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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Kfof

Beautiful❤

How shiva and maami became cordial for Raavi in her absence, their every emotions very properly expressed through writing!!❤❤❤

Shiva waiting for Raavi in station and Raavi came🤍🤍💚

Eagerly waiting for next part🤎🤎

thank you for liking my work 🥰😍 will update soon...
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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Hey pls this part was also soo good ❤️

Pls one request JB inka reunion hoga na to pls ek romantic part bhi likhana 18+

Pls pls I really want it 🙏🏻🙏🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SuhaniMishra121

Hey pls this part was also soo good ❤️

Pls one request JB inka reunion hoga na to pls ek romantic part bhi likhana 18+

Pls pls I really want it 🙏🏻🙏🏻

babe 18 plus is not my sphere I am the one who loves old school romances and I think I can write that better......... But don't worry I will try to write the romantic part and will try to add 18plus content also..........
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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

thnqq ...love u

I am very disappointed with the show now , only bhabhi jaap , this ME was also a flop for me

and I badly wants shiva raavi to romance with wach other pls if possible ekdum tgda waala romance likhna 18+

lots of love💗💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: SuhaniMishra121

thnqq ...love u

I am very disappointed with the show now , only bhabhi jaap , this ME was also a flop for me

and I badly wants shiva raavi to romance with wach other pls if possible ekdum tgda waala romance likhna 18+

lots of love💗💖💖

exactly same feeling for this ME.... ..... It was nothing but just a scrape.........

I will try my best to write the next update hope so you will like it.......

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

I LOVED IT dear🤗

Love the way you put the emotions b4 us..and we feel connected❤️

Cant wait😳

Plssss update sooonn

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Paru95

I LOVED IT dear🤗

Love the way you put the emotions b4 us..and we feel connected❤️

Cant wait😳

Plssss update sooonn

thanks for liking my content 😘😍🥰will update soon....
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Posted: 3 years ago
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it will be uploaded today itself..... Just working on last parts.....
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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART-IV

Raavi's heart was thudding as she has reached the sommath station, she feared to meet everyone after 2 years, specially Shiva as he is now married to someone else how would she face him. She came out of the train and her eyes landed on the person she was looking.... Shiva

Here Shiva was one who from last few weeks visited the station daily during the morning hours.... He just had a feeling that she will come soon to meet him and he cannot make her wait. One such day he was waiting when the train stopped no sign of Raavi was there he just turned to move and his eyes landed on Raavi , he turned around immediately he saw Raavi standing and he just can't hold on he went and hugged her tightly just like his whole life is based on it....... Here Raavi was also lost in his hug that she even more snuggled into him....... They both were crying in th embrace not even worrying about the surrounding.After sometime, shiva spoke nuzzling into her neck,

"Raavi...... Do saal....... Pta bhi hai kaise kate maine........"

This broke Raavi's trance and she let her hands away from him this broke her heart but she can't let him cheat oon his wife and she said,

"Shiva...... Yeh sab galat hai...... Tu please mujhe chod...........teri shaadi......."

She was cutt in mid sentence and Shiva tightened his hold,

"Nahi huyi koii bhi shaadi Raavi..... Nahi huyi yeh Shiva sirf tera hai.....2 saal se tera intezaar kar raha tha main......ki bass ikk baar tu meri baat sun le......."

Raavi looked at him still in his embrace and Shiva cups her face with both his hands and says,

"Disha ne hamari baatein sun li thi...... Aur usne mana kar diya shaadi ke liye........hamare toh akhri sign bhi nahi huye Raavi toh tu meri biwi hai na abhi bhi............... Fir jab tujhe station par lene gaya tu nahi thi........ Bhut dhoondha par tu nahi mili tu jaa chuki thi........... Par Raavi abb tu aaa gayi hain na mujhe khud se dur mat kar main sehen nahi kar paunga....... Please..... "

Raavi's thought process stopped at his words. He was not married and Disha refused to do that. He is hers and she is in his embrace she is in Shivani embrace. She didn't gave a second but just hugged him tightly snuggling into him and Shiva put his head in crook of her neck both forgot that the world around exist even as now if life ends here they both would be happy that they have left the world in each other's arm which they have craved for two long years.

Raavi heard some voices around them after sometime and she noticed that they were hugging on the railway platform in the hustle and bustle of people she says,

"Shiva sab dekh rahe hai... "

Shiva repliesreplies loudly in excitement,

"Dekhne de.... Ajj toh Sare somnaath ko pta hona chahiye kii Shiva ko uski Gauri mil gayi........."

Raavi smiles and says,

"Ghar chalen"

Shiva nods and took her luggage and moves with her not leaving her hand even for fraction of second.

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Both were unaware that there meeting and Raavi's return was recorded from the starting to the ending till they left the platform by Rudra's bodyguard whom Rudra have assigned the work to look after Raavi in his absence and he has followed her in intire journey with live recording of her which was directly telecasted on Rudra's phone. After seeing Raavi in Shiva's arms Rudra got on high. He roared and his dad who was one of the top rich man of delhi came and saw rudra with bleeding hands as he had cutted off his nerve,

"Rudraa...... Kya kiya beta yeh....... Tune..... "

"Dad..... Mujhe Raavi chahiye........ Vo meri hai.......... "

"Doctor ko bulao...... "

"Dad mujhe Raavi chahiye mujhe somnaath jana hai....... "

After checkup Rudra got his hand bandage and his father came to him and said,

"Kon hai yeh Raavi..... "

"Dad...... I love her....... I love her....... Maine jab use touch karne ki koshish ki toh usne mujhe dhakka mara aur chakku dikha kar chale gayi....... Aur jab vo ladke ne isse apni bahoon mein....... Ahhhhhhhhh.......... Vo kisi aur ki nahi ho sakti dad..... Mujhe vo chahiye.......... Main ajj hi somnaath jaa raha hoon............ "

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BACK IN SOMNAATH,

Shiva on the way to home told Raavi about well being of everyone and described whole scenario after her departure on marriage day. Raavi also told him about her ventures but didn't told about Rudra yet as after a long time there meeting should not have anything negative she decided to tell him later .They reached home PANDYS NIWAS, Raavi looked at Shiva as she was unsure of going inside so she tried to make an excuse,

"Shiva pehle mausa paa aur massi maa ko mil aau fir..... "

Shiva said detecting her being hesitant,

"Sab yahin hai Raavi...... Andar..... Sab log tera bhut intezaar kar rahe hai........ Sab bhut khush honge Tu chal mere saath"

He gives her a assuring eye gesture and grips Raavi's hand and both moved inside the house .

Here Prafulla was sitting with suman and Dhara unlike before they were laughing and not bickering this amazed Raavi and mausa paa was sitting having tea with Gaumbi, dev ,rishita and krish. And Shiva spoke by putting his hand on her shoulder,

"Surprise....... "

Everyone looked at Shiva and Raavi and were amused to see her as of they were waiting for this moment to happen. Everyone hugged her and cried each one of them have gratitude in their eyes and tears of longing, Raavi was so overwhelmed by all this that she herself was having tears continuously,

She went to suman scaringly and sat on her knees to suman's level and suman pecked her forehead and cried and said,

"Maaf karde beta.........tere saath bhut galat kiya maine.............tujhe aur Shiva ko dur kar diya maine.......tum dono ke pyaar ko nahi dekha............maaf karde.........."

Raavi nods her head in no and than settles her head in suman's lap crying and suman caresses her hair, after meeting everyone all them settled one thing amused Raavi that was Shiva and Prafulla were talking nicely and Prafulla was nonchalantly saying Shiva,

"Damad ji.. . .. . . Kaha tha na maine.. . . "

And Shiva also replied in a kidding tone,

"Vese meri biwi kii massi maa abb lagta hai apki baatein sunna shuru karna padega.. . .. . .. . "

Raavi was astonished seeing them like this and than krish came and whispered in her ears,

"Bhabhi yehi soch rahe ho na kii yeh dono ikk saath kaise aur vo bhi itne pyaar se.. . .. "

Raavi nods her head and looks at Krish eagerly,

"Jab app gaye na toh Shiva toot gaya tha.. . .. . Bhut hi ghum sum rehta tha tab mami ne hi use samjhaya tha aur tab se lekar abb tak dono aise hi hai.. . .. . . .. Baki yeh toh nahi pata ki mami ne kya kaha.. . .. Baki is ki detail apkoShiva Shiva dega.. . .. . "

Raavi listens to him and gets emotional Krish wipes her tears and started chatting with her like they used to do before.

And than suman says,

"Raavi beta kahan rehegi ajj tu yahan ya fir apni massi maa ke paas"

"Suman ben Raavi iss ghar ki bahu hai.. . .. Yaad hain na abhi takk signature nahi huye hai aur na hi honge case vapis le liye hai.. . .. Toh kayde se Raavi yehi rukegi.. . .. . Aur agar ajj yeh mere saath gayi na toh Shiva toh hume kacha hi chaba jayega.. . .. . .. "

Everyone laughs making Shuva embarrassed.

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NIGHT IN SHIVI'S ROOM,

Since Raavi has returned home everyone was around her talking to her and feeding her. After a long day everyone retired to their room happily and Raavi went to change her clothes and when she returns she looks herself in the mirror and first thing she did was to apply sindoor in her hairline and than Shiva comes and looks at her and hugs her from behind his hand encircling her belly and Raavi's breathe got hitched she looks at him from mirror and he says,

"Raavi tune yeh pendant sambhal kar rakha hai.. . .. . .abhi bhi"

"Tune diya tha Shiva mujhe yeh.. . ..kabhi nahi chod sakti main ise.. . . . .. . "

"Raavi ikk bracelet mere birthday pe mujhe bheja tha kisi ne...... Vo tu hi thi na...... "

Raavi looks down and Shiva says,

"matlab Tu hi thi .......

Tujhe kuch dikhana hai......"

Shiva opens the cupboard and shows his letters, Raavi looks at him questioning and Shiva says,

"Yeh sab tere liye hai Raavi...... Yeh do saal mere dil mein jo bhi tha maine inn mein likhi hai........ Taki tu jab vapis aaye toh main tujhe yeh sab de du tune apna address nahi diya tha na nahi toh post kar deta roz.......... "

Raavi looks at the whole material kept in the box it was the bracelet she sent, the letters, her dupatta in which she has saved his name slip,

"Shiva tujhe yeh dupatta....."

"Meri raavi mujhe itna pyaar karti thi usne mera naam sambhal ke rakha tha aur main Tujhe dur karta raha.......yeh tab samjh mein aaya jab yeh dekha....".

Shiva brings his wrist forward and says,

"Abb bracelet pehna de na..... Jabse bheja hai na ikk baar bhi nahi pehna taki tu mujhe pehnaye..... "

Raavi makes him wear that tears were at brim of her eyes and than he pulls his wallet out of his pocket and takes put her mangalsutra which she had given him while leaving and says,

"Ise maine khud se dur nahi hone diya Raavi........ Yeh tera hai... "

Shiva tied it around her neck and tears came out of her eyes and when Shiva moved back she moved forward crying keeing her head on his chest and chanting,

"Thank you.... Thank you....... Mujhe pyaar..... Karne..... Ke liye....... Shiva.......... I love you.....l..u..v you..."

Shiva takes her frame in his arms and moves his hand back and forth on her back so that she calms down and make her look at him he kisses her tears out Raavi closes her eyes drowning in the moment and he spoke,

"Raavi........."

Raavi looks at him and before Shiva speaks Raavi places her lips on his kissing him softly, shiver run down shiva's spine his arms Instictually went around her waist and cudddled her not breaking the kiss his hand slid under her kurti and Raavi made her way to his shirt and removed it...... Shiva tugged her dori and her sleeves fall Shiva broke the kiss and trailed his lips from her cheeks to her neck to her collar bone leaving wet kisses , Raavi archs giving him more access and he nibbles on the crook of her neck and Raavi moans Shiva looks at her asking for her permission for moving forward and Raavi kisses him making his trance broke and Shiva took her in his arms towards their bed. That was the moment they both were mentally, emotionally and now physically connected too....... Both of them have had a long way of seperation and tonight they United to eternity.


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Hey guys, this was it for this part...... Will update soon the next part hope so you will like it........ And will love if someone continues the lovemaking part as I have tried to write it but it is not my cup of tea😅.


Yours

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That was great update.

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