ShiVi TS: Leap of Faith - Page 5

Aaaahhhhhhh! This was insanely hot! I mean.. seriously.. all that adrenaline, all those hormones.. I’m so surprised at the level of restraint Shiva possessed to walk away from that moment! I thought they’d end up doing the act in the changing room.

And I demand a next part! You can’t leave Raavi, Shiva and us hanging after bringing all of us to the edge like that! I want to know what happens to the friends with benefits! Does it take another adventure for them to finally do the deed? Or do they just go at it that very night in the store room of Pandya Niwas? Does Pandya Store ever get to witness their adventures? So many unanswered questions that I desperately want answers to! Please please please continue this!

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

My orbs fell out of my sockets wala good 🤭

I cherish this monster and cannot wait to read more of such thehrav wala sexy romance

I'm laughing at the imagery of this!! 🤣 (More than the imagery cos I know exactly what you mean! 😉)

Thank you again and you're right about having the world of the internet to put your work out into so it doesn't feel as lonely.

Still, I think we writers are an incredibly brave lot. Putting ourselves out there and our work. I had begun to feel criticism is better than indifference sometimes - that's how lonely it can get 😒

HAHAHA, Raavi is not a fully dobi in this story😆 Madam ko kiss karna thaa, but that was hot!🔥

They are going for Friends with Benefits🤣 hopefully it will turn into love❤️

I just looved loooved loooooooved the update😍

It was all sorts of amazing ....beautiful + hot + sensual + subtle + wow

This bungee jumping and sex theory of shiva is something which is gonna be with me for loooong😆🤣...looved it🤣🙈

You write beautifully🧡🖤🧡

What should I call you??🤗

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

I loved loved loved part 2! Beautiful!❤️‍🔥

Thank you so much for the appreciation! 😳

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Aaaahhhhhhh! This was insanely hot! I mean.. seriously.. all that adrenaline, all those hormones.. I’m so surprised at the level of restraint Shiva possessed to walk away from that moment! I thought they’d end up doing the act in the changing room.

And I demand a next part! You can’t leave Raavi, Shiva and us hanging after bringing all of us to the edge like that! I want to know what happens to the friends with benefits! Does it take another adventure for them to finally do the deed? Or do they just go at it that very night in the store room of Pandya Niwas? Does Pandya Store ever get to witness their adventures? So many unanswered questions that I desperately want answers to! Please please please continue this!

Ahh yes, I know, that restraint. One of them had to have it, and it had to be Shiva because Raavi was in no frame of mind to stop - girl was too far gone! 😆

As for writing more, I'm pleased you want it, but I think this little story ended at the perfect note, don't you?

My target when I write is never about getting them to the place when they finally do the deed. I'm all about the build-up, the anticipation, which is what I was aiming for in this little fic. Sorry if that disappoints, but I like leaving my stories with a hint of promise and positivity. Which is exactly where I left off this one. They are embarking on the next phase of their relationship, and they're probably gonna take it slow and I think we should leave them to it! 😳😆

Oh, and the Friends with Benefits isn't actually happening. 😳 It's just Raavi being sassy/ saucy. 😆You'll realize it if you read more closely!

Again, thanks for reading and your comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: mpks1

HAHAHA, Raavi is not a fully dobi in this story😆 Madam ko kiss karna thaa, but that was hot!🔥

They are going for Friends with Benefits🤣 hopefully it will turn into love❤️

Ha ha, the Friends with Benefits was just a cheeky comment by Raavi. I don't think either she or Shiva would be comfortable with that. They care about each other too much, even if they're not ready to admit it yet. Shiva was probably feeling all sorts of guilt at having taken it that far, and that was the reason he avoided Raavi for as long as he did. And also because he had not idea how to approach this - unlike the bungee jump which he was absolutely ready for! 😆

In the end, he absolved himself quite well, I think. Don't you? 😆

Originally posted by: Coleus

I just looved loooved loooooooved the update😍

It was all sorts of amazing ....beautiful + hot + sensual + subtle + wow

This bungee jumping and sex theory of shiva is something which is gonna be with me for loooong😆🤣...looved it🤣🙈

You write beautifully🧡🖤🧡

What should I call you??🤗

Thank you so so much! 🤗

For reading and the appreciation.

And the sex analogy was just my thing from my other fic - it fit in beautifully with my ML in my fic - it's just the kind of cheeky thing he would say, but I wasn't sure if it would fit Shiva. Hopefully I haven't digressed too much from his character!

Oh and you call me Liz or Lizzie or Riya (which is what I'm called on the forum!)😳

What do I call you? 😳

Loved it.All I want is you to use word 'tu' when shivi addresses each other.'tum' doesn't give that familiarity to me😘

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ha ha, the Friends with Benefits was just a cheeky comment by Raavi. I don't think either she or Shiva would be comfortable with that. They care about each other too much, even if they're not ready to admit it yet. Shiva was probably feeling all sorts of guilt at having taken it that far, and that was the reason he avoided Raavi for as long as he did. And also because he had not idea how to approach this - unlike the bungee jump which he was absolutely ready for! 😆

In the end, he absolved himself quite well, I think. Don't you? 😆

Yes he did. Not feeling guilty anymore😆

Glad they talked in your story atleas ❤️t but in the actual series nothing is moving, they are not talking their heart out all😕, fans like me who have been following this show from Day 1 are frustrated.

Please write more.