ShiVi TS: For My Chikki - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is such a beautiful and heartwarming OS! Everything about it just made me feel so warm and happy.❤️


This version of Shiva and Raavi are so gorgeous, I'm in awe! Absolutely loved everything about them.


I've gotta be honest, father's wanting a babygirl has always been my weakness, so reading about Shiva wanting a little girl just like his Raavi did inexplicable things to my poor heart ahhh

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

I LOVE this so so so so soooooo much ❤️


Thankyou for the tag ♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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That was soo pure🥺❤

The words.. the emotions you portray through your works is ....Wow...Told you I would be more that glad to be 10%of you.🥺✊❤

I have no explanation to give to my mother as to why I am sobbing in the middle of the day......That was just so beautiful.....Though I loved the name Anaconda....🤣but anyways....

🐒❤🦎🌹🌸....Janvhi Pandya is here🥳

I know I am being really emotional but the way to explained Raavis reaction to see her baby and falling in love really reminded me of the moment I met my sibling for the first time.....she was just this tiny little thing...and a voice inside me wishpered I will always protect you....And till date no matter how much she annoys me....I still cant stop loving her....each day I fall a bit more.🥰

Loved it❤

Love you jaan🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Aviii... This is just so so so so beautiful! !!❤️

Thanks for the tag Avii!! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Why do all of them have to be such cuties 🥺

This is such a soothing balm after all the hurt that our hearts feel after watching the angst in the show !

Thank you for this gem🌺

Eagerly waiting for more ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Loved it🖤🖤🖤

Like I always do...

Waiting for more.

This was a delight🌸

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Aww... I followed a tag list based on an old story I wrote. I asked everyone to like a message there so I would tag them in the future. Including you onto the list as well Sara! 🤗


I'm glad you loved it ❤️🤗!


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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Avi, Beautiful TS with full of love, care, understanding and a journey to parenthood❤️ It is so feel good that you want to keep reading it again and again. Jahnvi Pandya, bundle of joy has finally arrived and is going to be raised by doting parents. Can’t wait to read the next part.

Couple of things to mention:

It is dedicated to Chikki, tumhari bacchi no wonder you could write a beautiful TS

Second, thing, I liked the way you wrote the line where he reveals about reading her diary accidentally and found that she wanted to name her child Jhanvi, that is where your creativity shines and gives the readers an experience as if Shiva is saying that non stop without any space.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Avi! This was beautiful and all the soft scenes have special place in my heart!!❤️❤️


The journey was very well written and I feel next phase will be of the child growing up. I've always admired the idea of writing something down from the parents perspective as they grow up and giving it to their child on the milestone moment of their life. It's something I have desired to do for my future kids and wonder if that's where you're heading too. And maybe presenting it to her this diary on her wedding day or as she begins the journey of her own motherhood.


Loved it and can't wait to read the next part!❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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WOW🥳 This is a wonderful one👏 Loved each diary entry of Raavi, loved Shiva's excitement😳 The part wid family was funny😆 Though Janhvi's hasnt really entered the story, iam already in Love wid her❤️ Waiting for you to continue Thank you for tagging me🤗

Edited by Paru95 - 4 years ago

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