Bhabhi, aapne bhi humari bahut help ki hai. Thank you!" Rishita just winked and gave him a thumbs up and Dev chuckled besides her.


Raavi smiled as Shiva's gaze returned to hers, and unable to control herself, she stood on her tiptoes and pecked his cheek, and blushed profusely. The exact same spot where Disha had kissed him, and Shiva couldn't help but chuckle victoriously. Krish whistled at the back but her gaze stood fixated in his eyes. Her confession of feelings was like a cherry on the top, and Shivi knew, now there won't be any more roadblocks in their relationship.

It was a Happy Beginning for them, irrespective of what anyone ever said....



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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it Praniti 😳

Kya masst reality ka chatta pada Suman ko 👏

Raavi was on fire 🔥#aaggirl

And Shiva 😈🔥#aaggirl

Loved the peck on the cheek ❤️

Update you other story na 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful OS.. I totally loved it! Shiva the aag boy and raavi the aag girl.. dono phatt pade aur SuSu ka khel khatam!! 😎


ShiVi confessing to each other and Raavi kissing Shiva on his cheek..


I loved it! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seriously... ab sach mai bohut hogaya

Thank you for this... only written Shivi can give us some peace☺️😆

I really want Disha to be bajaoed by Shiva

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was what I wanted.This was what PS needed.

I loved this very much.😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You’re back to writing!!

Amazing this was

Loved it

Write more babes ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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💕💕🥰😍Amazingly written OS👏🤩, like love both their confession in front of everyone, and the kiss by Raavi at the end was super🤩🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a beautiful piece!! Loved it!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is sooooo goodd☺️

Soo beautifully written and the dialogues

Loved it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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AH loved it so much !! Im literally so damn frustrated to see suman oh god ! This gave me some peace ! thank you!

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