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Shiva is standing leaning on the pillar staring at the

moon .

Shiva's P.O.V.

Sirf do din aur phir humare divorce hojayega ,tu

mujhse aur iss zabardasti ke rishte se azad hojayegi.

Yeh shaadi khatm hojayegi. Phir tujhe iss chalti phirt

kiraane li dukaan se mukti mil jaye gi tu bhot khushi

rahegi raavi aur agar tujhe iss divorce se khushi milegi

toh ...

His phone rang and Raavi's number flashed on the

screen .he picked the call.

Ayy chipkali.....

Shhhh.. raavi shushed him in between .

"Ek dum chup ,tujhe galatfehmi hogayi hai mein

chipkali nai hoon .mein teri biwi hoon ghadede RAAVI

SHIVA PANDYA. Naam save karke rakhle."

Tu..and again raavi didn't let shiva speak."Chup,ek baar bolna pe samjh nai aata hai kya tujhe.

Bhoothnath kahinka . Uss disha ki toh itni lambi lambi

bakwaas sunta hai aur apni biwi ki baat puri hi nahi

hone deta .she started fake crying.

Shiva sensed something is wrong with raavi her

speech was not clear and she was stuttering and she

sounded as if she is drunk .No raavi doesn't even look

at alcohol. She was so angry when he got drunk and

came home that day..,that day ..remembering that

something itched his heart.

Raavi was still blabbering nonsense on phone .

Raavi tu kahan hai ??, Shiva spoke coming out of his

thoughts.

" jahan mujhe nahi hona chaiye tha shiva. Par teri

wajah se mein aaj yahan hoon." Raavi said .

"Raavi thik se bol kahan hai tu ???,

"shiva asked again .

"Thik se toh bol rahi hoon, arre mein toh muh se bol

rahi hoon. par thik se kaise bolun??"

,raavi answered

again .

Shiva took a deep breath first then again he asked

her ,

" raavi apne aas pass dekh aur mujhe bata tu konsi

jagah par hai ?? ."

"Mein apni sahi jagah pe nahi hoon shiva .mein pandya

nivas mein nahi hoon ." Raavi replied.

Shiva was now sure she is drunk .but how and why ??.

Shiva was very confused . shiva was scared for

her ,she is not in her senses. She is alone at night

outside somewhere and he doesn't know where. he

prayed nothing wrong happens to her and prayed to

God to keep her safe until he reaches her.

Raavi tujhe pandya nivas aana hai ?? Shiva asked her .

Raavi replied with a yes.

"Toh tujhe mujhe batana padega ki tu kahan hai "

"Mein pandya store aayi thi ab kahan hoon mujhe nahi

pata ."

"Thik hai tu wahin ruk wahin matt Jana mein araha

hoon."

Shiva was still on call with raavi .even though he

knows to drive while on call is dangerous but he feared

something more dangerous can happen with raavi.

He was on his way to pandya store .

Suddenly he saw a her sitting in the middle of road as if she is sitting in her home. He went near her.

Raavi stood up in excitement ,she stumbled a little .

A 400 walt smile appeared on her face seeing her

bhoothnath.

"Shivaa .. tu agaya mujhe pandya nivas le jaane"

, raavi

said happily.

Shiva first checked her if she was alright and did she

got hurt anywhere. But thankfully she was fine nothing

happened to her.

"Haan ,ab chal ." Shiva said .

He wanted to know many things ,how she got

drunk ???and why she got drunk??why she went to

pandya store at this time??and from where the hell did

she got alcohol . There was no bar near pandya store .

The nearest bar is 5 -6km away from their house and

pandya store.

He came out of his chain of thoughts . He told raavi to

hold him tightly. She was drunk and taking her home

on a bike was not a very safe idea but better than

taking her home on foot. Pandya nivas was not too far

so if he manages her for about 10 to 15 minutes,they

will reach home and then he can handle her.Surprisingly raavi listened to him and held him tightly

through out their journey to pandya nivas,while

blabbering ,ranting and cursing disha in between. After

a very long time he saw that previous somnath ki best

ladki ,raavi .

After marrying him she lost herself ,the cheerful,always

happy, smiling,bubbly self of her.

They reached home and realization hit shiva very

hard .its even more difficult now to handle her .if

someone saw them ,saw raavi in this drunk state ,then

what will he do?? .

While Raavi was still going on with her rant. Shiva

silenced her by keeping his hand on raavi's mouth.

"Raavi thodi der ke liye khamosh Rehna thik hai .mein

haath hata raha hoon awaaz matt karna . "Shiva told

raavi .

Raavi nodded her head in agreement. And curled her

arms around Shiva's neck while resting her head on his

chest.

Then shiva lead her inside pandya nivas.they both

were walking near their room ,when raavi fell on the

cot in the angan with shiva .

"Itna chal chal ke toh mein thak gayi "

,raavi said .

Shiva gave a puzzled look to her . how is she tired of

walking when the came in his bike. He was thankful

that Krish slept in suman's room today. Or else he

would have made a big scene seeing them like this

so close to each other . He lifted raavi in his arms and

made their way to their room.

"Raavi jab tak hum kamre mein nahi Jaate chup rehna."

Shiva told raavi.

Raavi rested her head on shiva's crook of neck and

snaked her hands around him.

Only shiva knows these actions of raavi made him feel

so many unknown yet beautiful feelings.

He placed raavi on the bed .she pulled shiva with her in

the bed. AND hugged him tightly.

Shiva ,ek ladka aur ek ladki akele ek kamre mein log

kya sochenge ?? Raavi opened her mouth and spoke

this .

Toh yeh sharab pee ke Talli hone se pehle sochna tha

na ghadedi.shiva told raavi jerking her hands off him .

"Aur tune sharab pe hi kyun ?? "He asked her.

"Sharab..??...haan ...sharab.. kaise Budhu jaisa sawaal

kar raha hai shiva .sharab toh log gum mein hi Peete

hai na."

"Tujhe kis cheez ka ghum hai ?? "Shiva asked her.

"Kis cheez ka?? Kis cheez ka nahin hai woh puch .tu

puch hi matt.yeh sab teri wajah se hua hai."

"Kya bakwas kar rahi hai ghadedi , meri wajah se ??

Maine kya kiya hai?? "

"Kya kiya hai ???,tune hi kiya hai yeh sab raita tera hi

phailaya hua hai,sub teri galti hai ."

"Kya bol rahi hai ,raita ??galti??"

"Zyada bann matt shiva ,teri wajah se hi mein ghum

mein hoon.tune..." she stopped her expression

changed from angry to sad. Shiva saw tears rolling

down her cheek.

"Tu roo rahi hai ?? Tu roo kyun rahi hai ab???"

"Teri wajah se"

, she got up on her knees and held

shiva's collar . " abhi humara divorce hua bhi nahi hai

aur tu uss disha ke saath....par yaad rakh tu ab bhi

mera pati hai uss disha odisha ka nahi "

Shiva remembered what happened today in the

morning .

when he came out of shower in a towel wrapped

around his waist. Disha was standing in the angan

smiling at me .i smiled at her .then I called dhara

bhabhi.

Disha told me that dhara bhabhi and suman ma went

with kanta kaaki somewhere. And she came to meet

him ,suman had told him that he has to go on a lunch

with disha. He thought of refusing to come by lying

to her that he has some important work. He walked

towards his room to wear clothes .and suddenly disha

slipped out of nowhere and he held her by waist.

and raavi who returned from market saw them in that

position. Shiva left disha and she fell on the ground.

He apologised to disha .and helped her to get up .

Raavi fumed in anger and marched towards the

kitchen and started cutting vegetables very loudly.

He went out with disha and refused to come with her

by saying he has some work at store and left.

"Raavi tujhe jaisa lag raha waisa nahi hai " shiva said.

"Phir kaisa hai shiva , woh odisha ne tujhe KISS kardiya

aur tune kuch nahi kaha ,aaj usse angan ke beech o

beech bahon me leke khada tha pyar se towel mein.

Sharab lihaaz kuch hai ya nahi."

"Dekh raavi tu galat samjh rahi hai "

,raavi said.

"Kuch galat nahi samjh rahi hoon mein, bilkul sahi

samjh rahi hoon. Humara divorce hua nahi hai abhi me

aaj bhi teri Patti hoon . aur tu uss disha se shaadi nahi

kar sakta. "

"Tu mera pati hai .sirf raavi pandya ka.

Aur tu uss odisha disha ka kabhi nahi ho sakta.mein

hone hi nahi dungi." Raavi said leaving shiva's collar.

Shiva froze at that spot .was he dreaming again ??

He pinched himself, NOOO ...he wasn't it was real .his

chipkali was claiming him as hers.

But then he controlled himself ,he said to himself

that he doesn't deserve raavi.she deserves someone

more better.he is not capable of her.she is not in her

sense she might even forget all this in the morning.

Convincing himself that he is not worthy of her.he

went to kitchen to make lemonade. And came back with the lemon juice. " yeh pee le ,he said handing her the glass. "

"Nahi , mujhe aur nahi Peena hai." Ravi said refusing to

drink .

"Ayy ,chipkali sharab nahi hai nimbu paani hai .chup

chap pee le "

"Tune banaya hai ??"

, Raavi questioned.

"Nahi toh kon banata ,teri woh maasi maa ya uske

bhoot." Shiva said .

"Sach me tune banaya hai ? Mere liye ??." Raavi asked

again.

"Nahi , ek bewdi chipkali hai uske liye."

" mein agar bewdi hoon toh tu bhi bewda hai. " raavi

said putting her arms around shiva's neck .

She smiled dreamily looking at shiva she was an inch

away from his face.

She then fell again on the bed with shiva .she hugged

him tightly.

"Shiva tu uss disha se shaadi nahi karega , na kisi

aur Trisha ,Prisha ,nisha,odisha se . Tu sirf mera patihai .aur me sirf teri patni ."

"Par raavi humara toh do din baad divorce hone wala

hai na.phir na mein tera pati rahunga aur na tu meri

biwi." Saying the sad truth .

Raavi got sad of his words ,

" yeh sab bhi teri hi galti

hai , tujhe kyun lagta hai ki tu Dusron se kam hai."

"Me khud ko Dusron se kam nahi samjhta raavi . me

buss tere layak nahi hoon."

"Kyun?? Kisne kaha tujhe ???. Shiva tujhe mujhse

better ladki mil hi nahi sakti ,jo sirf tujhe jaanti hi nahi

samjhti bhi ho ,aur na mujhe koi dusra shiva milegi jo

mera bhoothnath ho . "

"Tujhse zyada handsome ladka pure somnath mein

nahi hai. Aur tere six packs abs .."

,she said while lifting

his shirt and touching his abs.

Shiva held her hand and stopped her. She pouted and

looked like a cute little kid who didn't get his favourite

chocolate.

Shiva asked her ,

" raavi ,tu mujhse pyaar karti hai ?" .

"Nai "

, raavi said . " tu humesha mujhpe chilata hai ,aur

uss disha ko kiss karne dediya ,pehli mulaqat mein

hi,aur mein jo tujhe bachpan se janti hoon ,apni biwi ko chipkali bana kar ladta rehta hai. Tu bhot bura hai

shiva ." raavi sounded angry and upset with shiva.

"Acha , aur tu ,tu toh bilkul nahi ladti na mujhse , tujhe

bhi toh woh English bolne wale gentlemen type ladka

ache lagta hai na mein toh jungli hoon ,tail Masalon

ki badboo aari hai na . Aur tu mujhse pyaar nai karti

na ,toh phir tujhe meri aur disha ki shaadi se kya

problem hai ? ."

" hai problem, tu mera hai shiva ,aur mujhe koi

gentlemen nai pasand hai, mujhe tu pasand hai,mera

boothnath. aur mein tujhse nai ladti tu mujhse ladta

hai main toh somnath ki sabse achi aur bolo aur pyaari

ladki hoon. samjha ?"

" tu mujhe pasand karti hai ? Toh baar baar mujhe

khudse door Jaane ke liye kyun kehti hai ? "

" waise toh tu meri koi baat nai maanta, jo kehti hoon

uske ulta hi karte hai . Agar me tujhse jaane ke liye

kahoon ,toh tu jata kyun hai ? Ruk ke mujhe mana nahi

sakta kya ,jaise gaumbi dhara di ko manate hai itne

pyaar se."

" ayy chipkali ,khud ko barabari dhara bhabhi se matt

kar ."

"Ayy bhoothnath, tu bhi gaumbi nahi hai , par......,

mein dhara di jaisi nahi hoon issliye tu mujhe nai manayega?"

"Shiva tu mujhse pyaar karta hai ?" Raavi asked .

"Nahi , main aur pyaar woh bhi tujhse?? Pagal hogayi

hai kya "

Tears filled in raavi's eyes, and tears started rolling

down her cheeks.

" aur agar main dhara di jaisi banjao tab bhi nahi ?? "

she asked sobbing in between.

Shiva saw her crying and hugged her .why did she star‐

ted crying, why was she hurt because she didn't love

her, why did she wanted shiva to love her,why did she

wanted to be like dhara di ?to make shiva love her? .

"Raavi ,tujhe dhara bhabhi ki Tarah banne ki zarurat

nahi hai. Tu jaisi hai waisi hi bhot achi hai. Somnath ki

best ladki " shiva told raavi to comfort her.

" par tu mujhse pyaar nai karta na " raavi told sadly.

"Kis ghadede ne bola "

"Tu ne " they both let out a little laugh.

"I love you shiva " raavi mustered wounding her hands

around shiva.Shiva froze ,he couldn't process what his ghadedi said,

did she just confess?? Is this happening for real ??

Was it another dream ?? He realised it was not feeling

raavi's grip tightening around him.

"I love you too, ghadedi " shiva whispered.

Raavi then again hugged him tightly placing her head

on his chest .

"Shiva tu disha se shaadi nahi karega na ???" Raavi

asked.

"Nahi karunga,

" shiva replied with a smile.

"Tu sirf mera hai na shiva ."

"Mein sirf tera hoon raavi."

Then she got up and started wiping Shiva's left

cheek.and placed several kisses there.

"USS odisha ki Gandi kiss ko tere handsome chehre

se Saad kar ke mein apni kisses se pura Gaal bhar diya

hai .ab koi aur tujhe kiss nahi kar sakta."

"Mere alawa agar tune kisi ko kiss karne diya toh mein

tujhe chodungi " raavi warned Shiva.

"Kabhi nahi " shiva replied.

RAAVI'S P .O.V.

When I woke up this morning. I felt a warm hold on

my body. And to my surprise I'm hugging him ,and we

are sleeping cuddling each other like a lovely dovey

couple. His breaths on my skin gives me goosebumps.

I slowly free myself from his hold making sure he

doesn't wake up. Its already 6 in the morning she

woke up so late today how will she prepare breakfast

and other household chores. My heading is hurting

like hell. I looked at him sleeping so peacefully, he

looks very dreamy,wait am I dreaming I extended my

hand and touched him to know if this was real or I'm

hallucinating . He woke up from my touch.

"Kya hua sarr kyun pakda hua hai tune ??"

, He asked

sitting on the bed.

"Woh buss Halka sa sarr dard hai, par tu yahan kya kar

raha hai ??" Raavi asked.

"Kya matlab ,mein yahan kya kar raha hoon ,raavi tujhe

yaad nahi kal kya hua tha ??"

, Shiva asked.

"Kya hua tha shiva ?? "Raavi asked .

Shiva then didn't say anything and quietly got up from

the bed and left the room.he then came back with a

glass of lemon juice and asked raavi to drink it .it will

cure her hangover from last night.

Raavi remembered last night when she stormed into

pandya store and shiva was not there and kaka was

preparing for his beer party and she stole his alcohol

bottle when he went to bring ice.she drank the lemon

juice.she suddenly got up realizing, she is already

getting late for her chores.

"Sunn ,aaj nashta bannane ki zarurat nahi hai. Mein

bahar se le aunga aaj,aur maa ki tension matt le me

shambhal lunga".shiva said to raavi.

{After sometime ,everyone came for breakfast.raavi

made the morning tea for everyone and did all

her kitchen chores as shiva brought breakfast for

everyone. }

"Arrey ,waah .....waah....bhabhi aaj toh itna mast

nashta ,samosa,kachori ,jalebi,fafda,

aur dhokla bhi .smell hi itni achi aa rahi hai. mujhse control nai hora , jaldi parose bhabhi. "Krish said.

"Krish yeh sab Maine nahi banaya hai,yeh sab shiva

lekar aaya hai." Raavi said.

"Heinn, kyun bahar se kyun laya nashta ,yeh markundi

gaay ne mana kardiya kya?nashta banana se."suman

asked.

"Nahi ,nahi maa woh toh banana wali thi ,par dhara

bhabhi ka bhot mann tha yeh sub kahane ka toh maine

socha ke kyun na aaj sub yehi nashta karte hai."

"Haan maa maine hi bola tha shiva ko yeh sab laane ke

liye" Gautam added.

" waah....waah sub ke sub joru ke ghulaam. Ayy shiva

yeh dono toh the hi pehle se hi petticoat chaap,tu

bhi inn mein shamil hogaya .yeh markundi gaay ne

aisa kya kardiya ek raat mein haan?? Jo tu uske geet

gaaraha hai.?? Hein ?? " suman commented.

"Maa ,aisa kuch nahi hai . maine bola na woh gaumbi

ke kehne par mein yeh nashta leke aaya hoon . Aur

waise bhi ek din tujhe bhi iss chipkali ke haath ka bana

sada hua nashta nai khana padega ." Shiva told .

Raavi's face expression changed hearing shiva's

words. She was clearly angry,hurt and displeased.Everyone finished there breakfast and dev ,gaumbi

and Shiva left for store,rishita also went for her job and

krish went to his college.

Raavi was in the kitchen preparing for lunch and dhara

was handing suman her cup of tea, who was sitting in

the angan .

Raavi was trying hard to recollect what happened

yesterday night . " raavi tujhe yaad nahi hai kal kya hua

tha ? " she remembered shiva's words in the morning.

"Kya hua tha kal raat " raavi asked herself stressing

her memory to recollect what happened yesterday at

night .

"I love you too gaumbi " shara said shyly to gautam,

with whom she was on call with.

After hearing this it clicked raavi's brain and she

remembered the events from last night. She became

really happy and started to dance with dhara.

"Yaad agaya ,yaad Agaya.... sub yaad agaya.....mujhe

finally yaad agaya dhara di " raavi said while joyouslydancing and spinning with dhara, before dhara

signalled her to stop as she is pregnant.

"Kya yaad agaya tujhe , jo itni khush hi kar phudak rahi

hai ,aisa bhi kya yaad agaya "

Raavi was at loss of words now, how will she tell

dhara di now that she confessed her feelings to her

bhoothnath.

" dhara di, woh lipstick shade ka naam yaad agaya ,jo

deepika ne apni shaadi pe lagaya tha " raavi said with a

sheepish smile.

Dhara moved her from side to side in disbelief. " sahi

kehta hai shiva tujhe, ghadedi " .dhara said while

pinching her nose.

The prepared the tiffins for the pandya brothers. And

as they went out from the kitchen raavi's happy 400

walt bright smiled turned into a frown as she saw

disha with kanta kaaki entering their house.

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