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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Anu and I caught up with yours.. This is beautifully written.. Now I want to watch the movie (No I dont understand Telugu, but I normally watch with either subtitles ..or dubbed versions since I love Telugu movies!)


I want more..Update soonest!


Also I can't picture Raavi and Shiva getting along for too long so I wonder if there is going to be dhamaka and then intense Shivi? (Yes please!)


AAH! Thank you! SPOILER ALERT! whats life without dhamaka!

You will get what you are expecting a few chapters down the line!😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Chapter 5 is such an amazing one! Loved it! The striking of the deal, jealous Shiva, compatible ShiVi.. everything was amazing to read! And best part was the song choice for the performance!


Thank you!! kaal was my bachpan song- had to!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Janeavneil

I've not watched 100 percent love par u are making me want to watch it , although I don't know Telugu I love watching Telugu movies.

Shivi as a team is amazing. Finally raavi ko yeh ehsaas hua ki they are compatible, it'll come handy soon 😂. Probably this dance is going to change something between them and maybe Rohan third wheeling will also help them realise their feelings. Shivi as friends are super adorable ❤️.

Can't wait to read more of it ,super cute story


Thank you!! watch the movie after this FF is done LOL! will update soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Anu!!!! Loved this update too.... Shiva wants Raavi to distract Rohan but will constantly monitor the distracting too...🤣🤣 I truly enjoy your phastam phast updates though....


AHH Thanks!! SHIVA IS SHIVA! Updating soon :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Anu, another awesome update! Shiva is asking Raavi to distract Rohan but watching her every move😆 as for the dance, it went well, he followed exactly what Raavi told him to, haaye he is starting to listen to her❤️ Team ShiVi in this story are unique, smart and rocks😆

Can’t wait for the next update!


What else can you expect from Shiva! updating soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 6

It was the week of the final exams of the year, Raavi and Shiva were only studying 24/7. They forgot about sleep, food, and taking breaks. They were also studying during dinner time. Dhara was tired of asking them to eat, instead she went and began feeding them with a spoon.

“Kya kar rahe ho do no? Sau se zyada number nahi aayenge.” Gautam said to the duo but they were lost in their books.

As usual, after dinner, Raavi and Shiva headed to the store to study there to avoid any disturbances in the house.

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Krish woke up in the middle of the night to use the restroom. As he walked past Raavi’s and Shiva’s cots he noticed that they were empty. He looked at the time, it was 3am and he got worried. They were usually back from the store by midnight. Krish woke Dev up as he was feeling tense.

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Raavi and Shiva lost track of time studying for the last exam of their engineering degree. Object Oriented Programming was the hardest subject for Shiva, he wanted to be as prepared as possible.

Suddenly as they were revising, they noticed that the bulb in the storeroom began to flicker.

“Shiva, fix kar na” Raavi said. “Lagtha hai, bulb change karana padega.” Shiva said as he looked for a spare bulb.

“Mil gaya! Arrey, I think Gaumbi seedi ghar pe leke gaye. Ek kaam karta hoon, main tujhe uta tha hoon, tu fix karle” Shiva said handing over the bulb to Raavi.

He carried her up so that she could reach the light. Raavi removed the old bulb and fixed the new the light. “Fixed! Neeche uttar mujhe”

Shiva slowly got Raavi down holding her. Her hands were on his shoulders, his on her waist, their eyes met and they froze. Time froze.

“AHEM AHEM” Shiva and Raavi were bought back from their moment and they looked around to find Krish and Dev who were standing at the entrance of the storeroom.

Shiva and Raavi broke apart and Shiva began to say “Kya hua? Kuch bhi toh nahi”

“It’s just infatuation.. Woh ek ladka aur..” Raavi began to explain.

“Infatuation is only an attraction between a male and a female. It is a state of being completely carried away by unreasoned passion. It is as an unappreciated and a completely unwarranted emotion” Krish and Dev recited verbatim.

“Arrey bahut baar suna hai” Dev teased them.

“Chalo Raavi ghar chalte hai, kaafi pad liya. Kal last exam hai, sona bhi zaroori hai.” Shiva said all flustered.

“Haan haan, chalo” Raavi quickly said, packing up their belongings.

“Take your time, hum bahar wait kar rahe hai” Krish said as he and Dev stepped out.

The four of them headed home, and went to sleep without uttering a word. Raavi and Shiva didn't even meet eyes that night.

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The next morning as Shiva and Raavi were entering the exam hall, Rohan tapped on Raavi’s shoulder, said “Good luck Raavi” and blushed.

“Thanks Rohan! Tumhe bhi best of luck!” She responded.

Shiva and Raavi looked at each other with a grin on their face as they entered the exam hall.

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On their way back home after the exam, Raavi said with rather low spirits “Shiva, aaj college ka last day tha. Maasi mujhe ghar vaapis bula rahi hai. Maine kaha, results aur job placements confirm hone ke baad hi main waha jaaungi.”

Shiva applied a sudden brake and stopped the bike and Raavi tightened her grip on him. “Kya hua Shiva? Bika kharab hua kya?” She asked.

“Haan ek second, check karne de” Shiva said as the two of them got off the bike.

Shiva sat by the wheel of the bike trying to see what the issue was as Raavi looked on from the other side. Just then, two boys came on a bike stopped by Raavi’s side. One of them whistled at her and said “Oye! Lift chahiye kya? Hum drop karein?”

Shiva immediately got up in anger “Ay, gadhedon, bhaago yahan se. Bade aaye ladkiyon ko chedne waale.”

The boys drove away immediately after looking at Shiva.

“Shiva, itna gussa?” Raavi asked him in a childlike manner.

“Matlab, eve teasing galat hai naa.” He said nonchalantly.

“In general galat hai ya phir mere saath kiya issliye woh galat hai?” She asked him softly and curiously.

Shiva sat back down trying to fix the bike and ignored her question. “Ok Fixed!” He said and got up to start the bike as an ice cream vendor passed by them.

“Woh dekh Shiva. Ice cream khaana hai?” Raavi asked

“Why not? Exams khatam hone ki celebration mein. No more early mornings and late nights!” Shiva said as he headed to the ice cream stand.

He picked up 2 cones and handed one to Raavi.

Raavi looked at him and said “Shiva, agar tu finals mein first aaya na toh main tujhse kuch kehna chahati hoon.”

“Raavi, agar main first aaya toh main bhi tujhse kuch kehna chatha hoon” Shiva said.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Another update my friends!

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Ab next update jaldi chahiye mujhe Anu

Can’t wait ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Another update my friends!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Ab next update jaldi chahiye mujhe Anu

Can’t wait ❤️❤️


Ahh! thank you! will update soon! Ill give you a tag :)

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