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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is beautiful ❤️

Raavi's hurt 💔

She was trying to distract herself by doing chores.she still kept food for him 🥺

So shiva didn't eat with disha 🤭🤭

Shiva's reaction seeing her tears. He didn't leave her despite her saying so 💔

And finally the conversation 🤩🤩

Do writeee moreee

Nahhh! I couldn't bring it in my heart to let him have a 'date' date// 😆

Thanks a lot!

Will surely write more.

Ritu undoubtedly the long buildup has turned out to be very heart wrenching and aching but extremely beautiful thing i read today; the choice of your words-marvellous!

i just loved it and i've no words to explain❤️

All the emotions described are so perfect that they tug at all the right heartstrings 🥺.

Beautiful piece dear❤️

This is beautiful.. Really loved it❤️

It was so nice... liked the frustration and emotional outburst

Thanks for the tag

Ritu🥺.

Yeh kya kiya😮🤩🤩

🤣🤣

It was Fab🎊 Fab🎊 Fab🎊

Not that I've to say it after reading 5 pages of compliments 🤭😍

The way....Raavi has a internal breakdown and decided to sleep in the kitchen (don't kno if u considered,bt it's kinda like how they treat her like a Maid n now....so she maybe goes ' why not'....)

I had to keep my cellphone away thrice and tell myself that this wasn't real😅🙈....

Also......

Tu usko mere saath nhi dekh saktina?... Tho main kisi aur ko tujhe bhaga le jane ki baat karte hue bhi nahi sunn sakta… Tujhse Bardasht nhi hoti na wo ladki…tho mujhse koi aur kaise bardasht hota?...”

This part was smthng I never imagined (or correlated , not my fault🙃....the makers ghumao-ing the story too much to think😵😵🤭)

N we may never see it but it's soo damn right!

Sooo a Huge round of applause to u👏🏻😌

M floating in bliss now, cuz this isn't just a random FF(they are awesome as well) but this is close to reality,... Nd it ends well💖.

Vaise itta padhke if u didn't get wt I ment🙈 😜

I'll say it again, asan-asan words....I Loved it😍😍😘

Lemme know if u want another *ahem *ahem reply 🙈 n thanks for the tag,

waiting for more 💃🏻💃🏻

Byee

can u please teach or show makers how to write and especially a good sensible conversation which will help a couple to understand each other and overcome the issues

I had been feeling choked the way you described about her pain and anguish....and think about Shiva....he is roaming around with that female on his moms orders.....pathetic females....she is in denial even when he clearly told her, he isn't interested.....

hum bichari janta, aise ache stories se dil behlate hai....

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Ritu undoubtedly the long buildup has turned out to be very heart wrenching and aching but extremely beautiful thing i read today; the choice of your words-marvellous!

i just loved it and i've no words to explain❤️

Thank you so much hon!

Means the world to me ❤️

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

All the emotions described are so perfect that they tug at all the right heartstrings 🥺.

Beautiful piece dear❤️

Thanks a lot bro. ❤️

Originally posted by: majoni03

This is beautiful.. Really loved it❤️

Thank you so much ! 🤗