What is this feeling - Shivi OS ft Devtash [Complete] - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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went back and checked if its OS and darn it is.....

its so lovely

I wished you continued

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Min I loved this ...this Raavi was naive but she was also hyper aware and an overthinker and I like this combination

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpks1

Min, what a cute story! Raavi is not naive in reading others body language and expressions but can’t believe she cannot realize her own feelings. It will be great to have a part 2 of this where Raavi realizes her feelings for Shiva and proposes to him😃


Thank you Prema. Yes the initial idea was that but not having much time to write now means the idea might disappear. I have been writing down bits and pieces so I might change it to a two shot. 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

went back and checked if its OS and darn it is.....

its so lovely

I wished you continued


Thank you and yes if I get a chance to I definitely will. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Min...Welcome back❤️

Hope you doing well...I miss you and our interactions❤️

Thanks for writing this...I loved reading this. This was super cute and light hearted. I am so glad you did not make Raavi full dobi here...she is able to observe and realise things. I hope she realises what she feels for Shiva soon. I also loved Dev, Krish and the entire gang of friends. Their plan worked out to some extent. I really wish you write a part 2 to this.

Waiting to read more of your works....Miss you ❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb👏I loved this Raavi.....Dev-Krish combo is also very nice.....Waiting for more of your stories🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it, especially the fact that Raavi is far more observant than others can tell.


Please continue :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was a fun read 😊❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Min...Welcome back❤️

Hope you doing well...I miss you and our interactions❤️

Thanks for writing this...I loved reading this. This was super cute and light hearted. I am so glad you did not make Raavi full dobi here...she is able to observe and realise things. I hope she realises what she feels for Shiva soon. I also loved Dev, Krish and the entire gang of friends. Their plan worked out to some extent. I really wish you write a part 2 to this.

Waiting to read more of your works....Miss you ❤️🤗


Oh priya priya priya...


I want to be back but lots happening in RL so I've veen avoiding the addiction of the EDT and AT... Since i can soend hours on there without realising... Coming on quickly to read something is better for my sanity at the moment.


I miss you too!!! And our discussions... But will, be back in full form as soon as everything settles down.


I might get round to writing a part two of this (hence the open end) but it might not be as long... Or interesting 😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it ❤️ It seems incomplete so plz continue

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