ShiVi OS- second Chance

Hi everyone!

Keeping the positivity alive, I have written a one shot on the engagement scenario. Hope you will like it.

Please leave your feedback as it will help me in improving..🙂

Enjoy!

Second Chance

It was the D-day. Shiva was going to get engaged to Disha at her home. It was a small intimate ceremony as requested by Shiva. He was having a tough time trying to make sense of everything. Just then, the door of his room opened and Dev came inside.

“Are you ready?” He asked.

“Yeah. Almost.” Shiva replied in a jiffy. He did not want Dev to notice his puffy eyes.

“I guess you will never be ready for what you are planning to do.” Dev’s words surprised Shiva.

“Listen, I won’t say that I am the right person to counsel you but I have been in your shoes. I know it better than anyone. What you are going to do will not do good for anyone, trust me. You will be in a loveless marriage.” Dev said.

“I have told Disha that I don’t love her; she has no problem with it.” Shiva said looking at the wall straight ahead. He was unable to look at Dev.

“Her love would be enough for you two?” Dev questioned him.

Shiva was not able to form words so Dev continued.

“The guilt will always be with me for what I did to Raavi. It is a burden I have to bear for my whole life. That feeling is something I don’t want you to have. But you know what, one good thing that came out of it; we were not trapped in a marriage where there was no love. That would have been my biggest guilt.”

Shiva was trying to make sense of Dev’s words. Shiva in his heart knew that what he was doing is wrong but still, his mind was trying to make sense of it.

“Raavi doesn’t love me.” Shiva replied.

“Did she say that?” Dev asked.

“No but I know her, I am not someone she would ever love.”

“You and your assumptions.” Dev rolled his eyes and continued putting some sense into his brother’s pea sized brain.

“Even if she doesn’t, but you do love her and don’t even try to deny it. We all know. That doesn’t mean you have to jump into another marriage after your divorce. Give some time to yourself to heal.” Dev’s words started making sense to him. Shiva was surprised at how his brother understood the labyrinth his mind had become.

Shiva realised that he can move on at his own pace, he doesn’t have to get into a relationship just because his mom felt like it.

“Can you tell mom and others that I don’t want to get married?” Shiva requested Dev.

“What!! Why should I do it? Tell them yourself.” Dev told him and a smile was plastered on Shiva’s face.

“Because I need to talk to Raavi. She should know. I don’t care what she will say but she deserves to know. Better late than never.” Shiva hugged Dev and ran from the room.

“I need to talk to Dhara bhabhi and Rishita, they can handle mom.” Dev talked to himself and left the room.

Meanwhile at Raavi’s house, she was busy going through her diary. Every memory with Shiva that she had written in her diary, it was giving her pain.

“It was so easy for him to forget everything…” just then Shiva jumped inside from the window. He did not use the door because of his mammi.

“It was not easy, in fact it is not easy.” He told her.

“What are you doing here? Why are you here? You should be at your engagement party, no?” She said everything in one breath.

“I am not getting engaged. At least, not right now.” Raavi heaved a sigh of relief but that relief was overtaken by fear of what Shiva was about to say.

“Listen Raavi, I am not here to say anything out of this world. I want to say what I should have said long back. I want to say I am sorry for what you have been through because of me and my family; we don’t deserve someone like you.” Shiva was trying to calm himself when he saw Raavi just looking at him with tears in her eyes.

Shiva was about to leave when he heard Raavi sniffling.

“Is there anything else you want to say?” Raavi said.

“Would it matter to you what I want to say?” Shiva asked looking straight into her eyes.

“Wouldn’t have asked if it didn’t.”

“Listen Raavi, I don’t have this habit of talking non sense, like you.” This brought a smile on their faces because this was a reflection that things will be normal between them, eventually. “I have been horrible to you all my life but you have seen me at my most vulnerable and you are the only one who makes me vulnerable. You deserve the world which I cannot give...” Seeing Raavi’s face without any expression, he felt like a fool.

“What can you give me?” Raavi whispered.

“Myself” and that was all the confirmation that Raavi needed before jumping on to him.

They hugged each other for about 2 minutes. They both knew that their marriage deserves a second chance; this is what they decided to do. This time, both knew in their hearts that it will be a happily ever after.

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Thank you for reading…

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Aww so emotional!

Loved Dev here!

Finally him addressing leaving Raavi in the Mandap!

Lovely!

Keep writing more ❤️

Literally i want this to happen...... I mean it was so practical and emotional.. 🥰😘

for a second u made me forgive dev

raavi doesn't deserve the treatment she is getting

noone deserves a mom like Suman....agar ma aisi hai to dushman kaisi hote hai....

loved this ❤

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

for a second u made me forgive dev

raavi doesn't deserve the treatment she is getting

noone deserves a mom like Suman....agar ma aisi hai to dushman kaisi hote hai....

loved this ❤

Thank you ❤️
I just feel that the show has so much potential but it is not getting utilised..Dev can have a redemption track 🤔

Beautiful!!! Dev did something good!

This was beautiful ❤️

Loved how he said myself and she jumped into his arms 😍

Dev gave shiva some good advice ❣️

Loved it !❤️ Dev being the best brother in Shiva’s shoes already gave the perfect advise. It was all emotional and beautiful! Thank you for writing this.

Can we just have the same scenario in the episode as well? This will make perfect sense and pit an end to everyone’s misery.

Superb, Dev stole the Show here😆

Shivi deserve a second chance

Originally posted by: Scribble19

Thank you ❤️
I just feel that the show has so much potential but it is not getting utilised..Dev can have a redemption track 🤔

for me, dev can't have any sort of redemption.....he was a coward ....what if she had died that day?

but u almost made me feel that for a second....such good is your writing....the show, characters and actors have so much to offer....I heard that original is running since few years now and these people at this rate won't be able to see a year....