Shivi TS: Pyaar ya fikar?...dono. Pt3 pg4 *completed* - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow...beautiful start❤️

Raavi is a sweet heart...I hope she gets her happiness soon...She is trying so hard to make things right❤️

Shiva...I hope he starts being soft towards Raavi...❤️

Amazing update...waiting for the next part🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 2


Raavi knew how stubborn he is & only she could handle his stubborness as well as his anger and rage, since childhood while everyone stayed away from him due to his anger and his harsh words, she always played with fire, back answering him, arguing him with deathly eye to eye glares; who better than they themselves could've handled each other...

Raavi had to make sure that he drinks the turmeric milk as it would help his wounds to heal soon because he won't be sitting around resting, he will be working for bedroom construction...she took the glass of milk and hastily kept walking as if she was chasing him and trying to catch...

R:Shiva ruk!!!!

He started running like a kid in the whole house from living room to kitchen and from kitchen to terrace, making Raavi run behind him...Raavi tried to increase the pace but all in vain,also she had to be careful as she had the glass of milk in her hand whereas he was running carefree, jumping on the objects, he was actually The Bandar, as she would always call him, her Bandar.

Shiva wasn't going to be caught easily so she analysed how he was running and thought that he would definetly go to their bedroom next and if she hid herself, to find her also he would come to bedroom only; she hid herself behind the cot in their room in a way that she was able to see him through the gaps and edge of the window but he won't be able to see her.

And as per her trick, not finding his Raavi chasing behind Shiva slowed himself and started looking here and there,he always noticed her presence and absence, it affected him in a strange way...he was getting little anxious now of where she would've disappeared suddenly, so he started walking towards kitchen and not finding her their he sighed, he started walking towards their room thinking that she must had given up and retired to sleep.He entered the room but he found it empty, he went near the bed but someone grabbed his wrist so tightly, and her voice came....

R:Pakad liya!!(with a smirk)Chal ab yeh bandar jesi harkatein bandh kar aur dudh pile jab dekho tab pareshan karta rehta hai...

(and before he could argue back she placed the edge of the glass on his lips and forcedly made him drink the whole glass in one go...such a big gulp it was that as the milk finsihed he started coughing as he felt little choked.She instantly patted his back and started blowing air in his ears to prevent his coughing...they had an eyecontact...and without breaking it, maybe subconciously her fingers went on his lips as she cleared the milk moustache he made, damn he looked so cute there..she thought to herself,as her fingers brushed on his lips as well as the side of his lips, he felt a shiver and suddenly looked away...he quickly stood up & said...

S:Dekh tujhe yeh sab natak karne ki zarurat nahi hai...ab to ghar ka bhi koi nahi dekh raha fir kyu kar rahi hai yeh mere liye fikar karne vali savitiri banne ka natak...bola tha na maine dur reh mujhse ek baar mein tere mutter jese dimag mein baat samajh nahi aati?Aur chipkali hai to kya chipakti hi rahegi...dur hattt!!!

Raavi gets extremely hurt on listening this, her eyes get teary, she feels as if her hesrt has been broken, did he really that she was pretending and she did not actually cared for him, was she so unwanted and his hatered towards her so hard that he did not see the care, the affection she has in her eyes for him, she was trying so her to make him realise her changed feelings towards him since the day he came home drunk and misunderstood her and her feelings...she gathered herself and said..

R:Tujhe yeh sab natak lagta hai Shiva?(her voice was so broke and hurted anyone could feel the amount of pain she is going through)Mera tere liye pareshan hona, teri fikar karna, tune khana nahi khaya to meri bhuk ka marjana...tujhe lagta hai...yeh sab mera dhong hai??

(Shiva still avoiding looking into her eyes)

R:Par thik hai(firmly)...maine itni koshish ki par tujhe sab natak lagta hai aur mai kuch bolungi to tu bolega ke maine thodi bola tha yeh ehsan kar esa sab....isiliye ab mai tujhe kuch nahi bolungi kyuki tujhe to kabhi mujhe samajhna hi nahi hai na koi baat nahi...

(she wipes her tear forcefully, takes her pillow and blanket and walks.)

(After listening her so hurt, Shiva was feeling really guilty and ashamed about his actions, he wanted to hug her, he wanted her to tell that how his feelings were on a big rollercoaster drive, he was more astonished on the note that as he was observing that she was able to understand his feelings when he himself wasn't but then he felt bad that how was he not able to understand her feelings, maybe she was right, he never tried to understand and realise what she felt...he felt like stopping her but then what would he say, he had run out of words now but as he extended his arm and opened his mouth to speak,she turned around and spoke...)

R:Mai tujhe samajh gai Shiva, par tu mujhe zara bhi nahi samaj paaya..

.(and leaves)

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So, here's the part 2, this was supposed to be the last part but when i started typing, I edited a lot of things, adding on more minutely so yeah, I'm uploading part 3 now or maybe super soon,I hope you guys like reading this...

Edited by Iktara22 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Outstanding 😍😍 please update soon ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it. ❤️

Do update the next chapter soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved this update❤️

Shivi run chase was super cute❤️

The last part...Raavi is hurt so much...waiting to see what Shiva does next❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing 👏💯❤


Cont soonish🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing chapter..

Raavi running behind Shiva was soo sweet..

Poor Raavi..

Cant wait for the next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3

Raavi stormed out of the room and went to the terrace just to realise that the terrace was full of construction material and the only place was the bench that too half full with bricks...she sighed and put the pillow and sat there thinking about happenings in the room, she was hurt, she did not knew why but she was deeply affected everytime when Shiva would say anything on their relation, she was not knowing what that feeling was exactly, all she knew was that he was important and his words did affect her, she was too engrossed in her thoughts that she didn't realise but saw someone offering her plate of food, her stomach grumbled but she looked up, only to find that it was Shiva, her Shiva...her heart would've skipped a beat but she could not melt so easily so she instantly looked away.

S:Voh...bhabhi fir meri class legi isiliye...tu akeli bach jaati mujhe fasaa ke..chipkali...

(she still ignored him)

S:(went on the other side where she was facing)Raavi...dekh tu khana kha le zid mat kar, bhabhi daantegi

(Raavi's heart would skip a beat everytime he called her by name)

R:Bas isiliye leke aaya?Tujhe nahi hai meri fikar, nai padta tujhe farak...yeh boldeta na unko,tu mujhe mana kar raha tha ab khud natak kyu kar raha hai?Unhi ke kehne par leke aaya hoga na...

S:Dekh tu..(gulps)apne mutter jese dimag ko mat chala tu, ekto aagai upar badi aai dianosaur jesi muh fulaake dham dham karke aagai...yeh to socha nahi hoga ke soyegi kahan?Chal kha le varna sar pe khada rahunga!

R:Nahi khana mujhe...chala ja yahan se

S:Vese to badi dinosaur banti hai mere saamne thusti rehti hai ab kya hua?

R:(gets irritated) Pehle to mai (he puts morsel in her mouth as she was speaking, she widens eyes, her heart was happy though to see him responding like this but didn't portrayed it on her face..her mouth was so full but still managed to complete the sentence)dinosaur nahi hu...huh(snatches the plate and starts eating~Shiva smiles on this)

R: Mai sirf isiliye kha rahi hu kyuki Dharadi ne bohot pyaar se khana banaya hai aaj...tujhe bachane ke liye nahi(pouts angrily)4

S:Voh sab to thik hai par yeh tu mujhe bandar bolti hai aur khud meri nakal karti hai maine chat pe jake sone ki...bandariya kahi ki!

(Takes her pillow and blanket)

R:Haan tu hai bandar aur te saath reh rehke na mai bhi bandariya ban gai tujhse pyar jo kar bethi(in one go)

(Raavi just realised what she spoke in the whole flow and she was like "Shit shit shit yeh kya boldiya Raavi tun e ab yeh chedta rahega is pe")

Shiva stood their in disbelief, shocked on hearing what she just spoke was not small or normal, it was really big...was he elated?shocked?emotional?..he didn't knew..he stood there staring her...& she avoiding him...he stood there for few minutes..)

A gust of wind passed, both of them had goosebumps...both had this strange feeling since few days now but unconciously Raavi blabbered that out...there was pin drop silence as they were avoiding each other but it was still hell awkward because they didn't knew how to react and what to say...Shiva finally said breaking the silence..

S:Niche aajana...matlab...sone..mujhe esa kuch...par...neend nahi aayegi mujhe...mera matlab tujhe...aur voh...vohhh us din mai...tujhe yahi...(gulps)kuch nahi niche aajana...(he stormed out)

Raavi had no choice but to enter the room only to find him sleeping on the cushion bed she made for him, she smiled as he didnot destroyed it like the other time in haveli,but she was continuously having goosebumps and then the way he reacted...so hesitantly, she had no idea what was going on...she quietly went and lied facing the other side...after a few minutes, she realised her body getting coverd with the blanket and a shiver went down her spines as she heard...

S:Fikar aur pyar dono hai vese...mujhe bhi...

(Her heart skipped a beat as she heard this, and felt him kiss her hair and was going to hug her but stopped as he hesitated which she saw and instantly moved a little backwards comforting her self more in his embrace and he then hugged her from the back...both of them felt contented as they were going to begin a new journey in their lives, with each other...)



So finallyyy it's done lol....now though I want to write so many things but will get back after my exams post mid august, I hope you guys like it!Happy reading!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awww I loved this ..it is so sweet

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was a very sweet read.

Liked it a lotttt🍁🍁🍁

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