ShiVi TS: Leap of Faith - Page 6

Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it.All I want is you to use word 'tu' when shivi addresses each other.'tum' doesn't give that familiarity to me😘

Thank you for that feedback. I will keep it in mind for my next, if I do write more ShiVi

Originally posted by: mpks1

Yes he did. Not feeling guilty anymore😆

Glad they talked in your story atleas ❤️t but in the actual series nothing is moving, they are not talking their heart out all😕, fans like me who have been following this show from Day 1 are frustrated.

Please write more.

Saare Hindi shows mein yehi hota hai. They think the only way to stretch and drag tracks is to increase miscommunication and misunderstanding between the leads. I have yet to see a healthy relationship portrayal on TV

Part 2 didn’t disappoint

It was HOT and adorable.

I am glad Shiva didn’t hold back, when they finally talked

Waiting for more Stories written by you

Originally posted by: Foxii

Part 2 didn’t disappoint

It was HOT and adorable.

I am glad Shiva didn’t hold back, when they finally talked

Waiting for more Stories written by you

Thank you! I will try to write more ShiVi (or adapt my stories into the ShiVi fandom! 😆) Would you like to be tagged if I do? 😳

This is SO FREAKING AMAZING I CAN'T even-

Holy cow!!!

Terrific.

Love it so much.

The Analogies oh my my my my...

the innuendos..

I'm SO HOOKED.

Isiliye to main kehti hoon amare ff writers are best .Kass u all writers would have been actual writers instead of these irritating Choubays. Hats of to you all . List is long . Didn't want to miss any names. So hip hip hooray to our ff writer.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hold your horses 😆 and wait for Part 2 ☺️!

Raavi is more than capable of er- handling - things! 🤣

2nd line made me laugh🤣 ya she will definitely 😉

i am glad that i was sitting in the chair or i would have fallen down with all the mushiness and hotness.......my heart was racing .......i loved the last conversation.........friends with benefits 😉🤣☺️naughty shivi

but i have one question..........how he was so sure about the thrill and his analogy of having s.x.......that its same? he mentioned it so many times that i would have held is collar and asked........how are you so sure and how do u know............

raavi and me both are infected by shivalisciousness

u r an amazing writer and m so hooked to this........i will keep bugging u.....

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

i am glad that i was sitting in the chair or i would have fallen down with all the mushiness and hotness.......my heart was racing .......i loved the last conversation.........friends with benefits 😉🤣☺️naughty shivi

but i have one question..........how he was so sure about the thrill and his analogy of having s.x.......that its same? he mentioned it so many times that i would have held is collar and asked........how are you so sure and how do u know............

raavi and me both are infected by shivalisciousness

u r an amazing writer and m so hooked to this........i will keep bugging u.....

Thank you! I’m glad you brought up that last convo because it was written as an afterthought (my original fic did not have it) and the FwB line was a moment of inspiration! 😆 So yeah, I’m especially proud of it and it makes me like Raavi so much more because she said it! 😆

Ahh— how does Shiva know the jump is like sex? The perils of adapting your own work! 😆

In my fic, my ML had had experience with both before so he could say this with confidence!😃

With Shiva I haven’t established that he has had experience with either, so for the purpose that this story makes sense, we will just have to assume he does! 😃

Or that he’s just doing what Raavi thinks he’s doing- shocking her by saying outrageous things! The way I picture Shiva in my head, I feel like this would suit his personality. What do you think? 😆

I leave it to my readers to choose!

I think Raavi more than got her revenge on Shiva though in terms of shocking him back. I don’t think he expected that kiss at all! It totally blindsided him! And then his response to it! ☺️

And awww.. sweet of you to like my work! For sure, I’d be happy to accept prompts. Did you know we have a prompt submission thread now in the FF forum?

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

This is SO FREAKING AMAZING I CAN'T even-

Holy cow!!!

Terrific.

Love it so much.

The Analogies oh my my my my...

the innuendos..

I'm SO HOOKED.

Wow! Thank you!! 🤗

The analogies, the innuendos yes! That’s what makes it all delicious imo! 😳 And a little bit naughty 😈 that I guess diverges from the canon ShiVi 😳
Thanks again for reading and the appreciation!❤️

I truly treasure every comment on this thread! 🤗