The Last Ray of Hope- a Shivi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Congrats for your debut OS. 🥳

I loved this OS to the core.

You've penned down beautifully. ❤️

Felt really sad for Raavi. Loved the way you portrayed Raavi drowning in pain.

Shiva holding her broken pieces together and his promise to her were icing on the cake.

Do write more. 🤗

Thank you Meera. I am glad you liked it.

I was worried about that promise part- whether it could do justice to Shiva.

🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Annabethchase

Love this!! If you decide to write more stories then would definitely love to read more of your writing!!

Thank you fellow Percy Jackson fan . ( I love annabeth too)

Originally posted by: Madheart

Chikki 🤗🤗

This is so beautiful, I could feel Raavi's helplessness.. Loved every bit of it ❤

Keep writing more.. 😀😀

Thank you Teju🤗🤗 I am glad I was able to make you feel what I wrote

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Congratulations on your first OS, Chikki 🎉🎊

The story has come out well- Raavi's insecurities are heart breaking 💔

Thank you so much Sri. Honestly I was a bit afraid about this but feels good that you all liked it🤗

Originally posted by: JiyaGupta30

Wow... this was ur 1st shot... I loved it 🖤

U did an amazing job 🤗

Felt Raavi's emotions 😭😭 ..... u did justice to her pain👏... makers are just ignoring it showing an over enthusiastic Raavi

Shiva's resolution to bring her back ❤️

Would love to read if u will continue this

Do write more 🥳

Thank you Jiya.🤗

Yeah makers aren't developing Raavi's character to its potential.

As of now I haven't thought of continuing this

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was really nice.

Glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Congratulations for your first oS👎🏼

This was just beautiful❤️

Thank God shiva understood her and stood by her

Loved it🤗

Keep writing

Thank you ..this means a lot coming from you. I love your stories 🤗

Originally posted by: Swastika34

Chikki!! This is so beautiful!! ❤️

Thank you Swasti🤗

Originally posted by: Sugarcanes_AC

Just outstanding 😍😍😍😍 beautiful 💗

Thank you so much .glad you liked it🤗

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Congrats on your first OS Chiki! ❤️

It was lovely.. Raavi broke down finally unable to take everything, and Shiva supported her.. I hope to see this in the show too! ❤️

Thank you Aaliya🤗

I hope the show exceeds our expectations 😊